Common grammar mistakes

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Common mistakes A

• Today is Jerry unlucky day, because he tire bomb.• Today is Jerry’s unlucky day, because he gets a flat

tire.• He go donw the car then he build a tire. Then sky

is rain. Today is his not day.• He goes under the car, and then he changes the

tire. Suddenly it rains… Today is not his day.• His birthday is unlucky.• He is unlucky on his birthday.

Common mistakes B• On the road, he get a flat tire, he is next to Taipie 101, but

when Tom is fix the car the ran come he cat find the key , he is very nervous, because he need to go home and eating a good dinner. So he is very angry to the car. He think he need to change the car and today he is unlucky.

• He gets a flat tire on the road when he is next to Taipie 101. But when Tom is fixing the car, suddenly it starts raining. He can’t find the key of his car , so he is very nervous. Because he needs to go home and eat delicious dinner. So he is very angry with the car. He thinks he need to change the car. Today he is unlucky.

Common mistakes C• One day, Jojo get a flat tire when he goes home. He change a

tire, he think “My car is too bad and old!” After is rain, he is very angry. He say ”Today is my birthday. But I am so miserable.” When he change tire over, he can’t find his key of the car! He say” I want to hit this break car!” So he takes a taxi to go home.

• One day, Jojo gets a flat tire when he goes home. He changes the tire. He thinks his car is too bad and old! After is rain, he is very angry. Today is his miserable birthday. After he changes tire over, he can’t find his key of the car! He is mad and he doesn’t want the terrible car anymore. Finally he takes a taxi home.

Common mistakes D• Next, He car’s tire is broken, and he very angry.

Then, He car’s tire is falling down and It’s a rainy on the sametime. After, he’s key is gone. finally, he is not happy. (only 40 words)

• Suddenly, the tire of his car is broken, so he is very angry. Then, He car’s tire is falling down and it’s raining at the same time. After that, he finds his key is gone. Finally?, he is not happy.

Common mistakes E• It is be a big rainy. After, he think quick back

home. but he have a big terrible.• There was a big rain./ It was raining. So he wanted

to go back home quickly.• One day. Tom. He on the way home from work

His car is so old. He change his tire, It’s rainy. He wan go home. He think his mother is wait to him . He sank to day is so bad.

Good examples

• One day, a boy called Jerry. He was going home by car. Suddenly he stoped. He said “Ohh, I got flat tire.” So he opened the door and go fixed. It’s rainy now, he quickly changed his flat tire. When he finished fixed, he forgot the keys of the cars inside the car.

• One day, a boy called Jerry was going home by car. Suddenly he stopped. He thought he got a flat tire. So he opened the door and fixed it. It’s rainy now, so he quickly changed his flat tire. When he finished fixing, he forgot the keys of the car were inside the car. (ending?)

Good examples

• Jack has a car, but he doesn’t clean and wash his car. One day, Jack drives her car to the supermarket, but his car flat tire on the road. So he takes a new tire to change it. When he finish, he wants to get on the car. Now, Jack has a big trouble. He puts the key on the car.(ending?)