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Assessment: Aligning Curriculum,

Instruction, and Assessments

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NYS Common Core ELA & Literacy Curriculum D R A F T Grade 9 • Module 1 • Unit 1 • Lesson 3

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9.1.1 Lesson 3

Introduction

In Lesson 3, students will finish listening to Karen Russell’s “St. Lucy’s Home for Girls Raised by Wolves”

(pp. 235–246). Students will continue to participate in comprehension activities throughout the read-

aloud to support comprehension and engagement.

Throughout the read-aloud, students will write about and discuss the text by engaging in

comprehension activities. The lesson assessment asks students to determine the central idea of "St.

Lucy’s Home for Girls Raised by Wolves" and cite at least four pivotal moments in the text that show

how this idea develops throughout the story. For homework, students will write a paragraph reflection

about their discussion skills based on the Speaking and Listening Standard addressed in the lesson. In

addition, students will read their Accountable Independent Reading (AIR) text.

Standards

Assessed Standard(s)

RL.9-10.2

Determine a theme or central idea of a text and analyze in detail its development

over the course of the text, including how it emerges and is shaped and refined by

specific details; provide an objective summary of the text.

Addressed Standard(s)

RL.9-10.1 Cite strong and thorough textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says

explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text.

SL.9-10.1c Propel conversations by posing and responding to questions that relate the current

discussion to broader themes or larger ideas; actively incorporate others into the

discussion; and clarify, verify, or challenge ideas and conclusions.

Assessment

Assessment(s)

The lesson assessment asks students to answer a Quick Write by citing at least four pieces of text

evidence in a paragraph response.

· What is the central idea of "St. Lucy’s Home for Girls Raised by Wolves"? Cite at least four pivotal

moments in the text that show how this idea develops throughout the story.

High Performance Response(s)

High Performance Responses may include the following:

• The central idea is that the girls raised by wolves must choose between two cultures: behaving like a

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wolf or behaving like a human; the first choice is not really an option.

• The central idea is that girls who were raised by wolves must assimilate or adapt to human culture

as determined by St. Lucy’s.

Text Evidence:

• Claudette turns on Mirabella at the dance because she wants to pass the dancing test, showing that

she can become human.

• Claudette is not truly able to return home. She lies to her parents when she says she is “home.”

• Claudette runs with the bread, away from Mirabella, during the duck feeding incident because she

doesn’t want to fail. She wants to do well at St. Lucy’s by showing that she can act human.

• The pack is happy when Mirabella is expelled from St. Lucy’s because she was holding them back

and she was a failure. The girls want to be successful at becoming human.

Vocabulary

Vocabulary to provide directly (will not include extended instruction)

· heifer (n.) – a young female cow

· cleric (n.) – an ordained member of a religion

· jugular (n.) – short for jugular vein, a large vein in the neck

· disconcerting (adj.) – upsetting or disturbing

· bliss (n.) – supreme happiness

· catastrophic (adj.) – disastrous

· adapted (v.) – adjusted oneself to different conditions

Vocabulary to teach (may include direct word work and/or text-dependent questions)

· barbarity (barbaridad – Spanish) (n.) – crude or unsophisticated act

· languid (adj.) – relaxed

· hirsute (adj.) – hairy; shaggy

· sinewy (adj.) – muscular; strong

· purgatory (n.) – a place of purification or temporary punishment after death; place in between two

worlds

· ostracized (v.) –excluded, by general consent, from society, friendship, conversation, privileges, etc.

· bilingual (n.) – a person who can speak two languages with the facility of a native speaker

· delectable (adj.) – appetizing or delicious

· supplemented (v.) – completed or added to

· interred (v.) – placed into or buried

· assault (n.) – a violent attack

· conferred (v.) – discussed together

· improvised (v.) – made up

· bristled (v.) – visibly threatened

· overstimulating (v.) – too exciting

· bewildered (adj.) – perplexed and confused

· disoriented (adj.) – confused

· grimace (n.) – a type of facial expression, usually of disgust, disapproval, or pain

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· taunt (n.) – a remark made in order to anger, wound, or provoke someone

· eradication (n.) – removal of or destruction

· bipedal (adj.) – walking on two feet

· commandment (n.) –.an order or mandate

· origins (n.) –. places from which something arises or is derived

· aptitudes (n.) – abilities or talents

· catechism (n.) – a book of principles or instruction; usually associated with the Christian religion

· rehabilitated (adj.) – restored to good condition, health, or standing

· shunned (v.) – kept away from

Lesson Agenda/Overview

Student-Facing Agenda % of Lesson

· Standards Addressed: RL.9-10.1, RL.9-10.2, SL.9-10.1c

· Text: "St. Lucy's Home for Girls Raised by Wolves" (pp. 235–246)

• Introduction of Lesson Agenda

• Homework Accountability

• Read-Aloud and Student Activities

• Quick Write

• Closing

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ap

pe

n t

o M

ira

be

lla

? W

ill

she

ge

t k

icke

d o

ut

of

St.

Lu

cy’s

?

·W

ha

t a

re p

ure

bre

d g

irls

?

·H

ow

ca

n t

he

ir t

ail

s b

e i

nv

isib

le?

·Is

Je

an

ett

e s

ad

ab

ou

t n

o lo

ng

er

be

ing

a w

olf

?

An

y q

ue

stio

n a

stu

de

nt

ha

s is

va

lid

,

as

lon

g a

s it

is

rela

ted

to

th

e t

ext

. If

stu

de

nts

are

str

ug

gli

ng

wit

h

qu

est

ion

s, e

nco

ura

ge

th

em

to

th

ink

ab

ou

t u

nk

no

wn

vo

cab

ula

ry,

de

tail

s

in t

he

te

xt t

ha

t se

em

ed

co

nfu

sin

g,

or

wh

at

the

y w

an

t to

kn

ow

fro

m t

he

text

th

at

wil

l b

e r

ea

d n

ext

.

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de

nts

to

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t a

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te t

he

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est

ion

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ard

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up

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le

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nti

nu

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ea

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he

te

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lou

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ge

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a m

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th

oro

ug

h…

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, “…

ho

w

the

pa

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elt

ab

ou

t a

ny

thin

g”

(pp

. 2

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–2

41

).

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de

nts

fo

llow

alo

ng

, re

ad

ing

sil

en

tly

.

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stu

de

nts

to

en

ga

ge

in

a T

urn

-an

d-T

alk

wit

h a

pa

rtn

er

sitt

ing

ne

ar

the

m a

bo

ut

the

foll

ow

ing

qu

est

ion

s: H

ow

do

es

this

sce

ne

rev

ea

l th

e d

iffe

ren

ces

be

twe

en

Mir

ab

ell

a,

Jea

ne

tte

, a

nd

Cla

ud

ett

e,

an

d w

ha

t te

xtu

al

ev

ide

nce

su

pp

ort

s yo

ur

ide

as?

