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KRIST IAN BRUMBY (30)

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JOHN VINCET HALPIN (29)

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GABRIEL TOUMAZIS (18)

I F YOU WANT MY OPINION, DEFINITELY GO WITH THE RUNAWAY PATIENT STORY. MUCH

MORE INTERESTING AND FRESH, USED PROSTITUTE/DRUGGY IS REALLY CL ICHE. THE

OTHER IDEA EXCITES ME. AND THE FACT THAT THEY 'RE ACTUALLY DEAD THROUGHOUT THE

STORY. IT REALLY IS LOVELY.I AM HONESTLY SO IMPRESSED. I WISH I

COULD BE INVOLVED IN IT SOMEHOW.

TOM WARDLE (26)