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Blog feedback
Consider this to improve
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Don’t have long list of pics/videos
These are much better
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Excelllleeennntttt!
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More visuals needed!
• This planning is basic!• Doesn’t show media skills!
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Good music research
• Finding music takes long!• Don’t forget about this!!!!!!!!!!!!• Bad music can ruin an OTS
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Independent work and good presentation
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Bad time management!
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Poor presentation of textDiff text
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Good presentation/research evidence
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Great presentation of text
Bullet points, bold, underline, consistent font etc…. = good!
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Poor presentation
You can change this in layout/template/settings
Everyone needs to brand their blog !!!!!!!
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Incorrect format!
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Good range for location planning
Ummmmmm really?? LEVEL 1!!!!!!
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Level 1 planning
Name the assignment!!!!!!!
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Good photos of production but need caption and better presentation/organisation
Other good stuffShows engagement with research(not just a simple video or block of text)
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Great use of screen grabs and new media technology
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More great tech evidence
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Title and work don’t match!
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Incorrect format?(tip – look at the model)
It should be this!
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Blogs with good aspects…..
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Well done to a good start
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Overall• Most people have not finished all research and planning tasks
• More technology/websites to present work (most photos)
• Most people are in level 1 due to incompletion
• A lot of work is VERY minimal and rushed, however some good have made good use of time and great effort.
• Use this week to get caught up! Free periods, afterschool etc !!!!!!!!!!
• Include test shots/footage to show PROGRESS!!!!!!