Stu

de

nt

resp

on

ses

ma

y i

ncl

ud

e t

he

foll

ow

ing

:

·M

ira

be

lla

is

stil

l b

eh

ind

. S

he

is

the

low

est

pe

rfo

rmin

g s

tud

en

t. E

vid

en

ce

incl

ud

es:

Sh

e s

cra

tch

es

at

the

gir

ls

an

d t

he

n r

oll

s a

rou

nd

on

th

e f

loo

r.

(“M

ira

be

lla

le

t o

ut

a w

him

pe

r. S

he

scra

tch

ed

at

us

an

d s

cra

tch

ed

at

us,

rak

ing

he

r n

ail

s a

lon

g o

ur

shin

s so

ha

rd t

ha

t sh

e d

rew

blo

od

.”)

·Je

an

ett

e i

s th

e h

igh

est

pe

rfo

rme

r. S

he

is h

igh

en

ou

gh

in

th

e c

lass

to

ta

lk t

o

Mir

ab

ell

a.

(“Je

an

ett

e f

row

ne

d.

‘Yo

u

are

a l

ate

blo

om

er,

Mir

ab

ella

! U

sua

lly

,

ev

ery

thin

g’s

be

gu

n t

o m

ake

mo

re

sen

se b

y M

on

th T

we

lve

at

the

late

st.’

”)

·C

lau

de

tte

is o

nly

wo

rrie

d a

bo

ut

he

rse

lf.

Sh

e d

oe

sn’t

ca

re a

bo

ut

Mir

ab

ell

a o

r Je

an

ett

e.

(“I

ign

ore

d h

er

an

d c

on

tin

ue

d d

ow

n t

he

ha

ll.

I h

ad

on

ly f

ou

r m

ore

ho

urs

to

pe

rfe

ct t

he

Sa

usa

lito

. I

wa

s w

orr

ied

on

ly a

bo

ut

my

self

.”)

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stu

de

nts

are

dis

cuss

ing

, ci

rcu

late

an

d p

rov

ide

su

pp

ort

wh

ere

ne

cess

ary

.

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resp

on

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de

nts

fo

llow

alo

ng

wit

h t

he

re

ad

-alo

ud

.

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ve

stu

de

nts

in

de

pe

nd

en

tly

wri

te a

resp

on

se t

o t

he

fo

llow

ing

qu

est

ion

s:

1.

Wh

at

ha

pp

en

ed

at

the

da

nce

?

2.

Wh

at

is y

ou

r re

spo

nse

to

Mir

ab

ell

a

be

ing

exp

ell

ed

? U

se e

vid

en

ce f

rom

th

e

text

to

su

pp

ort

yo

ur

thin

kin

g.

Stu

de

nt

resp

on

ses

ma

y i

ncl

ud

e t

he

foll

ow

ing

:

1.

Cla

ud

ett

e f

org

ot

ho

w t

o d

o t

he

Sa

usa

lito

da

nce

an

d s

tart

ed

pu

mp

ing

.

Sh

e l

oo

ke

d t

o J

ea

ne

tte

fo

r h

elp

bu

t

Jea

ne

tte

re

fuse

d t

o h

elp

he

r.

Mir

ab

ell

a d

eci

de

d t

o h

elp

he

r b

y

jum

pin

g o

n t

op

of

he

r. B

ut,

Cla

ud

ett

e

saw

ev

ery

on

e lo

ok

ing

, so

sh

e t

urn

ed

on

Mir

ab

ell

a a

nd

to

ld h

er

she

did

n’t

wa

nt

he

r h

elp

.

2.

Stu

de

nt

resp

on

ses

ma

y v

ary

bu

t

sho

uld

be

su

pp

ort

ed

by

th

e t

ext

.

·It

se

em

s fa

ir b

eca

use

Mir

ab

ell

a h

as

ye

t to

ad

ap

t. E

vid

en

ce i

ncl

ud

es:

sh

e

ruin

ed

th

e s

cho

ol d

an

ce,

she

ha

s to

we

ar

a m

uzz

le s

o s

he

wo

n’t

bit

e

pe

op

le,

she

do

esn

’t k

no

w h

ow

to

spe

ak

, sh

e r

oll

s a

ll o

ver

the

flo

or.

(“S

he

’d c

he

we

d t

hro

ug

h h

er

rest

rain

ts

an

d t

ack

led

me

fro

m b

eh

ind

, b

ark

ing

at

un

see

n c

ou

ga

rs,

try

ing

to

sh

ield

me

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stu

de

nts

are

wri

tin

g,

circ

ula

te

an

d m

on

ito

r st

ud

en

t

com

pr e

he

nsi

on

of

the

te

xt.

Qu

est

ion

2 i

s a

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te

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nre

aso

na

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sin

ce M

ira

be

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wa

s tr

yin

g t

o h

elp

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ud

ett

e w

he

n

Cla

ud

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as

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r g

on

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sh

e

isn

’t l

ea

rnin

g a

nd

try

ing

to

be

a g

oo

d

stu

de

nt.

(“’

Mir

ab

ell

a c

an

no

t a

da

pt!

Ba

ck t

o t

he

wo

od

s, b

ack

to

th

e

wo

od

s!’”

)

Ha

ve

stu

de

nts

sh

are

ou

t th

eir

re

spo

nse

s to

the

qu

est

ion

s.

Stu

de

nts

sh

are

ou

t th

eir

re

spo

nse

s,

refe

rrin

g t

o a

nd

dis

cuss

ing

th

eir

sup

po

rtin

g t

ext

ua

l e

vid

en

ce.

Co

nsi

de

r ca

llin

g o

n d

iffe

ren

t p

art

ne

r

sets

to

en

cou

rag

e m

axi

mu

m

pa

rtic

ipa

tio

n a

nd

a v

ari

ety

of

resp

on

ses.

Co

nti

nu

e r

ea

din

g a

lou

d t

he

Sta

ge

5 e

pig

rap

h

thro

ug

h t

he

en

d o

f th

e s

tory

(p

p.

24

5–

24

6).

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de

nts

fo

llow

alo

ng

wit

h t

he

re

ad

-alo

ud

.

Ask

stu

de

nts

to

wri

te d

ow

n q

ue

stio

ns

the

y

ha

ve

ab

ou

t S

tag

es

4 a

nd

5,

an

d t

he

sto

ry i

n

ge

ne

ral.

