CC Unit 4, Offers
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Commercial CorrespondenceUnit 4
Offers and
Cover Letters of Offers
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What is an offer?
An offeris a promise to supply goods orservices on the terms stated.
Usually the offerer is the seller, and theofferee is the buyer.
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Types of offers
Firm offer
Also called Quotation with qualifyingstatements
Free offer (offer without engagement)
Also called Quotation
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Firm offer
Withqualifying statements, usually abouttime validity
For acceptance within 14 days. The prices quoted will apply only to
orders received on or before 31 March.
Usually made to one buyer only Without sales confirmation
Notlegally binding until accepted
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Free offer(offer without engagement)
Withoutqualifying statements, providingnegotiable terms by using adverbs normally or
usually, or by asking the customer to confirm. May be made to several buyers.
Notlegally binding even when acceptedby the
buyer. Only binding when the seller, after receipt of the
buyers acceptance, confirms that acceptance
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Free offer(offer without engagement)
Normallywe allow a 23% trade discount
off net prices with payment on a documentsagainst payment basis. Please let us know ifthis arrangement is satisfactory.
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Parts of an offer
1. Opening
Express thanks for the enquiry and/or
pleasure in offering2. Main message
Mention at least 7 terms and conditions
3. Closing
Express hope for orders and futurebusiness
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Opening
Free offer:
We thank you very much for your enquiry
of (asking) for and are happy/ glad/pleased to make you an offer on thefollowing terms and conditions.
We and take pleasure in making youan offer for the said goods.
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Opening
Firm offer:
We thank you for and are happy to offer
firm until 25 March 20__ on the terms andconditions as follows.
We are pleased to make you a firm offer,subject to acceptancewithin 21 days, for 10
machines
We thank you to make you an offerwhichis valid until October 20__ on the following
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Opening
Firm offer: Useful expressions
We are pleased to make you an offer which
is valid until We are pleased to offer firm until
This offer is firm for 20 days
This offer remains open for acceptancewithin 15 days
This offer is subject to acceptance within
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Main message
Mention at least 7 terms and conditions:
1. Name of the goods
2. Quality and specification3. Quantity
4. Details of prices
5. Packing and marking
6. Delivery
7. Terms of payment11
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Main message
More terms and conditions with machines :
8. Technical documents
9. Warranty or guarantee
Others:
Discounts
Offering items not asked for
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Main message
1. Name of the goods/commodity
woolen sweaters, style L-29
Style L-29 woolen sweatersL-29 woolen sweaters/ woolen sweaters L-29
washing machines, model TD236Model TD236 washing machines
TD236 washing machines
washing machines TD236 13
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Main message
2. Quality and specification
Quality and specification:as per samples
Quality: as per enclosed technical description
Specification: as per enclosed catalogue No. 23/TL
3. Quantity
1,000 pieces/ units/ items/ sets
600 tons/ metric tons/ MT tons
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Main message
4. Prices
Price: 110.00 per unit CIF Hai Phong including
packing5 elements:
1) Currency: / $/ GBP/ USD/ VND
2)Amount:110.00
3) Unit price: per unit/ per 1,000 units/ per ton
4) Terms of price: CIF Hai Phong
5) Including/excluding packing15
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Main message
4. Prices
INCOTERMS: 4 groups
Group C (CFR, CIF, CPT, and CIP) Group D (DAF, DES, DEQ, DDP, and DDU)
Group E (EXW)
Group F (FCA, FAS, and FOB)
Others:
Carriage Paid (C/P): charges paid by the sender
Carriage Forward (C/F): charges paid by the receiver
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Main message
4. Prices
INCOTERMS
30,000.00 CIF Hong Kong (the price includesall delivery costs to Hong Kongcost,insurance and freight)
USD35,000.00 FOB Rotterdam (the priceincludes delivery costs to when the goods areon board ship at Rotterdam)
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Main message
5. Packing and marking
Packing: in export customary packing
Packing: in seaworthy cartonsmarked/numbered 1-6
Packing: in seaworthy wooden cases for
long voyage Marking: upon the buyers instructions
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Main message
6. Delivery
Delivery: in one lot/ shipment in December
08, 20__
for immediate shipment
The machines can be dispatched within 6
months from receipt of your formal order. Shipment: within 3-4 weeks of receivingorder
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Main message
7. Terms of payment
Bank draft/ bankers draft
Bank transfer (mail, telegraphic)
Bill of exchange (sight draft or term draft)
Sight draft: a bill of exchange payable
immediately upon acceptance (accept to pay)
60 days (after) sight: payable within 60 daysof acceptance (60 D/S)
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Main message
7. Terms of payment
Cheque
Letter of credit (L/C)
at sight or at days sight
Revocable L/C: that can be cancelled
Irrevocable L/C: that cannot be cancelled
Cash on delivery (COD)
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Main message
7. Methods of payment
Payment: (to be made/effected) in US dollars
(pounds sterling)by an irrevocable letter of credit(at sight/at 60 days sight) to be opened with(via/through/at) Lloyds Bank, London, 15 daysbefore (prior to) the shipment, valid for 45 days,
to the account of Vietcombank,in our favour (infavour of the seller)for the total value of thegoods to be shipped.
