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Identify things that aren’t good in the following screen grabs…..

What’s good here?

EBI• Sequential and chronological • Assessment records for EVERY task

– Scan of assessment sheet (cropped, medium)– Grade & Targets (bullet points) written in – Presentation is consistent in this

• Wider range of photos / videos– All have captions– Not 20 on top of each other

• Backgrounds should reflect your genre• Alignments and columns should be wide enough• Don’t have ‘empty space’• Label DRAFTED work – Example: Storyboard Draft 2• Where’s draft 2 and 3 storyboards/timelines/scripts? (new timelines – website?)• Do assessment records and update pictures etc every day – so you don’t get behind• Films you watched on your own – poster and ‘I watched this’ is not enough• ‘Alterations along the way’: need to briefly state how you have changed ideas• Technology = what have you used? (videos?)• Audience feedback evidence from draft 1 and 2?

– Facebook screen shots– Video interviews– Picture and their comments?