En

cou

rag

e s

tud

en

ts t

o lo

ok

ba

ck

thro

ug

h t

he

na

rra

tive

of

Sta

ge

s 4

an

d 5

to

cap

ture

an

y q

ue

stio

ns

the

y m

ay

ha

ve f

rom

Sta

ge

s 4

an

d 5

in

th

eir

en

tire

ty.

Als

o,

rem

ind

stu

de

nts

to

wri

te d

ow

n o

ve

r-a

rch

ing

qu

est

ion

s th

ey

ha

ve a

bo

ut

the

sto

ry a

s a

wh

ole

.

Stu

de

nts

wri

te d

ow

n q

ue

stio

ns.

Stu

de

nts

qu

est

ion

s m

ay

in

clu

de

th

e f

oll

ow

ing

:

·W

hy

is

the

pa

ck s

o e

ag

er

to g

et

rid

of

Mir

ab

ell

a?

·W

hy

did

Cla

ud

ett

e t

urn

on

Mir

ab

ell

a?

·W

hy

is

Cla

ud

ett

e u

na

ble

to

pe

rfo

rm

the

da

nce

?

·W

hy

is

“I’m

ho

me

” a

lie

?

An

y q

ue

stio

n a

stu

de

nt

ha

s is

va

lid

,

as

lon

g a

s it

is

rela

ted

to

th

e t

ext

. If

stu

de

nts

are

str

ug

gli

ng

wit

h

qu

est

ion

s, e

nco

ura

ge

th

em

to

th

ink

ab

ou

t u

nk

no

wn

vo

cab

ula

ry,

de

tail

s

in t

he

te

xt t

ha

t se

em

ed

co

nfu

sin

g,

or

wh

at

the

y w

an

t to

kn

ow

fro

m t

he

text

th

at

is s

till

un

cle

ar

for

the

m.

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stu

de

nts

to

sh

are

ou

t a

nd

wri

te t

he

ir

qu

est

ion

s o

n t

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bo

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or

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ch

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pa

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r.

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de

nts

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at

ma

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se

qu

est

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qu

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m o

n t

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bo

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art

pa

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g t

he

se q

ue

stio

ns

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be

he

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he

n s

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Daily Assessment Alignment Recording Sheet

Use the space below to record areas of alignment between the standard, the Daily Assessment and any

Lesson Activities. Be specific when citing your evidence of alignment. Discuss with your partner.

Standard or Section of

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9.1.1 Lesson 16

Introduction

The purpose of Lesson 16 is to prepare students for the following lesson’s (Lesson 17) End-of-Unit

Assessment. This lesson prepares students to write formally using strong and thorough textual evidence

to analyze character development over the course of the story. Students will be introduced to the End-

of-Unit Assessment prompt and will engage in an evidence-based debate about the prompt. Students

will also briefly discuss the NY Regents Text Analysis Rubric to aid in the planning and organizing of their

writing for homework.

Students will begin by participating in a teacher-led discussion about the End-of-Unit Assessment

prompt. Following that, students will form small groups according to their position on the debate topic

and work together to gather evidence to support their position. The Evidence-Based Debate Planning

Tool, attached to this lesson, will guide students in collecting evidence. After the evidence is gathered,

the student groups will debate each other as a way to solidify their thinking about Claudette’s successful

(or unsuccessful) integration into society. Finally, the whole class will review the NY Regents Text

Analysis Rubric and begin planning their writing for the following lesson’s assessment.

Standards

Assessed Standard

RL.9-10.1 Cite strong and thorough textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says

explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text.

Addressed Standard

RL.9-10.3 Analyze how complex characters (e.g., those with multiple or conflicting motivations)

develop over the course of a text, interact with other characters, and advance the plot

or develop the theme.

SL.9-10.1c Propel conversations by posing and responding to questions that relate the current

discussion to broader themes or larger ideas; actively incorporate others into the

discussion; and clarify, verify, or challenge ideas and conclusions.

Assessment

Assessment(s)

Quick Write: Today’s debate was about whether or not Claudette was integrated successfully into

human society. Regardless of the position you took, do you think Claudette (or any of the girls) should

be integrated into human society? What evidence in the text supports your thinking?

High Performance Response(s)

Responses will vary, but look for a student to identify a position (“Yes,” “No,” “I’m not sure”) and

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support that position with evidence from the text:

· Yes, Claudette and the other girls should be integrated into human society because otherwise

they live in a purgatory, between worlds. They are not wolves. They don’t have tails or fur that

bristle, and they can’t “keep up with the purebred” wolves.

· No, Claudette and the other girls should not be integrated into human society because they

would give up what is important to them—their families, their language, and their pack.

Claudette loses the ability to find her way home, and when she says, “I’m home,” she

acknowledges that as a “human lie.” The cave isn’t her home anymore.

Vocabulary

Vocabulary to provide directly (will not include extended instruction)

· None.

Vocabulary to teach (may include direct word work and/or text-dependent questions)

· The teacher should encourage students to use the following Tier 2 /academic vocabulary words in

their evidence-based debate and in their assessment planning.

adapted host culture civilized epigraph origins

stages culture shock purgatory commandment couth

remedied ostracized recoiled delectable bristled

generalizations captivity assault conferred aptitudes

kempt barbarity eradication bipedal

overstimulating disorienting conjure rehabilitated

catechism purebred shunned foreign

Lesson Agenda/Overview

Student-Facing Agenda % of Lesson

· Standards: RL.9-10.1, RL.9-10.3, W.9-10.2, W.9-10.5

· Text: “St. Lucy’s Home for Girls Raised by Wolves”

• Introduction of Lesson Agenda

• Homework Accountability

· Introduction of Unit Assessment

· Evidence-Based Debate

· Unit Assessment Planning

· Closing

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50%

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5%

Materials

• Debate Position Evidence Samples

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• NY Regents Text Analysis Rubric (See “Preparation, Materials, and Resources” in Unit Overview for

its location).

