7/24/2019 Chavez Corrected Letter

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(Recipient's address here) (Youraddress here)

Dear Sir/Madam,

The aim of my letter is to raise my dissatisfactionover the public transport service in this city

The !rst reason is the "ay "hich the bus drivers drive their buses #sincerely consider them to be a dan$er for all users of the road

They should be $iven proper trainin$ before they drive

Secondly, the buses are too old and uncomfortable, the seats arebro%en, they loo% as if a do$ has bitten them, and the $lass on the

"indo"s is often crac%ed The sound of the en$ines often ma%e thebus sound a"ful, people are scared because of this

To ma%e matters "orse no" you "ant to char$e more money for theservice My nei$hbours and # totally disa$ree "ith your decision,therefore "e re&uest improvin$ the service before as%in$ for a raisein the cost of it

# epect that after readin$ this letter of complaint you "ill consider

an improvement in the service and

hope a reply from you as soonas possible

Your sincerely,

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You should focus no" on certain $rammar structures (use ofin!nitive or in$ form of verb) and "idenin$ your vocabulary