All  children  should  be  in  bed  by  7.00pm  By  Erin  

 I  strongly  agree  that  all  children  should  be  in  bed  by  7:00pm,  because  if  they  stay  up  too  late  they  can  get  very  angry  and  tired.  Going  to  bed  early  is  fantastic  for  their  health!    Firstly,  going  to  bed  early  helps  children  to  learn  and  to  be  healthy.  It  gives  them  time  to  relax  and  regain  their  strength  and  energy  to  learn  new  things.    Secondly,  if  you  don’t  go  to  bed  at  7:00pm  you  will  get  extremely  tired,  angry  and  grumpy.  No  one  likes  to  be  angry  in  the  morning!    In  conclusion,  going  to  bed  early  helps  children  to  learn  and  to  be  healthy.  If  you  don’t  go  to  bed  at  7:00pm  you  will  get  extremely  tired,  angry  and  grumpy.  Everyone  must  go  to  bed  at  7:00pm.      

Gardening  is  better  than  sport  By  Yvonne  

 I  strongly  agree  that  gardening  is  way  better  than  sport.    Firstly,  when  you  grow  up  you  should  definitely  be  able  to  garden  with  your  children  and  take  them  out  in  the  sunshine.  All  children  need  to  spend  time  outside.    Secondly,  it  is  very  important  that  you  can  plant  healthy  and  fresh  food  to  eat.  It  is  always  healthier  than  disgusting  packaged  food!    Thirdly,  it  is  truly  amazing  how  much  money  everyone  spends  down  at  the  shop  buying  food.  It  wastes  lots  of  time  and  is  very  boring.    

In  conclusion,  it  is  very  important  that  you  garden  so  you  can  save  money,  have  fun,  cook  healthy  food  and  make  keep  your  children  in  the  sunshine.      All  children  should  be  in  bed  by  7:00pm  

By  Ashton    

I  strongly  disagree  that  all  children  should  be  in  bed  by  7:00pm  because  you  will  have  more  fun  if  you  stay  up  later.    Firstly,  if  you  stay  up  later  you  can  watch  more  TV  and  play  more  video  games.  If  you  want  to  be  a  Video  Game  Designer  when  you’re  older,  you  must  experience  a  lot  of  video  games  when  you  are  young.  

 Secondly,  if  you  were  having  a  birthday  sleepover  and  you  had  to  go  to  bed  at  7:00pm  and  missed  out  on  blowing  out  the  birthday  cake  candles  and  opening  the  presents,  it  would  be  unfair.    In  conclusion,  I  strongly  disagree  that  children  should  go  to  bed  at  7:00pm!      

Sport  is  better  than  gardening  By  Youssif  

 So  you  don’t  play  sport!  You  want  to  be  lazy  instead  of  being  fit?  I  strongly  believe  that  everyone  should  play  sport!    Firstly,  I  certainly  agree  that  everyone  should  play  sport  because  you  can  get  fit.  For  example,  if  you’re  overweight  you  can  get  fit  and  lose  weight.    

Secondly,  I  strongly  agree  that  you  should  play  sport  because  everyone  can  learn  more  games.  For  example,  you  can  learn  more  because  someone  can  teach  you  or  you  can  teach  them.  For  example,  they  might  not  know  a  sport  and  you  can  teach  everyone  to  play  that  sport.  It  feels  very  satisfying  when  you  can  teach  people  to  play.    In  conclusion,  I  strongly  agree  that  everyone  should  play  sport  because  you  can  get  fit  and  everyone  can  learn  more  games  and  teach  other  people.  So  everyone  should  play  sport.      

Gardening  is  better  than  sport  By  Marcella  

 I  strongly  believe  that  sport  is  better  than  gardening.  There  are  many  reasons  to  this  argument  and  I’m  going  to  state  a  few.    Firstly,  in  sport  you  can  make  friends  with  people.  This  means  you  can  have  broader  relationships  with  people  from  different  schools.    Secondly,  it  keeps  you  fit  and  healthy,  plus  it’s  fun.  It’s  much  more  fun  than  sitting  down  all  day.    Thirdly,  sport  gives  you  dreams.  Kids  need  dreams  to  look  forward  to.  The  perfect  way  to  find  those  dreams  is  to  play  sport.      In  conclusion,  sport  is  better  for  everybody  because  it  help  you  make  friends,  it’s  fun,  it  keeps  you  fit  and  gives  you  dreams.  Everybody  really  should  play  sport!    