• Debate Procedures (for display)

• Key Vocabulary Handout

• Evidence-Based Debate Planning Tool

• Language Frames

• Chart paper

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xtu

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po

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me

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lain

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e d

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ate

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ure

s. I

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rm

stu

de

nts

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at

the

y w

ill

bre

ak

in

to s

ma

ll

gro

up

s. T

wo

of

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gro

up

s w

ill

ga

the

r

ev

ide

nce

to

su

pp

ort

th

e p

osi

tio

n t

ha

t

Cla

ud

ett

e is

su

cce

ssfu

lly

inte

gra

ted

in

to

hu

ma

n s

oci

ety

. T

wo

gro

up

s w

ill

ga

the

r

ev

ide

nce

to

su

pp

ort

th

e p

osi

tio

n t

ha

t

Cla

ud

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e is

no

t su

cce

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lly i

nte

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in

to

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ma

n s

oci

ety

, a

nd

tw

o w

ill g

ath

er

ev

ide

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to s

ho

w t

ha

t it

is

un

cle

ar

fro

m t

he

te

xt

wh

eth

er

or

no

t C

lau

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tte

wa

s su

cce

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l in

inte

gra

tin

g i

nto

hu

ma

n s

oci

ety

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ea

ch

sma

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p h

as

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ch

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o w

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on

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ir o

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n t

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en

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e t

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arg

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up

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Stu

de

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nu

e t

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n a

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me

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ha

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te p

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du

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tte

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n t

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bo

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rt p

ap

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to p

rov

ide

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de

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h a

vis

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trib

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th

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ase

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e

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l a

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ach

sm

all

gro

up

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st g

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er

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ide

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arg

uin

g t

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th

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lain

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eir

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s th

e t

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loo

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or

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sure

th

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on

e i

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ach

gro

up

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pa

rtic

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n f

ind

ing

an

d s

ha

rin

g e

vid

en

ce.

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de

nts

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ok

for

text

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ide

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th

at

arg

ue

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eir

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ed

po

siti

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xpla

in

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w t

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xt e

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ba

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ev

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no

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cuss

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elo

w.)

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cou

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tud

en

ts t

o u

se

vo

cab

ula

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pe

cifi

c to

th

e s

tory

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en

exp

lain

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th

e e

vid

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e s

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ma

ll g

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e t

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er

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en

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m f

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sha

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po

siti

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lain

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th

e t

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e g

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t th

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ld

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re t

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ev

ide

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ey

ga

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red

an

d d

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de

wh

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te

xt e

vid

en

ce i

s th

e s

tro

ng

est

fo

r th

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ba

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sed

on

th

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stu

de

nts

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y fi

nd

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dit

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al t

ext

ev

ide

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to

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d t

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ir t

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nts

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ten

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refu

lly t

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ach

oth

er

an

d

am

en

d t

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ir e

vid

en

ce a

s n

ece

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ry.

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fere

nti

ati

on

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nsi

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rati

on

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n

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th

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la

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gro

up

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re s

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o

ea

ch o

the

r, c

on

sid

er

giv

ing

stu

de

nts

hig

hli

gh

ters

to

hig

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gh

t th

e

ev

ide

nce

th

ey

th

ink

is s

tro

ng

est

fo

r

the

de

ba

te.

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vid

e l

arg

e g

rou

ps

tim

e t

o s

ha

re t

he

ir

ev

ide

nce

an

d t

o d

ete

rmin

e w

hic

h e

vid

en

ce i

s

stro

ng

est

fo

r th

e d

eb

ate

.

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e t

hre

e l

arg

e g

rou

ps

sha

re e

vid

en

ce

ga

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red

in

th

eir

sm

all

er

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up

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rou

ps

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gin

de

cid

ing

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ev

ide

nce

is

stro

ng

est

for

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de

ba

te.

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tud

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ts s

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gg

le w

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th

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de

a o

f

“str

on

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vid

en

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to

thin

k a

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ut

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ide

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xt

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t su

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ph

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stu

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at

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an

s “t

o

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sen

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at

stu

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nts

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ou

ld l

oo

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ev

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sen

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de

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er

ea

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rou

p s

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e p

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text

ev

ide

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, th

e g

rou

ps

can

ta

ke

tu

rns

reb

utt

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vid

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mo

re e

vid

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ld b

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tin

uo

us

an

d f

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, b

ut

giv

e t

he

gro

up

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w

min

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pre

pa

re r

eb

utt

als

an

d a

dd

itio

na

l

ev

ide

nce

th

rou

gh

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min

d t

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stu

de

nts

to u

se t

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la

ng

ua

ge

fra

me

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d i

n

pre

vio

us

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th

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nit

. E

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n t

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ug

h t

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is a

de

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te a

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arg

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cuss

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is i

nte

gra

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succ

ess

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aca

de

mic

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ba

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ch g

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f st

ron

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text

ev

ide

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at

sup

po

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ir p

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tio

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De

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n E

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ple

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en

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on

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nu

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elf

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r d

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en

sh

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s sh

e i

s h

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e b

eca

use

sh

e n

o lo

ng

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be

lon

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h t

he

wo

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s a

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ha

s b

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Cla

ud

ett

e w

as

no

t su

cce

ssfu

lly

in

teg

rate

d i

nto

hu

ma

n s

oci

ety

be

cau

se:

·In

Sta

ge

2 s

he

co

nti

nu

es

to f

oll

ow

th

e w

olf

co

mm

an

dm

en

t o

f “K

no

w Y

ou

r P

lace

” sh

ow

ing

th

at

she

sti

ll i

s w

olf

-lik

e e

ve

n t

ho

ug

h s

he

is

try

ing

to p

lea

se t

he

nu

ns

by b

ein

g a

go

od

stu

de

nt;

gu

ilti

ly h

op

es

to f

ail

so

sh

e c

an

go

ba

ck h

om

e,

sho

win

g t

ha

t sh

e d

oe

sn’t

tru

ly b

uy

in

to b

eco

min

g

a p

art

of

hu

ma

n s

oci

ety

; re

sort

s to

act

ing

lik

e a

wo

lf d

uri

ng

th

e d

uck

in

cid

en

t w

ith

Mir

ab

ell

a b

y s

na

rlin

g a

t h

er

an

d p

ush

ing

he

r e

ars

ba

ck

fro

m h

er

he

ad

an

d b

itin

g h

er

sho

uld

er;

sh

e s

till

un

de

rsta

nd

s w

ha

t M

ira

be

lla

wa

nts

wh

en

Mir

ab

ell

a n

ee

ds

he

r w

ou

nd

s li

cke

d;

an

d f

ee

ls a

thro

b o

f co

mp

ass

ion

fo

r M

ira

be

lla

be

cau

se s

he

is q

ue

stio

nin

g h

um

an

so

cie

ty.

