Organizing writing for Clarity, Conciseness and Coherence CM 1401.
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? All inputs are combined by
engineers to create a product.
: Engineers combine all
inputs to create a product.
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?Three phases of analysis are
included in their approach.
: Their approach includes
three phases of analysis.
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? A statistical comparison is made of
the proposed procedures withTaguchi's two-step procedure.
: The proposed proceduresand Taguchi's two-step
procedure are statisticallycompared.
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? A more efficient combination
among the factor levels is achievedwhen the control factor iscontinuous.
: The factor levels are moreefficiently combined when thecontrol factor is continuous.
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?Factors causing saturation include
temperature, volume and weight.
: Temperature, volume and
weight cause saturation.
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?The Taguchi approach entails
minimizing the average quadraticloss.
: The Taguchi approachminimizes the average quadratic
loss.
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?There have been a considerable
amount of studies on robust design.
: Robust design has
received considerable attention.
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?There is a significant difference in
control levels for the parametersettings.
: The parameter settingssignificantly differ in control
levels.
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?The committee made a decision on
the question as to using anindividual mouse or a trackballwould be more productive.
: The committee decidedwhether using a mouse or atrackball in the workplace would
be more productive.
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? As a general rule, mice andtrackballs serve the function of
being both used for the samereason.
: As a rule, mice andtrackballs are both used for thesame reason.
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