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    Commercial CorrespondenceUnit 4

    Offers and

    Cover Letters of Offers

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    What is an offer?

    An offeris a promise to supply goods orservices on the terms stated.

    Usually the offerer is the seller, and theofferee is the buyer.

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    Types of offers

    Firm offer

    Also called Quotation with qualifyingstatements

    Free offer (offer without engagement)

    Also called Quotation

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    Firm offer

    Withqualifying statements, usually abouttime validity

    For acceptance within 14 days. The prices quoted will apply only to

    orders received on or before 31 March.

    Usually made to one buyer only Without sales confirmation

    Notlegally binding until accepted

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    Free offer(offer without engagement)

    Withoutqualifying statements, providingnegotiable terms by using adverbs normally or

    usually, or by asking the customer to confirm. May be made to several buyers.

    Notlegally binding even when acceptedby the

    buyer. Only binding when the seller, after receipt of the

    buyers acceptance, confirms that acceptance

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    Free offer(offer without engagement)

    Normallywe allow a 23% trade discount

    off net prices with payment on a documentsagainst payment basis. Please let us know ifthis arrangement is satisfactory.

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    Parts of an offer

    1. Opening

    Express thanks for the enquiry and/or

    pleasure in offering2. Main message

    Mention at least 7 terms and conditions

    3. Closing

    Express hope for orders and futurebusiness

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    Opening

    Free offer:

    We thank you very much for your enquiry

    of (asking) for and are happy/ glad/pleased to make you an offer on thefollowing terms and conditions.

    We and take pleasure in making youan offer for the said goods.

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    Opening

    Firm offer:

    We thank you for and are happy to offer

    firm until 25 March 20__ on the terms andconditions as follows.

    We are pleased to make you a firm offer,subject to acceptancewithin 21 days, for 10

    machines

    We thank you to make you an offerwhichis valid until October 20__ on the following

    terms and conditions. 9

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    Opening

    Firm offer: Useful expressions

    We are pleased to make you an offer which

    is valid until We are pleased to offer firm until

    This offer is firm for 20 days

    This offer remains open for acceptancewithin 15 days

    This offer is subject to acceptance within

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    Main message

    Mention at least 7 terms and conditions:

    1. Name of the goods

    2. Quality and specification3. Quantity

    4. Details of prices

    5. Packing and marking

    6. Delivery

    7. Terms of payment11

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    Main message

    More terms and conditions with machines :

    8. Technical documents

    9. Warranty or guarantee

    Others:

    Discounts

    Offering items not asked for

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    Main message

    1. Name of the goods/commodity

    woolen sweaters, style L-29

    Style L-29 woolen sweatersL-29 woolen sweaters/ woolen sweaters L-29

    washing machines, model TD236Model TD236 washing machines

    TD236 washing machines

    washing machines TD236 13

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    Main message

    2. Quality and specification

    Quality and specification:as per samples

    Quality: as per enclosed technical description

    Specification: as per enclosed catalogue No. 23/TL

    3. Quantity

    1,000 pieces/ units/ items/ sets

    600 tons/ metric tons/ MT tons

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    Main message

    4. Prices

    Price: 110.00 per unit CIF Hai Phong including

    packing5 elements:

    1) Currency: / $/ GBP/ USD/ VND

    2)Amount:110.00

    3) Unit price: per unit/ per 1,000 units/ per ton

    4) Terms of price: CIF Hai Phong

    5) Including/excluding packing15

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    Main message

    4. Prices

    INCOTERMS: 4 groups

    Group C (CFR, CIF, CPT, and CIP) Group D (DAF, DES, DEQ, DDP, and DDU)

    Group E (EXW)

    Group F (FCA, FAS, and FOB)

    Others:

    Carriage Paid (C/P): charges paid by the sender

    Carriage Forward (C/F): charges paid by the receiver

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    Main message

    4. Prices

    INCOTERMS

    30,000.00 CIF Hong Kong (the price includesall delivery costs to Hong Kongcost,insurance and freight)

    USD35,000.00 FOB Rotterdam (the priceincludes delivery costs to when the goods areon board ship at Rotterdam)

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    Main message

    5. Packing and marking

    Packing: in export customary packing

    Packing: in seaworthy cartonsmarked/numbered 1-6

    Packing: in seaworthy wooden cases for

    long voyage Marking: upon the buyers instructions

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    Main message

    6. Delivery

    Delivery: in one lot/ shipment in December

    08, 20__

    for immediate shipment

    The machines can be dispatched within 6

    months from receipt of your formal order. Shipment: within 3-4 weeks of receivingorder

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    Main message

    7. Terms of payment

    Bank draft/ bankers draft

    Bank transfer (mail, telegraphic)

    Bill of exchange (sight draft or term draft)

    Sight draft: a bill of exchange payable

    immediately upon acceptance (accept to pay)

    60 days (after) sight: payable within 60 daysof acceptance (60 D/S)

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    Main message

    7. Terms of payment

    Cheque

    Letter of credit (L/C)

    at sight or at days sight

    Revocable L/C: that can be cancelled

    Irrevocable L/C: that cannot be cancelled

    Cash on delivery (COD)

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    Main message

    7. Methods of payment

    Payment: (to be made/effected) in US dollars

    (pounds sterling)by an irrevocable letter of credit(at sight/at 60 days sight) to be opened with(via/through/at) Lloyds Bank, London, 15 daysbefore (prior to) the shipment, valid for 45 days,

    to the account of Vietcombank,in our favour (infavour of the seller)for the total value of thegoods to be shipped.

