On this one the face could be hidden more, almost so you donʼt notice it at first; really hide her rather then the light streak across

her eyes. The eyes could still be alight, giving the hunter effect but also creating a nice design as the eyes would create a sort of triangle with the LWL logo.

In a final design version it would be good if the jungle had a lot of detail drawn in. Really put in detail into the leafs and vines and plants, to make it more intricate and striking.

The design sums up a lot of the film, but in a different way to the obvious fire imagery; lurking dangerously in the jungle.

This links well to the movie, connecting with the idea of revolution and the games, as well as incorporating the MockingJay symbol. It fits with the posters and promotional images the film has out.

The hand drawn flames stood out as something that would be nice and striking in the cover.

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It maybe fits the movie a little too well, and so becomes a bit plain; like itʼs the obvious choice and not the most creative idea.