QUESTION 3: WHAT HAVE YOU LEARNT FROM AUDIENCE

FEEDBCK?

HOW TO BUILD A STORY:

When I showed the first draft of my music video to an audience, a lot of people suggested that the end should have more of a conclusion to the china doll and the connection between each character. So I changed the end of my music video with some flashback shots and a concluding shot on the china doll.

ALSO, more positive feedback explained that the editing tells the story well.

I also learnt from audience feedback which photo for my front cover to my album would be most effective and captivating, through tallying how many people out of 21 preferred image 1 or 2.