·In

Sta

ge

3 s

he

sti

ll f

ee

ls b

ad

ab

ou

t M

ira

be

lla

as

she

re

ali

zes

tha

t M

ira

be

lla

is

no

t a

da

pti

ng

an

d i

t is

ta

kin

g a

to

ll o

n h

er

(“I

sle

pt

fitf

ull

y d

uri

ng

tha

t p

eri

od

, u

na

ble

to

fo

rge

t th

at

Mir

ab

ell

a w

as

liv

ing

un

de

r m

y b

ed

, g

na

win

g o

n m

y l

oa

fers

”),

sho

win

g s

he

is

no

t co

mp

lete

ly “

bu

yin

g i

nto

hu

ma

n c

ult

ure

; sh

e p

itie

s th

e p

ure

bre

d g

irls

be

cau

se t

he

y h

av

e n

ev

er

kn

ow

n t

he

ir w

ere

wo

lf p

are

nts

or

the

ir f

ore

st h

om

e,

sho

win

g t

ha

t sh

e

stil

l ca

res

ab

ou

t h

er

wo

lf u

pb

rin

gin

g a

nd

ha

sn’t

co

mp

lete

ly b

ou

gh

t in

to h

um

an

so

cie

ty y

et;

is

fail

ing

at

be

com

ing

fu

lly

re

ha

bil

ita

ted

by

he

r

ina

bil

ity

to

do

th

e S

au

salit

o d

an

ce a

nd

sti

ll e

xhib

itin

g w

olf

-lik

e a

ttri

bu

tes

(“o

ur

inv

isib

le t

ail

s w

en

t lim

p”)

; sh

e e

xpe

rie

nce

s a

ng

er

wit

h t

he

nu

ns

be

cau

se o

f th

e d

an

ce a

nd

sta

tes

tha

t th

ing

s h

ad

be

en

sim

ple

r in

th

e w

oo

ds,

sh

ow

ing

th

at

she

ha

s n

ot

full

y i

nte

gra

ted

in

to h

um

an

soci

ety

; sh

e i

sn’t

re

ad

y t

o c

laim

a c

om

mo

n l

an

gu

ag

e w

ith

Je

an

ett

e,

wh

ich

sh

ow

s sh

e s

till

ha

ng

s o

n t

o h

er

wo

lf c

ult

ure

a b

it s

ince

Je

an

ett

e

rep

rese

nts

an

alm

ost

pe

rfe

ct a

da

pta

tio

n;

me

nti

on

s sh

e i

s st

ill “p

rete

nd

ing

” w

he

n a

t ch

ap

el,

sh

ow

ing

th

at

she

isn

’t f

ully

in

teg

rate

d b

ut

pre

ten

din

g.

·In

Sta

ge

4 s

he

re

ali

zes

tha

t n

on

e o

f th

e g

irls

wil

l ta

lk p

erf

ect

ly,

sho

win

g t

he

y ca

n n

ev

er

be

su

cce

ssfu

lly

inte

gra

ted

in

to h

um

an

so

cie

ty

(“g

loo

my s

ati

sfa

ctio

n,

ea

ch w

ord

win

ced

ou

t li

ke

an

ap

olo

gy”)

; fa

lls

ap

art

at

the

fir

st k

ey

hu

ma

n e

ve

nt,

th

e d

an

ce w

he

re s

he

fla

tte

ns

he

r

ea

rs,

pu

mp

s th

e g

rou

nd

, a

nd

ta

ke

s o

ff h

er

sho

es.

Th

e d

an

ce e

xhib

its

he

r fa

ilu

re a

t in

teg

rati

ng

in

to h

um

an

so

cie

ty.

It i

s u

ncl

ea

r if

Cla

ud

ett

e w

as

succ

ess

full

y i

nte

gra

ted

in

to h

um

an

so

cie

ty b

eca

use

:

·In

Sta

ge

2,

we

do

n’t

act

ua

lly

kn

ow

wh

at

be

com

es

of

Cla

ud

ett

e.

(“It

wa

s th

e d

isg

race

, th

e f

ail

ure

th

at

we

all g

uil

ty h

op

ed

fo

r in

ou

r h

ard

be

ds.

Wh

ate

ve

r w

ill

be

com

e o

f m

e?

”) S

he

ca

n f

ee

d t

he

du

cks

bu

t re

ve

rts

to w

olf

ha

bit

s in

de

ali

ng

wit

h M

ira

be

lla

. (“

I b

it h

er

sho

uld

er,

on

ce,

twic

e,

the

on

ly l

an

gu

ag

e s

he

wo

uld

re

spo

nd

to

.”)

Re

ad

s h

um

an

bo

ok

s (J

ack

Lo

nd

on

) b

ut

can

sti

ll u

nd

ers

tan

d M

ira

be

lla

’s n

ee

d t

o h

ave

he

r w

ou

nd

s

lick

ed

. C

on

tin

ue

s to

ha

ve

co

mp

ass

ion

fo

r M

ira

be

lla

. (“

Ho

w c

an

pe

op

le l

ive

lik

e t

he

y d

o?

”)

·In

Sta

ge

3,

she

wa

nts

Mir

ab

ell

a g

on

e b

eca

use

sh

e i

s a

wa

re o

f th

e p

hy

sica

l d

am

ag

e c

au

sed

by

th

e l

ack

of

ad

ap

tati

on

– t

his

aw

are

ne

ss s

ho

ws

Cla

ud

ett

e’s

un

cert

ain

ty r

eg

ard

ing

th

e a

da

pta

tio

n.

(“I

sle

pt

fitf

ull

y d

uri

ng

th

at

pe

rio

d,

un

ab

le t

o f

org

et

tha

t M

ira

be

lla

wa

s li

vin

g u

nd

er

my

be

d,

gn

aw

ing

on

my

lo

afe

rs.”

) S

he

wo

nd

ers

wh

at

it w

ou

ld b

e l

ike

to

be

bre

d i

n c

ap

tiv

ity

—sh

e u

nd

ers

tan

ds

ho

me

sick

ne

ss,

wh

ich

sh

ow

s sh

e

do

es

no

t a

cce

pt

full

in

teg

rati

on

(co

ntr

ast

s w

ith

Je

an

ett

e).

Sh

e r

ela

tes

the

bic

ycl

e r

idin

g t

o a

“sa

nct

ion

ed

pu

mp

ing

”—

stil

l b

etw

ee

n c

ult

ure

s.

Wh

en

th

e d

an

ce i

s m

en

tio

ne

d,

she

re

ve

rts

to w

olf

ch

ara

cte

rist

ics,

sh

ow

ing

he

r co

ntr

ad

icto

ry b

eh

av

ior.

(“O

ur

inv

isib

le t

ails

we

nt

lim

p.”

) S

he

att

em

pts

to

pra

ctic

e t

he

da

nce

bu

t ca

nn

ot

do

it—

sho

win

g s

he

is

try

ing

to

be

com

e i

nte

gra

ted

bu

t fa

lls

sho

rt (

“a p

riv

ate

ma

ss o

f tw

itch

an

d

foa

m”)

. S

he

do

esn

’t w

an

t to

cla

im a

co

mm

on

la

ng

ua

ge

wit

h J

ea

ne

tte

—sh

ow

ing

sh

e i

s u

nce

rta

in a

bo

ut

full

in

teg

rati

on

in

to h

um

an

so

cie

ty

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sin

ce J

ea

ne

tte

ha

s a

cce

pte

d t

he

ad

ap

tati

on

fu

lly

. S

he

sa

ys

she

is

stil

l “p

rete

nd

ing

” in

ch

urc

h b

ut

is f

org

ett

ing

he

r w

olf

mo

the

r, w

hic

h s

ho

ws

she

is

be

twe

en

cu

ltu

res.