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Main message
8. Technical documents
Two copies of users manual to be
supplied with each unit of goods.9. Warranty/Guarantee
12 months from use or 18 months fromdespatch/dispatch.
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Closing
Expressing hope for orders and future business
We look forward to your early order.
Thank you for your interest. We look forwardto hearing from you soon.
We hope very much that we can reach
agreement on the terms quoted. We look forward to the opportunity of doing
business with you.
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Practice 1
1. Thank you for your enquiry of 1 Decemberfor
(asking for) Lao Cai apatite. (Hoang Thach cement,kitchen utensils, rattan chairs, and woolen carpetsof various types/ designs)
2. In reply (response) toyour enquiry of October 20
asking for tinned/canned peanuts, pineapples,cucumbers, we are happy to offer you these threeitems on favorable conditions.
3. We are pleased to receive your enquiry of 14November for anise and pine oil.As requested, wehave already sent you the samples by (parcel) post.
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Practice 1
4. We thank you for your enquiry of 8 October for our
vaseline and are pleased to make you a firm offer,(which is) subject to acceptance within 10 days, for1,000 tons of vaseline at the price of USD815.00 perton, CIF London.
5. Weare interested in the purchase of 10 Model X30pumps, and 10 Model K25 pumps. We wonder if youcould/ can offer usa 5 % discount (a discount of5%)on such an amount.
6. Weregret our inability(that we are unable) to giveyou a discount on such a small quantity. If you arewilling to place an order for 30 pumps, we will (are
pleased to)give you a 2.5% quantity discount.
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Practice 1
7. The delivery is to be made as soon as possible and
not later than1 December.(We would like you to deliver the goods asap andnot later than 1 December.)
8. We will try our best to deliver the goods in mid
November or by the end of that month at thelatest.
9. Regarding(With regard to) terms of payments, we
suggest (stress) that it should be made by anirrevocable letter of credit.
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Practice 1
10.Payment: by an irrevocable letter of credit to be
opened at (through/with)Tokyo CommercialBank, 15 days before the shipment at the latest,valid for 30 days, to the account of Vietcombankin our favorfor the total value of the goods to be
shipped.
11.We would highly appreciate it if you could deliverhalf of the ordered goods immediately, the rest
will be shippedin two weeks time
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Practice 2
Dear Mr X
Re: Rush MatsWe thank you for your enquiry of 25 June 20__and are happy (glad) to learn that you are
particularly interested in (the purchase of)ourrush mats. We are pleased to make you an offer,subject to our final confirmation (acceptance)upon receipt of your order, on the following termsand conditions:
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Practice 2
1. Commodity: fancy rush mats (patterned rush mats)
2. Quantity: 5,000 pieces3. Specification: as per enclosed specification
4. Price: 1.00/piece, CIF London, including packing
5. Packing: 20 pieces to be packed in one bale, which
is wrapped in strong rush-mating and steel hooped.6. Delivery: in one lot in August 20__
7. Payment: in pounds sterling by an irrevocable letterof credit to be opened at (through/with) the
Commercial Bank of London to the account ofVietcombank in our favour, 15 days before (prior to)the shipment.
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Practice 2
We look forward to your prompt order and
guarantee that (assure you that) any of yourorders will be given our best attention.
Yours sincerely
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Practice 3
The Vietnam national Sundries Import and Export Corporation
36 Ba Trieu Street, Hanoi, Vietnam
Tel: Fax: Email:
Your ref: 17 August 20__
Our ref: NT/123
24 August 20__
Mr John Smith
M.D. Edward and Co., Ltd
Finewell House
8 Finsbury Square
London EC2
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Dear Mr Smith
We thank you for your inquiry of 17 August 20__
(asking) for our table tennis bats, model VS 44TD,
and badminton bats, model VB 50MT. We would
like to offer firmuntil 3 September our badmintonbats on the following terms and conditions:
1. Commodity: VB 50MT badminton bats
2. Specification: as per enclosed catalogue No.22/95VS
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4. Price: USD2.00 per piece FOB Haiphong port
including packing5. Packing: in export customary packing
6. Marking: upon buyers instructions
7. Delivery: in one lot in October 208. Payment: in US dollars by an irrevocable letter
of credit to be opened with ABC Bank, London,
15 days prior to the shipment, valid for 45 days,to the account of DEF Bank, in our favour for
the total value of the goods to be shipped.
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Practice 3
We regret that the VS 44TD table tennis bats are out
of stock. However, we would offer you Model VS45MH of the same quality on similar conditions with
Model VS 44TD and at the price of USD8.00 each.
We hope you will find our terms and conditionssatisfactory. We are looking forward to your order
soon.
Yours sincerely
Nguyen Thanh
Export Manager35