Changes made due to audience feedback

I have made changes to my magazine based on feedback given by the audience to make the magazine

more appropriate and better for them allowing it to target the audience better. This would make them

more likely to buy the magazine because of the added appropriateness to them.

Front Cover- Black Text

• The original is on the left with the edited on the right.• My audience feedback suggested that the black text

became white text. I made this change because my audience wanted it and therefore implementing this change made the cover more appropriate for the audience making them more likely to buy the magazine.

• I think this change has been successful because it removes heavy connotations of metal and heavy metal that the black text gave. It also stands out better against the main photo and therefore it’s better because it grabs the audience’s attention more and therefore they are more likely to buy the magazine because of this.

Front Cover- Moving the win pull

• The left shows the original with the right showing the move pull.

• I moved the pull because my audience wanted it and therefore implementing this change made the cover more appropriate for the audience making them more likely to buy the magazine.

• I think this change has been successful. It has allowed more attention to be placed on the main photo, which is the key selling point on the cover, and this allows the audience to take the main photo more into account and are therefore more likely to buy the magazine because they would be paying more attention to the photo.

Contents- moving the article box

• The left shows the original with the right showing the move pull.

• I moved the box because my audience wanted it and therefore implementing this change made the contents more read the contents and articles the contents lists.

• I think this change has been successful. It has allowed more attention to be placed on the main photo, which is the main element of my contents page and this allows the audience to take the main photo more into account and pay more attention to it, which is the purpose of the main photo.