·In

Sta

ge

4,

the

ep

igra

ph

sta

tes

tha

t e

ve

ryth

ing

sh

ou

ld b

eg

in t

o m

ak

e s

en

se b

ut

Cla

ud

ett

e f

ail

s a

t e

xecu

tin

g t

he

da

nce

. T

his

sh

ow

s it

do

esn

’t

ma

ke s

en

se b

ut

she

is

stil

l tr

yin

g t

o a

da

pt.

He

r se

lf-c

on

fid

en

ce w

an

ed

in

ste

ad

of

gre

w.

Sh

e is

ge

ttin

g c

lose

r to

be

com

ing

hu

ma

n a

s sh

e

me

nti

on

s sh

e s

me

lls

like

a p

ure

bre

d g

irl

bu

t th

en

fla

tte

ns

he

r e

ars

. S

he

is

no

t a

ctin

g c

on

sist

en

t w

ith

th

e S

tag

e 4

ep

igra

ph

, th

us,

re

ve

ali

ng

sh

e

is f

all

ing

sh

ort

of

full

in

teg

rati

on

. T

urn

ing

on

Mir

ab

ell

a d

uri

ng

th

e d

an

ce s

ho

ws

she

is

inte

gra

ted

bu

t th

en

giv

es

on

e l

ast

co

mm

un

al

ho

wl,

sho

win

g s

he

ha

s n

ot

let

go

of

all

wo

lf c

ha

ract

eri

stic

s.

·In

Sta

ge

5,

the

tim

ing

of

the

vis

it t

o t

he

pa

ren

ts i

s u

nce

rta

in.

Th

is v

isit

co

uld

ha

ve

occ

urr

ed

be

fore

or

aft

er

the

sch

oo

l d

an

ce i

nci

de

nt,

th

us,

rev

ea

lin

g t

ha

t th

ere

is

un

cert

ain

ty t

o C

lau

de

tte

’s f

ull

in

teg

rati

on

. S

he

co

uld

n’t

fin

d h

er

wa

y b

ack

ho

me

(“t

he

wo

od

sma

n h

ad

to

acc

om

pa

ny

me

”),

bu

t sh

e w

as

wil

lin

g t

o r

etu

rn,

sho

win

g a

la

ck o

f cl

ari

ty w

he

the

r sh

e i

s tr

uly

inte

gra

ted

. S

he

is s

ad

ab

ou

t re

turn

ing

wh

ich

co

uld

me

an

she

ha

sn’t

fu

lly

acc

ep

ted

he

r o

wn

ad

ap

tati

on

. S

he

lo

ok

s d

iffe

ren

t (“

My

mo

the

r re

coile

d f

rom

me

, a

s if

I w

as

a s

tra

ng

er”

) a

nd

ha

s to

du

ck h

er

he

ad

, sh

ow

ing

he

r h

um

an

ch

ara

cte

rist

ics

bu

t th

en

th

ere

is

a r

eco

gn

itio

n (

“Aft

er

all

th

e t

ail w

ag

gin

g a

nd

pe

rfu

nct

ory

ba

rkin

g h

ad

die

d

do

wn

…”)

, sh

ow

ing

sh

e m

ay r

em

ain

be

twe

en

th

e c

ult

ure

s.

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Evidence-Based Debate Planning Tool

Names:

Directions: Gather text evidence from the narrative and the Stages of the Handbook that

support your assigned position. Then, explain how the text evidence supports your assigned

position. Remember to label the page number and the Stage number associated with the text

evidence.

Circle your assigned position:

· Claudette was successfully integrated into human society.

· Claudette was not successfully integrated into human society.

· It is unclear from the text if Claudette was successfully integrated into human society.

Text Evidence

Stage Text Evidence

How does this text evidence

support your position? (Think

about how the narrative

connects to the Stages of the

Handbook.)

Page

Number

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Key Vocabulary Handout

adapted host culture civilized epigraph origins

stages culture shock purgatory commandment couth

remedied ostracized recoiled delectable bristled

generalizations captivity assault conferred aptitudes

kempt barbarity eradication bipedal

overstimulating disorienting conjure rehabilitated

catechism purebred shunned foreign

305

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9.1.1 Lesson 17

Introduction

Lesson 17 is the final lesson of Unit 1. Students have finished their close reading of “St. Lucy’s Home for

Girls Raised by Wolves” (pp. 225–246) and will write a formal evidence-based essay about the text.

Lesson 17 assesses the literacy skills and habits developed in Unit 1 including reading closely for textual

details, annotating texts to support comprehension and analysis, engaging in productive evidence-based

conversations about text, collecting evidence from texts to support analysis, and organizing evidence to

plan around writing. Students will write a formal evidence-based essay addressing the assessment

prompt (see Assessment box below). The assessment prompt directly correlates with the reading

standards addressed throughout the unit. Students will use strong and thorough text evidence to

analyze the text’s implicit and explicit meanings, specifically in regards to character development and

text structure. In addition, this writing assignment will assess writing standards that have been

addressed throughout the unit.

Students will be expected to write the essay during the entire class period. They will be allowed to use

their “St. Lucy’s” text to write the essay so they can accurately paraphrase and quote directly from the

text. Students should utilize their annotations made during the close reading of the text, the evidence-

based debate from Lesson 16, and specific writing lessons on citing evidence and writing introductions

and conclusions. In addition, students are expected to use key vocabulary and terminology from the

story in their essays. (Discretion should be used to determine the appropriate volume of vocabulary and

how it will be graded. A vocabulary list is provided in Lesson 16.) As they have throughout the unit,

students are expected to quote textual evidence, cite page numbers, and paraphrase correctly. The End-

of-Unit Assessment should be assessed using the first two rows of the New York Regents Text Analysis

Rubric (Content and Analysis/Command of Evidence). However, students are expected to write in a

formal, organized manner. In the following unit (Unit 2), students’ written work will be graded for

Coherence, Organization, and Style. For homework, students will continue to read their Accountable

Independent Reading (AIR) text.

Extension activities are included at the end of the lesson for students who finish the assessment early.

Standards

Assessed Standard(s)

RL.9-10.3 Analyze how complex characters (e.g., those with multiple or conflicting motivations)

develop over the course of a text, interact with other characters, and advance the plot or

develop the theme.

