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Exam Corrections Ice Age II

TASK

Download this presentation in your notebookCorrect as many sentences as you can. There

is one incorrect sentence from each of youUpload it to the wiki again before the end of

the class.https://fluwiki.wikispaces.com/Error+correction+exerciseDo not forget to CHANGE THE TITLE: Write

the names of your group, and the members who worked in this

If someone was missing, or did not contribute, you should NOT write his/her name

Teacher tip

Remember you can use some of these sentences for your Learning Diary!

Example

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Ellie I like Mannie Ellie LikeS Mannie A sentence cannot have two subjects

The 3rd person singular needs an S in present simple

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Paris Hilton is a girl very beautiful

Paris Hilton is a very beautiful girl.

The adjective is placed before the noun.

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Sid it is a lazy Sid is a Lazy. No need to put a pronoun if you put a noun.

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Ice Age II to start when the ice “se descongela”

Ice Age II start when the ice thawed.

“Se descongela” is spanish.

“To” don’t use.

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Ellie think she possums

Ellie thinks that she is a possum.

The noun need the “is” and “a”.

The sentence needs to have "that" for to make sense.

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Sid loves sing and talk too much

Sid loves sing and talk.

"Love" is the maximum amount like something, so, no need the "too much".

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Diego, Mannie and Sid is good friend.

Diego, Mannie and Sid are good friends.

It’s in plural.

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At first sight he is a lot of kind.

At first sight he is a lot of kind.

“A lot of” is for countable or uncountable.

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In the Ice Age II have a very characters.

In Ice Age II there are many characters.

It’s more appropriate to put "there are" than "have"

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Manny search her herd.

Manny search his herd.

Manny is a man. But “her” is for female. So “his” is for male.

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I’m a prey of the love. I’m a prey of love. No need put “the”.

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Ellie she very confused

Ellie is very confused. If we already had "Ellie" is a silly thing put "she", because somehow, it ’s the same.

If we set "is" the sentence makes more sense.

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You prefer either a ice cream or a rattle snakes.

You prefer either ice cream or rattle snakes.

“A” is for nouns countable.

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Either study english for next day or play PS3

Either Study english or play PS3 for next day.

The time you placed at the end.

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Ellie she is shy and thinks that it is a possum

Ellie is shy and thinks that she is a possum.

This person put a two nouns.

It is for of objects, and she is a animal.

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Many is fat but and Ellie like.

Manny is fat but Ellie likes that.

“but” with “and” is harmful to eyes.

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Possums are heavies. The possums are heavies.

In this case,we put “the” initally for be a spelling rule.

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I don’t eat junk food never

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Manny is a bad because not have family.

Manny is bad because he haven't family.

Need a pronom after of because.

Bad can’t have “a” because don’t is a noun, is a adjective.

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Mannie and Ellie they are very big

Mannie and Ellie are very big.

If there are "Mannie and Ellie" already don't necessary "they" because it’s practically the same.

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Diego a fraid of water Diego have afraid of water.

“afraid” goes along.

We have to put "have" to give reasoning to the sentence.

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His friends are intelligents and not speak with he.

His friends are intelligents and don’t speak with him.

It’s more correct to put "do" than "not“.

In these situations, we put "him" not “He”.