ANKARA UNIVERSITY

SCHOOL OF FOREIGN LANGUAGES

WRITING FOLDER BOOKLET

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WW Wrong Word

My parents met me to an important politician.

My parents introduced me to an important politician.

WP Wrong Preposition

The book is over the table.

The book is on the table

WT Wrong Tense

Because I was tired, I go to bed early.

Because I was tired, I went to bed early.

WF Wrong Form

He is a nicely person.

He is a nice person.

WO Wrong Order

When was I kid, I liked ice cream very much.

When I was kid, I liked ice cream very much.

SC Faulty Sentence Construction

Because I was ill. I couldn’t attend the meeting.

Because I was ill, I couldn’t attend the meeting.

P Punctuation

Where is your brother. ------ Where is your brother?

SP Spelling

I am takeing a French course.

I am taking a French course.

CAP Capitalisation

I live in ankara. ------ I live in Ankara.

S/V Subject-Verb Agreement

He is one of the writers who have achieved national

recognition. He is one of the writers who has achieved national

recognition.

PL/SNG Plural or Singular Noun

There are many student waiting in the hall.

There are many students waiting in the hall.

EW Extra Word

I came across with an old friend of mine yesterday.

I came across an old friend of mine yesterday.

MW Missing Word

At an international university, you can meet people from

different parts of * world and make friends that will last a

lifetime.

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I am of the opinion that we should not prohibit children from

talking in the hallways entirely and completely.

We should allow children to talk in the hallways on occasion.

RW Rewrite the Sentence

I expect to brought you merry chance.

I wish you good luck.

Sample proofreader’s corrections

Whenww rush hour, a Canadian man and his tenagesp son got atwp my cap and asked me to take them to La

Guardian Airport. They were going back to canadap. We had a nice conversation together and when they got out,

gave me (to) a good tip.

When my next passongarsp got in, he handed me a wallet which he found on the back seat. I immediately knew

it belonged to aww Canadian man. It contained a driving license and a credit card, nothing else.

I called (to) the number on the back of the credit card and explained the situation to the person who was working

at the credit card company. thenp I gave my phone number. Laterww about half an hour, the Canadian man call-wf

me and told ^ that he was waiting ^ me in front of the airport.

Inwp the way to the airport, five or six people tried to stop me, but I didntp stop as I was in a hurry. Forty five

minutes later, I arrived towp the airport. The guy is standingwt outside the terminal building. He looked stressed. I

gave the wallet to the guy and told him that I had only done a little shopping with his credit ^! Just a joke. He was

very happy to get his wallet back. “You’re my favorite New Yorker ever,” he said. Then he handed me fifty dollars

and ran back into the airport. The whole thing – plus the fifty dollars! – really doneww my night.

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During rush hour, a Canadian man and his teenage son got in my cap and asked me to take them to La Guardian

Airport. They were going back to Canada. We had a nice conversation together and when they got out, they gave

me a good tip.

When my next passenger got in, he handed me a wallet which he found on the back seat. I immediately knew

it belonged to the Canadian man. It contained a driving license and a credit card, nothing else.

I called the number on the back of the credit card and explained the situation to the person who was working

at the credit card company. Then I gave my phone number. After about half an hour, the Canadian man called me

and told me that he was waiting for me in front of the airport.

On the way to the airport, five or six people tried to stop me, but I didn’t stop as I was in a hurry. Forty five

minutes later, I arrived at the airport. The guy was standing outside the terminal building. He looked stressed. I

gave the wallet to the guy and told him that I had only done a little shopping with his credit card! Just a joke. He

was very happy to get his wallet back. “You’re my favorite New Yorker ever,” he said. Then he handed me fifty

dollars and ran back into the airport. The whole thing – plus the fifty dollars! – really made my night.

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WRITING EVALUATION RUBRIC FOR L3 WRITING FOLDER

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Well-expressed and appropriate claim (thesis statement)

All major ideas fully relevant to support the claim and the focus (controlling idea)

Each minor supporting idea provided developed thoroughly in a coherent structure including explanations and/or examples

Clearly signalled supporting ideas (directly stated or implied)

Cohesion maintained via accurately used cohesive devices

Well-expressed and appropriate concluding paragraph

Message communicated clearly with accurate language use except for a few instances

A good range of grammatical structures

A good range of lexical items

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3.5 – 4 pts.

Appropriate claim but minor problems in expression

Almost all major ideas fully relevant to support the claim and the focus

Each minor supporting idea developed to an acceptable extent through explanations and/or examples

Clearly signalled supporting ideas (directly stated or implied)

Cohesion mostly maintained via some accurately used cohesive devices

Appropriate concluding paragraph but minor problems in expression

Message mostly communicated with acceptable language use but communication breaks down in a few instances due to errors

An acceptable range of grammatical structures

An acceptable range of lexical items

Accurate punctuation and spelling with some exceptions

5 – 6 pts.

BORDERLINE (DEVELOPING)

2.5 – 3 pts.

Appropriate claim but poorly expressed

Most major ideas relevant to the claim and the focus

Minor supporting ideas developed to some extent through explanations and/or examples

Supporting ideas (directly stated or implied) signalled but poorly

Cohesion maintained to some extent via the use of cohesive devices, but some errors

Appropriate concluding paragraph but poorly expressed

Message communicated with acceptable language use but communication breaks down in some instances due to errors

A limited range of grammatical structures

A limited range of lexical items

Accurate punctuation and spelling with some exceptions

3 – 4 pts.

BORDERLINE

FAIL (INADEQUATE)

1.5 – 2 pts.

Appropriate claim but serious language errors in expression

Some major ideas relevant to the claim and the focus

Some attempt to develop minor supporting ideas thoroughly through explanations and/or examples but insufficient

Supporting ideas (directly stated or implied) signalled but poorly

Attempt to maintain cohesion via the use of cohesive devices but includes frequent errors

No or poor concluding paragraph

Message communicated but communication breaks down frequently due to errors

Little variety in grammatical structures

Little variety in lexical items

Frequent punctuation and spelling mistakes

2 pts.

FAIL

(BEGINNING)

1 pt.

No claim or one that involves serious language errors in expression that interfere with comprehension

Few major ideas relevant to the claim and the focus

Little or no attempt to develop minor supporting ideas thoroughly through explanations and/or examples

Supporting ideas (directly stated or implied) not signalled

No concluding paragraph

Disconnected sentences due to inaccurately used or lack of cohesive devices

Frequent disruption in communication due to frequent errors

No variety in grammatical structures

No variety in lexical items, inaccurate word choices

Frequent punctuation and spelling mistakes

0 – 1 pt.

IRRELEVANT &

NO ATTEMPT

0 – 0.5 pt.

The text addresses the topic from an aspect other than that indicated by the focus (off-topic)

All major ideas irrelevant to the claim

A large number and type of errors that obscure meaning

The text uses a different type of writing

A response at this level merely copies words from a source, contradicts the topic or is written in a different language or blank.

It cannot be read because it is illegible.

It consists of lists, notes, etc. rather than sentences and paragraphs.

The amount of writing is too minimal to be evaluated.

TITLE: NOT necessary (Do not deduct any points)

ESSAY TYPE: Necessary (Use Irrelevant & No Attempt band score to evaluate different essay types)

ESSAY FORMAT: Necessary - In cases of formats other than essay (i.e. single-paragraphed structure): Use Irrelevant & No Attempt band score.

WORD LIMIT: Minimum 180 words (Drafts = Deduct 1 point for fewer) (Exams = Deduct 2 points for fewer)

LATE SUBMISSION OF THE 2ND DRAFT: Deduct 1 point.

PUNCTUATION