W.9-10.2 Write informative/explanatory texts to examine and convey complex ideas, concepts,

and information clearly and accurately through the effective selection, organization, and

analysis of content.

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Assessment

Assessment(s)

The assessment in this lesson is the End-of-Unit Assessment. The prompt is the following:

· According to Claudette, the girls’ parents sent them to St. Lucy’s because the nuns “would make us

naturalized citizens of human society.” At the end of the story, was Claudette successfully

integrated into human society? Write an essay using evidence from the text to support your

position. Structure your response by using the Stages from the Jesuit Handbook on Lycanthropic

Culture Shock.

High Performance Response(s)

High Performance Responses may include the following:

Yes, Claudette was successfully integrated into human society. Students may write about any of the

following reasons or analysis:

· Claudette is able to meet the standards of adaptation described in the Stages of the Jesuit

Handbook.

· She is successfully integrated because she is able to adapt to many human societal requirements

and realizes she can never go home to the forest.

· She is successful at integrating into human society because she loses many of her wolf-like

attributes and so can no longer function in her former wolf society.

· She cares deeply about being a good student at St. Lucy’s and thus shows her willingness to

become human and shun her wolf culture.

Students must include text evidence from each Stage that correlates to the above analysis and clearly

delineate what stage the text evidence comes from.

Stage 2 Text Evidence: wearing shoes (“I remember how disorienting it was to look down and see two

square-toed shoes instead of my own four feet”); learns not to chew on shoes; realizes they cannot

betray their parents by returning to the forest until they are civilized (“But we knew we couldn’t return

to the woods; not till we were civilized, not if we didn’t want to break the mother’s heart”); stops

urinating all over to mark her territory because she realizes the nuns are erasing them (“We couldn’t

make our scent stick here; it made us feel invisible. Eventually we gave up.”); walks bipedally instead of

on all fours; realizes walking on all fours is unnatural and ridiculous; realizes there are different sorts of

calculations to survival at St. Lucy’s; her own reflection is becoming a stranger (“I’d bristle and growl,

the way that I’d begun to snarl at my own reflection as if it were a stranger”); wants to be a good

student and doesn’t appreciate Mirabella bringing her down (the duck incident); wants to earn Skill

Points

Stage 3 Text Evidence: She wants Mirabella gone (“I would have warned her. But the truth is that by

Stage 3 I wanted her gone.”); begins to understand there are certain rules to being human (“And the

rules here were different depending on which humans we were with”); learns how to ride a bicycle, a

symbol for learning how to become human (“Being human is like riding this bicycle. Once you’ve

learned how, you’ll never forget.”); she begins to forget her mother in the chapel (“The mother, I’d

Addressed Standard(s)

RL.9-10.1 Cite strong and thorough textual evidence to support analysis of what the text says

explicitly as well as inferences drawn from the text.

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think, struggling to conjure up a picture”); understands the difference between the human moon and

the wolf moon

Stage 4 Text Evidence: She is worried only about herself and the pack is no longer a single unit; she is

able to talk with Kyle at the dance; wears a dress to the dance; she turns on Mirabella at the party

when Mirabella comes to her aid; she cannot face Mirabella when she gets expelled; engages in one

last communal howl which shows she is no longer part of the wolf pack.

Stage 5 Text Evidence: She goes to visit her parents wearing a dress and brings human food; she ducks

her head to enter the cave because she is walking on two legs; her mother recoils from her because

she is a stranger to her now (“My mother recoiled from me, as if I was a stranger”); her mother looks at

her proud and sad; she says she is lying when she says she is home (“So, I said, telling my first human

lie. I’m home.”). Furthermore, when Claudette is given the opportunity to return to her parents, she

needs the woodsman to accompany her because she “couldn’t remember how to find the way back”

on her own. This demonstrates that she has forgotten part of her wolf roots since she must depend on

another human to show her the way back to her “home.”

No, Claudette was unsuccessful in integrating into human society. Students can include any of the

following reasons or analysis including the following:

· Claudette is unable to meet the standards of adaptation described by the Stages in the Jesuit

Handbook.

· Claudette never fully resolves to become completely human, so therefore she cannot be

considered successfully integrated.

· Claudette never gives up some of her wolf characteristics, so therefore she can never be

successfully integrated into human society.

Students must include text evidence from each Stage that correlates to the above analysis and clearly

delineate what stage the text evidence comes from.

Stage 2 Text Evidence: stands by the wolf commandment of “Know Your Place” so acts like a good

student because of the wolf culture expectation to do so—not because of the school’s expectations;

guiltily hopes to fail so she can return to her wolf upbringing (“It was the disgrace, the failure that we

all guiltily hoped for in our hard beds.”); acts like a wolf with Mirabella during the duck incident (“I

whirled around and snarled at her, pushing my ears back from my head. I bit her shoulder, once, twice,

the only language she would respond to.”); fails the “duck feeding exam”; she knows what Mirabella

wants when Mirabella wants her wounds licked and she feels a throb of compassion for her

Stage 3 Text Evidence: She feels bad about Mirabella (“I slept fitfully during that period, unable to

forget that Mirabella was living under my bed, gnawing on my loafers”); she pities the purebred girls

because they have never known the forest or a wolf upbringing (“I felt sorry for them. I wondered what

it would be like to be bred in captivity, and always homesick for a dimly sensed forest, the trees you’ve

never seen.”); fails at learning the Sausalito dance to show her rehabilitation; keeps exhibiting wolf

characteristics like feeling as if she has an invisible tail and feeling that things had been simpler in the

woods; anger at the nuns; having to practice the Sausalito but like a wolf (“… a private mass of twitch

and foam”); not ready to claim a common language with Jeanette (who represents the most adapted);

she admits to still pretending in the chapel. (“On Sundays, the pretending felt almost as natural as

nature.”)

Stage 4 Text Evidence: She realizes that they will never talk perfectly (“I thought with a gloomy

satisfaction, each word winced out like an apology for itself”); flattens her ears at the dance; falls apart

at the dance where she is supposed to show her rehabilitation; she pumps at the dance and takes off

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her shoes.

Based on the text, it is unclear whether Claudette was successful in integrating into human society.

Students can include any of the following reasons or analysis including the following:

· She is between cultures and exhibits contradictory behavior. Specifically, she questions the

adaptation, yet continues to try. She still reverts to her wolf-like attributes even though she has

adopted human-like characteristics.

· Beyond St. Lucy’s it is unknown if she is able to function in human society.

· She is able to meet some of the requirements of the handbook, but it is unknown if she fulfills all

the requirements.

Students must include text evidence from each stage that correlates to the above analysis and clearly

delineate what stage the text evidence comes from.

