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    27

    No, we know things about him but we don't really know

    anything about his personality of what he likes, ect.

    It is very sad and a little depressing, I'm notsure if that is the mood you were going for

    or not though. The girlfriend is leaving

    Very interesting; have to keep

    watching!

    27

    All I know about that character is that her boyfriend hasleft her. There are not enough details to connect with oridentify the character

    I think everything goes to fast; it would bebetter if there are more details moving to different country

    Probably will not keep watching; donot feel connected

    27 kinda but i could connect with the character yes but maybe explain more girl leaving the country --Select--

    27I wasn't able to connect to the character in the first actyet!

    I think there should be more characterdevelopment in the beginning! Mykala is leaving the country

    Could be good...will keep watching alitte more and then decide

    27 Maybe describe more of the charactersI like how her introduction is kind of a storyand the rising action is good. The girl leaving

    Could be good...will keep watching alitte more and then decide

    27

    Well, maybe some of us will identify with the feeling of

    love..? However I don't think all high school studentshave gone through true love..... But I guess they wouldsympathize.

    yes, explains throughly main character'semotionlessness and stress from school Mikayla leaves the country

    Could be good...will keep watching alitte more and then decide

    27There isn't enough information about the main actor. Act Ineeds to be slightly longer.

    There was a sufficient amount ofinformation. Since this is a music video, itdoes lead to Act II. Leaving the Country

    Could be good...will keep watching alitte more and then decide

    27Yes, the character's characteristic was applied in thebeginning very well.

    I feel like before the flashback, a scene canbe just a bit longer so that the setting andcharacters are clear. Leaving the country

    Could be good...will keep watching alitte more and then decide

    77Yes there was enough information portrayed about themain character. I felt like I sort of knew him.

    Yes, I really liked the beginning of the film

    because it made me want to watch more ofthe film to find out why the main characterwas in a room with a man taking notesabout him. It's not confusing. Main character goes to the party

    Very interesting; have to keepwatching!

    27Yes. But there should be more information about theactor.

    Yes there was because it clearly shows itin the beginning and the flashback. Mikayla's leaving the country

    Very interesting; have to keepwatching!

    27 YesYes, good idea to open the film with themain conflict. The girl is leaving the country --Select--

    27 Yes, noyes, because she made a huge impact onhow macella is leaving the country. She was leaving

    Could be good...will keep watching alitte more and then decide

    27

    I think there should be more information about thecharacter in act1 because the audience has to connectwith the character from the start to stay interested.

    There were definitely enough informationto lead to the rising action.

    the main character ;eaves thecountry.

    Could be good...will keep watching alitte more and then decide

    27Yes. I couldn't quite connect with the main characterthough.

    I like how the first scene starts off with aproblem of the girl leaving. girl leaving

    Could be good...will keep watching alitte more and then decide

    27 yes yes, it is a good start of the film She is leavig the countryCould be good...will keep watching alitte more and then decide

    17 Yes.

    She did a good job explaining therelationship between the daughter and herdad. no

    Could be good...will keep watching alitte more and then decide

    17 Yes, I can understand the characterreally good job with it, i can relate to theawkward family eating part dog

    Could be good...will keep watching alitte more and then decide

    Presenter'sAssigned

    CodeNumber

    Did you feel there was enough info portrayed about themain actor? Did you connect or could you identify with

    the main character?

    Was there enough story background on thesetting, situation, and characters in Act I to

    efficiently lead into the rising action andconflict in Act II?

    What was the catalst event?

    20 second decision. How muchinterest would you have in watching

    this film past 20 seconds puttingaside any bias.

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    17yes it was well explained, i could connect with the storyreally well yes, it sounds really interesting dad doesn't give her enough love

    Could be good...will keep watching alitte more and then decide

    17There waas enough information about the maincharacter. It's a cute story.... She feels the emptiness

    Very interesting; have to keepwatching!

    17There was enough information about the main characteras i could imagine the awkwardness between the family. yes. It had enough information. the character's not loved

    Very interesting; have to keepwatching!

    17 Yes. We can see what kind of girl she is. Yes it's described very well.She wants attention from her dadbut he won't give it to her.

    Could be good...will keep watching alitte more and then decide

    17

    I could feel the sorrow and jealousy of the maincharacter. I feel sympathy for her. She is rejected by hisdad because of the dog.

    Yes there was enough background. goodstoryline flows well.

    realize that dog is getting moreattention from her dad.

    Very interesting; have to keepwatching!

    70 The characters were described well. I like her introduction feelings the emptiness

    Could be good...will keep watching a

    litte more and then decide

    17

    The girl seems to be shy and feels unloved andunwanted. She takes comfort in the dog but doesn't seemto get along well with the father. She does seem to be onokay terms with the mother.

    The family seems very awkward, the daddoesn't seem to know how to interact withthe daughter very well, the mother appearsto care and the daughter seems to be veryshy and lonesome.

    Dad chooses the dog over thedaughter

    Not sure...50/50...maybe will keepwatching, maybe not

    17 Good job. Make sure to show clear emotions.The beginning is very odd, and I want tofind out more about what happens later on.

    The main character realizes thatthe dog is getting more attention

    Could be good...will keep watching alitte more and then decide

    17 Yes, she is lonelky YesDad choosing the dog instead ofhis daughter

    Very interesting; have to keepwatching!

    17 Yes: disappointment and do Awkwardness with the family sets the tone. feels empty (dog walk)Very interesting; have to keepwatching!

    17 Yes, the awkward relationship among the family Yes, Dog gets more attention --Select--

    17

    I think she portrayed just enough information about themain character to keep the audience connected, becausesome people will have that experience as well/

    I like how she set the situation at the start,saying that there is awkwardness betweenthe family, and she establishes the maincharacter pretty well, in my opinion.

    father walks with dog instead ofmovie with daughter/maincharacter

    Very interesting; have to keepwatching!

    17 Sympathize with the poor girl Awkwardness within the family

    His dad is going for a walk withthe dog instead of watching amovie with his daughter

    Could be good...will keep watching alitte more and then decide

    17

    I guess there was a sufficient amount of info portrayedabout the main character, although I feel like it wouldhave been better if you had something showing whathappened BEFORE the dog came into her life-- showingmore of a compare/contrast kind of thing.

    Starting with tension in the beginning--/good./ It would be a good idea if you couldmake the clattering of the eating utensilsagainst the plates audible in the beginning,so that the silence of conversation will behighlighted within the film.

    The main character feels theemptiness inside as the dog getsmore attention than her.

    Not sure...50/50...maybe will keepwatching, maybe not

    17Yes, because the main actor feels lonely, and the dog isbeing liked more than the main actor.

    Yes, at the beginning, you can notice theawkwardness within the family. The dogadds a slight bit of competition between themain actor and the dog, which does lead toAct II.

    The dog is more important thanthe main character.

    Very interesting; have to keepwatching!

    Presenter'sAssigned

    CodeNumber

    Did you feel there was enough info portrayed about themain actor? Did you connect or could you identify with

    the main character?

    Was there enough story background on thesetting, situation, and characters in Act I to

    efficiently lead into the rising action andconflict in Act II?

    What was the catalst event?

    20 second decision. How muchinterest would you have in watching

    this film past 20 seconds puttingaside any bias.

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    17yes, but it was confusing in a way how you used a dog,so i couldn't connect with the main character

    I found it kind of weird that she was jealousof her dog... I understand the situation of

    how she wanted her dad's attentionthough. dog is getting more attention

    Not sure...50/50...maybe