     

Sport  is  better  than  gardening  By  Conor  

 I  strongly  believe  that  sport  is  better  than  gardening.    Firstly,  sport  is  great  because  you  get  to  play  games  and  you  get  to  run  around.  For  example,  you  can  play  ball  tiggy,  poison  ball  and  you  can  run.    Secondly,  sport  keeps  you  healthy  and  fit.  For  example,  sport  keeps  you  healthy  and  you  won’t  get  fat.    In  conclusion,  I  strongly  believe  that  sport  is  better  then  gardening  because  you  get  to  play  games  and  run  around  and  sport  keeps  you  healthy  and  fit.    All  Children  should  be  in  bed  by  7:00pm  

By  Zoe    

I  totally  believe  it  is  wrong  for  all  children  to  be  in  bed  by  7:00pm.  Have  you  ever  been  about  to  watch  your  favourite  T.V.  show  and  then  heard  “bed  time”?    Firstly,  if  you  have  a  T.V.  show  you  want  to  watch,  you  will  have  to  go  to  bed  before  it  even  starts.  For  example,  say  if  “The  Voice”  started  at  7:00pm,  you  would  only  see  the  very  start!    Also,  it  is  too  early  because  the  food  you  ate  for  dinner  will  hardly  have  gone  down.  That  means  that  you  will  have  trouble  sleeping,    Finally,  there  is  no  time  to  do  homework  if  you  have  an  afternoon  activity.  Then  the  next  morning  there  will  be  an  angry  teacher  and  you  will  have  no  explanation.    

So,  in  the  end,  all  children  should  not  be  in  bed  by  7:00pm  because  you  will  miss  your  favourite  T.V  shows,  your  dinner  will  not  have  been  digested  and  you  can’t  do  your  homework!  

   

All  children  should  be  in  bed  by  7:00pm  By  Cluny  

 I  strongly  disagree  that  all  children  should  be  in  bed  by  7:00pm  because  it  isn’t  fun  at  all!  Your  children  will  hate  you  for  life!    Firstly,  no  children  should  be  in  bed  by  7:00pm  because  you  cannot  go  to  sleep.  You  will  be  awake  in  bed  until  you  finally  go  to  sleep  at  5:00am.  So  you  will  still  be  sleepy  in  the  morning.    Secondly,  it  isn’t  at  all  healthy  for  your  body!  When  you  don’t  sleep  your  body  gets  tired  and  when  your  body  gets  tired  you  will  get  very  dizzy.  That  means  you  will  get  incredibly  sick!  You  don’t  want  to  be  sick  do  you?    Thirdly,  if  you  go  to  bed  at  7:00pm  you  won’t  have  enough  time  to  play  after  school.  You  definitely  won’t  have  enough  time  to  play  with  your  friends  after  school.    In  conclusion,  I  strongly  disagree  that  all  children  should  be  in  bed  by  7:00pm  because  you  can’t  go  to  sleep  that  early.  It’s  not  all  that  healthy  for  you  either!  Would  you  like  to  spend  more  time  with  your  friends?  Then  don’t  go  to  bed  as  early!                  

Gardening  is  better  than  sport  By  Hayu  

 I  strongly  disagree  that  gardening  is  better  then  sport.    Firstly,  gardening  hurts  your  back  and  that’s  why  old  people  easily  break  their  backs.    Secondly,  sports  support  the  most  important  parts  of  your  body,  but  gardening  is  just  the  opposite.    Thirdly,  70%  of  Australians  hurt  their  backs  from  gardening,  but  sport  is  fun  and  safe.    In  conclusion,  I  strongly  disagree  that  gardening  is  better  than  sport.      

Gardening  is  better  than  sport  By  Kalinda  

 I  strongly  believe  that  gardening  is  better  than  sport  because  you’re  saving  money  by  planting  food  and  plants.    Firstly,  when  you  plant  food  it  is  fresh  and  when  you  buy  food  it  is  not  fresh.  So  that  means  that  bought  food  is  not  that  healthy.    Secondly,  you  save  a  lot  of  money  because  you’re  planting  your  own  food.  But  when  you’re  doing  sport  you  have  to  pay  heaps  of  money  to  do  it.    Thirdly,  sport  is  dangerous.  A  lot  of  people  get  hurt  doing  sport  like  breaking  bones  and  hurting  themselves.  In  gardening  you  just  dig  and  plant  healthy,  yummy  food  for  dinner  and  don’t  hurt  yourself.    

Also,  it  is  relaxing  to  just  sit  down  and  look  at  the  beautiful  garden.  You  don’t  need  to  jump  or  run.  You  just  look  at  the  colourful,  peaceful  animal-­‐friendly  garden.  Imagine  not  thinking  about  anything.  It  will  be  so  nice.    Finally,  if  you  need  food  and  it’s  growing  in  your  lovely  garden,  you  won’t  need  to  go  to  the  shop.  So  if  you  are  happy  staying  home  you  don’t  need  to  go  and  get  your  dinner.  But  if  you  play  sport  you  will  need  to  go  out  and  not  relax.    In  conclusion,  that  is  why  I  believe  gardening  is  better  than  sport,  so  your  food  is  fresh.      