Stage 2 Text Evidence: We don’t actually know what becomes of Claudette. (“It was the disgrace, the

failure that we all guilty hoped for in our hard beds. Whatever will become of me?”); she can feed the

ducks but reverts to wolf habits in dealing with Mirabella. (“I bit her shoulder, once, twice, the only

language she would respond to.”); reads human books (Jack London) but can still understand

Mirabella’s need to have her wounds licked; continues to have compassion for Mirabella. (“How can

people live like they do?”)

Stage 3 Text Evidence: She wants Mirabella gone because she is aware of the physical damage caused

by her lack of adaptation—this awareness shows Claudette’s uncertainty regarding the adaptation. (“I

slept fitfully during that period, unable to forget that Mirabella was living under my bed, gnawing on

my loafers.”) She wonders what it would be like to be bred in captivity; understands homesickness,

which shows she does not accept full integration (contrasts with Jeanette); relates the bicycle riding to

a “sanctioned pumping”—still between cultures. When the dance is mentioned, she reverts to wolf

characteristics, showing her contradictory behavior. (“Our invisible tails went limp.”) Attempts to

practice the dance but cannot do it, showing she is trying to become integrated but falls short (“a

private mass of twitch and foam”). She doesn’t want to claim a common language with Jeanette

showing she is uncertain about full integration into human society since Jeanette has accepted the

adaptation fully. Says she is still “pretending” in church but is forgetting her wolf mother, which shows

she is between cultures.

Stage 4 Text Evidence: The epigraph states that everything should begin to make sense but Claudette

fails at executing the dance. This shows it doesn’t make sense but she is still trying to adapt. Her self-

confidence waned instead of grew. She is getting closer to becoming human as she mentions she

smells like a purebred girl but then flattens her ears. She is not acting consistent with the Stage 4

epigraph, thus revealing she is falling short of full integration. Turning on Mirabella during the dance

shows she is integrated but then gives one last communal howl, showing she has not let go of all wolf

characteristics.

Stage 5 Text Evidence: The timing of the visit to the parents is uncertain. This visit could have occurred

before or after the school dance incident, thus, revealing that there is uncertainty to Claudette’s full

integration. She couldn’t find her way back home (“the woodsman had to accompany me”), but she

was willing to return, showing a lack of clarity as to whether she is truly integrated. She is sad about

returning which could mean she hasn’t fully accepted her own adaptation. She looks different (“My

mother recoiled from me, as if I was a stranger.”) and has to duck her head, showing her human

characteristics but then there is a recognition (“After all the tail wagging and perfunctory barking had

died down …”), showing she may remain between the cultures.

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Vocabulary

Vocabulary to provide directly (will not include extended instruction)”

· None.

Vocabulary to teach (may include direct word work and/or text-dependent questions)”

· [INSTRUCTIONAL NOTE: Students will use key vocabulary and terminology in their assessments. See

Lesson 16 for vocabulary list.]

Lesson Agenda/Overview

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· Standards: RL.9-10.3, W.9-10.2, RL.9-10.1

· Text: "St. Lucy's Home for Girls Raised by Wolves" (pp. 225–246)

• Introduction of Lesson Agenda

• Homework Accountability

• End-of-Unit Assessment

• Closing

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End-of-Unit Assessment Recording Sheet

Use the space below to record areas of assessment components for students to demonstrate

proficiency on the unit’s standards in the first column. Record in the second column student supports

embedded in the lesson that provides scaffolds to support students’ success. Discuss with your

partner.

Lesson 17 Assessment Components Lesson 16 Scaffolding Supports

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Test Blueprint: New York State Regents Examination in English Language Arts (Common Core)

Test Part Suggested Time

Standards Addressed

(coverage will vary)

Text Description Student Task

PART 1

READING

COMPREHENSION

60 minutes

RL.1-6, 10

RI.1-6, 8-10

L.3-5

2 – 3 texts

Up to approximately 2,600

words total

Each test will contain at least

one literature and one

informational text.

Students will perform a close reading of the texts and answer 24 multiple-

choice questions.

PART 2

WRITING FROM

SOURCES

90 minutes

RL.1-6,10-11

RI.1-10

W.1, 4,9

L.1-6

2 – 5 texts

Up to approximately 2,600

words total

Each test will contain at least

two informational texts and,

in addition, may contain

graphics or one literature

text.

Students will perform a close reading of the texts and write a source-based

argument, as directed by the task.

PART 3

TEXT ANALYSIS

30 minutes

RL.1-6, 10

RI.1-6, 8-10

W.2,4,9

L.1-6

1 text

Up to approximately 1,000

words

Each test will contain one

literature or one

informational text.

Students will perform a close reading of the text and write a two to three

paragraph response that identifies a central idea in the text and analyzes how

the author’s use of one writing strategy (literary element or literary technique

or rhetorical device) develops this central idea.

Overall, the test requires that students read closely 5-9 texts of up to approximately 6,200 words and that they answer 24 multiple-choice questions, write one source-based argument, and one text-

based response that identifies a central idea in the text and analyzes how the author’s use of one writing strategy develops this central idea. The test assesses Common Core Learning Standards in

Reading, Writing and Language for the Grade 11-12 span, but, due to the integrative and cumulative nature of the standards, items may also assess standards in earlier grade bands. Exact standard

coverage will vary from test to test based on the texts and writing tasks used.

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Regent’s Sample Assessment Items

Part 2: Writing From Sources Example Task

Your Task:

• Carefully read each of the five texts provided. Then, using evidence from at least four of the

texts, write a well-developed argument regarding the success of the Federal Theatre Project.

• Clearly establish your claim, distinguish your claim from alternate or opposing claims, and use

specific and relevant evidence from at least four of the texts to develop your argument.

• Do not simply summarize each text.

Part 3: Text Analysis Example Item

Guidelines – Be sure to:

• Identify a central idea in the text.

• Analyze how the author’s use of one writing strategy (literary element or literary technique or

rhetorical device) develops this central idea.

o Examples include: characterization, conflict, denotation/connotation, metaphor, simile,

irony, language use, point-of-view, setting, structure, symbolism, theme, tone, etc.

• Use strong and thorough evidence from the text to support your analysis.

• Organize your ideas in a cohesive and coherent manner.

• Maintain a formal style of writing.

• Follow the conventions of standard written English.

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Note Catcher

Session Reflections Use the space below to record your thinking from this session. Think about ways to share your learning

back at your school with your colleagues.

Reflection Questions

How does the tightly aligned assessment, standards, and activities support your work?

How will the assessment component, which includes both formative and summative, help you

monitor student learning?

What are the next steps in using assessment data to inform your instruction?

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