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    Main message

    8. Technical documents

    Two copies of users manual to be

    supplied with each unit of goods.9. Warranty/Guarantee

    12 months from use or 18 months fromdespatch/dispatch.

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    Closing

    Expressing hope for orders and future business

    We look forward to your early order.

    Thank you for your interest. We look forwardto hearing from you soon.

    We hope very much that we can reach

    agreement on the terms quoted. We look forward to the opportunity of doing

    business with you.

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    Practice 1

    1. Thank you for your enquiry of 1 Decemberfor

    (asking for) Lao Cai apatite. (Hoang Thach cement,kitchen utensils, rattan chairs, and woolen carpetsof various types/ designs)

    2. In reply (response) toyour enquiry of October 20

    asking for tinned/canned peanuts, pineapples,cucumbers, we are happy to offer you these threeitems on favorable conditions.

    3. We are pleased to receive your enquiry of 14November for anise and pine oil.As requested, wehave already sent you the samples by (parcel) post.

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    Practice 1

    4. We thank you for your enquiry of 8 October for our

    vaseline and are pleased to make you a firm offer,(which is) subject to acceptance within 10 days, for1,000 tons of vaseline at the price of USD815.00 perton, CIF London.

    5. Weare interested in the purchase of 10 Model X30pumps, and 10 Model K25 pumps. We wonder if youcould/ can offer usa 5 % discount (a discount of5%)on such an amount.

    6. Weregret our inability(that we are unable) to giveyou a discount on such a small quantity. If you arewilling to place an order for 30 pumps, we will (are

    pleased to)give you a 2.5% quantity discount.

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    Practice 1

    7. The delivery is to be made as soon as possible and

    not later than1 December.(We would like you to deliver the goods asap andnot later than 1 December.)

    8. We will try our best to deliver the goods in mid

    November or by the end of that month at thelatest.

    9. Regarding(With regard to) terms of payments, we

    suggest (stress) that it should be made by anirrevocable letter of credit.

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    Practice 1

    10.Payment: by an irrevocable letter of credit to be

    opened at (through/with)Tokyo CommercialBank, 15 days before the shipment at the latest,valid for 30 days, to the account of Vietcombankin our favorfor the total value of the goods to be

    shipped.

    11.We would highly appreciate it if you could deliverhalf of the ordered goods immediately, the rest

    will be shippedin two weeks time

    .

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    Practice 2

    Dear Mr X

    Re: Rush MatsWe thank you for your enquiry of 25 June 20__and are happy (glad) to learn that you are

    particularly interested in (the purchase of)ourrush mats. We are pleased to make you an offer,subject to our final confirmation (acceptance)upon receipt of your order, on the following termsand conditions:

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    Practice 2

    1. Commodity: fancy rush mats (patterned rush mats)

    2. Quantity: 5,000 pieces3. Specification: as per enclosed specification

    4. Price: 1.00/piece, CIF London, including packing

    5. Packing: 20 pieces to be packed in one bale, which

    is wrapped in strong rush-mating and steel hooped.6. Delivery: in one lot in August 20__

    7. Payment: in pounds sterling by an irrevocable letterof credit to be opened at (through/with) the

    Commercial Bank of London to the account ofVietcombank in our favour, 15 days before (prior to)the shipment.

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    Practice 2

    We look forward to your prompt order and

    guarantee that (assure you that) any of yourorders will be given our best attention.

    Yours sincerely

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    Practice 3

    The Vietnam national Sundries Import and Export Corporation

    36 Ba Trieu Street, Hanoi, Vietnam

    Tel: Fax: Email:

    Your ref: 17 August 20__

    Our ref: NT/123

    24 August 20__

    Mr John Smith

    M.D. Edward and Co., Ltd

    Finewell House

    8 Finsbury Square

    London EC2

    England 32

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    Practice 3

    Dear Mr Smith

    We thank you for your inquiry of 17 August 20__

    (asking) for our table tennis bats, model VS 44TD,

    and badminton bats, model VB 50MT. We would

    like to offer firmuntil 3 September our badmintonbats on the following terms and conditions:

    1. Commodity: VB 50MT badminton bats

    2. Specification: as per enclosed catalogue No.22/95VS

    3. Quantity: 500 pairs33

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    Practice 3

    4. Price: USD2.00 per piece FOB Haiphong port

    including packing5. Packing: in export customary packing

    6. Marking: upon buyers instructions

    7. Delivery: in one lot in October 208. Payment: in US dollars by an irrevocable letter

    of credit to be opened with ABC Bank, London,

    15 days prior to the shipment, valid for 45 days,to the account of DEF Bank, in our favour for

    the total value of the goods to be shipped.

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    Practice 3

    We regret that the VS 44TD table tennis bats are out

    of stock. However, we would offer you Model VS45MH of the same quality on similar conditions with

    Model VS 44TD and at the price of USD8.00 each.

    We hope you will find our terms and conditionssatisfactory. We are looking forward to your order

    soon.

    Yours sincerely

    Nguyen Thanh

    Export Manager35