Gardening  is  better  than  sport  By  Sophia  

 I  strongly  believe  that  sport  is  one  hundred  times  better  than  gardening  for  many  reasons.    Firstly,  I  believe  that  when  you  play  sports  you  can  become  fit  and  healthy.  There  are  plenty  of  ways  to  get  fit.  Even  a  couple  of  laps  a  day  will  make  your  heart  pump  fast  and  that  pushes  the  blood  around.  Playing  different  sports  keeps  you  fit  too.    Secondly,  playing  sports  is  extremely,  immensely  fun!  You  can  learn  to  cooperate  with  the  people  on  your  team.  You  also  get  to  make  some  fantastic  and  amazing  friends.    Thirdly,  you  can  play  lots  of  different  sports  all  year  round.  Some  of  the  sports  you  can  play  all  year  round  are  basketball,  swimming  (in  the  inside  swimming  pool)  and  soccer.  You  can  also  play  cricket,  hockey  and  football.    

In  conclusion,  I  believe  that  everyone  should  play  sport  because  it  keeps  you  fit  and  healthy,  you  can  play  some  sports  all  through  the  year  and  it’s  really,  really  fun!      All  children  should  be  in  bed  by  7:00pm  

By  Dan    

I  strongly  disagree  that  all  children  should  be  in  bed  by  7:00pm.    Firstly,  if  you  have  to  go  to  bed  at  7:00pm  you  don’t  have  enough  time  to  do  your  homework.  For  example,  say  if  you  had  extra  homework  like  research  for  your  science  project,  you  wouldn’t  have  enough  time  to  do  it.    Secondly,  if  you  have  a  favourite  T.V.  show  and  it’s  on  at  7:30pm  and  you  have  to  go  to  bed  at  7:00pm,  you  don’t  get  to  watch  it.    Thirdly,  if  you  are  in  aftercare  and  you  go  home  at  6:00pm  you  only  have  one  hour  to  do  you  homework,  have  a  shower  and  brush  your  teeth.  This  is  definitely  not  enough  time!    Additionally,  you  won’t  have  enough  time  to  eat  your  desert.  For  example,  if  your  mum  is  cooking  a  pie  and  she  started  cooking  at  5:00pm  and  it  takes  two  hours  to  cook,  it  won’t  be  done  at  7:00pm    In  conclusion,  I  think  that  every  child  should  not  be  in  bed  by  7:30pm  because  you  don’t  have  enough  time  to  do  your  homework  and  watch  your  favourite  T.V.  show.                

All  children  should  be  in  bed  by  7:00pm  By  Henry  

 I  strongly  disagree  that  children  should  be  in  bed  by  7:00pm  because  the  time  is  not  enough  to  allow  you  to  do  other  things.    Children  should  not  be  in  bed  at  7:00pm  because  if  we  get  homework  and  have  something  on,  we  don’t  have  enough  time  to  do  homework.    Most  kids  do  after  school  activities  that  start  around  7:00pm  and  it  takes  time  to  get  home.    Maybe  your  parents  are  cooking  a  special  dinner  or  just  starting  dinner  late.  They  will  still  be  cooking  dinner  at  7:00pm    In  conclusion,  I  strongly  agree  that  children  should  be  in  bed  by  7:00pm  because  dinner  could  be  late  or  activities  could  be  on.    

 Gardening  is  better  than  sport  

By  Hamza    

I  strongly  believe  that  sport  is  better  than  gardening  because  it  keeps  you  fit.    Firstly,  I  disagree  that  gardening  is  better  because  gardening  is  a  lazier  activity  than  anything  else.  It’s  ridiculous  and  not  fun!  It’s  really  boring.    Secondly,  sport  makes  your  body  pump  more  blood  and  that  will  give  you  energy.    

Thirdly,  you  can  play  lots  of  sports,  for  example,  ling  jump,  running  and  skipping.    Finally,  you  can  make  lots  of  friends  when  you  play  sport  with  your  family.    In  conclusion,  I  strongly  believe  that  sport  is  better  than  gardening  because  sport  makes  your  body  pump  more  blood  and  sport  is  popular.  

 Gardening  is  better  than  sport  

By  Anas    

Sport  is  better  than  gardening  because  sport  is  more  fun  and  it  gives  you  more  energy.  If  you  don’t  know  how  to  run  you  can  learn.    Sport  is  better  than  gardening  because  it  is  more  fun  because  you  can  learn  different  sports  like  soccer  and  football.    Sport  is  better  than  gardening  because  it  is  more  energetic.  Gardening  is  just  holding  things  and  sport  is  running.  That’s  more  fun.