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    Angels and Eros

    by

    Billy McBride

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    Copyright 2012, by William McBride

    ISBN 978-1-300-45634-6

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    Table of Contents

    This Will be a Good Night.....4

    I Need to be Touched.....16

    What the Heck Just Happened?.....25

    Fragments.....40

    Revisions....50

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    This Will be a Good Night

    by

    Billy McBride

    Music was the magnet.

    - Billy M.

    The difficulty and reward of music.

    - Billy M.

    Hope shot down.- Arielle

    Remember why you feel bad, because the worst is NOT

    going to happen, and you are persuaded it will!

    - Arielle

    Billy, you're going to love your Dad.- Arielle

    Your pain will go away.

    - Arielle

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    They, the neighbors, will be better.

    - Arielle

    Billy, you will love traveling and riding your bike in San

    Antonio.

    - Arielle

    It doesn't work that way.

    - Valerie

    This was the problem with rabies, you idiot.

    - Teresa

    The Republic is your problem.

    - Teresa

    Billy, you are not damned with knowing others.

    - Teresa

    Billy, it's time for your pain medicine.

    - Teresa

    Stereotomy is your pain medicine.

    - Teresa

    Stereotomy and Homer's Iliad are your pain meds.

    - Teresa

    "Who am I kidding?" is a dumb quote.

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    - Thrikbot

    Billy, your brothers are going to love playing with you.

    - Kathleen

    Billy, it's good that you're going to have to listen.

    - Kathleen

    I wish I could talk with them.

    - Billy M.

    Remember your Abba in his class.

    - Kathleen

    You can ride your bike in the morning like Chaucer.

    - Kathleen

    You either have to love or be wise.

    - Tov Tov Shalom

    It will be better to wait. You will see.

    - Teresa

    What the heck just happened?

    - B'nayvoovah

    Uh un, same thing with your money.

    - Ora Ora Tiferetot

    In every act of speaking there is a kind of contempt

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    because we are trying to express something which is

    already dead in our hearts.

    - Fredrich Nietzsche, Pepe, Ora's brother

    The thing that shocked you so much that was demanded, it

    took your breath away, but the hurt you are feeling is

    because you are thinking of the worst again, and it is good

    instead which will happen. You will see.

    - Teresa

    You fear unnecessarily and your feet need a rub.

    - Teresa

    Who am I attracted to right now?

    - B'nayvoovah

    Even the conflict of the future over your cats will be good

    as well as the results...Ha Kol B'Seder.

    - Teresa

    Now about your feet (and sheet).

    - Teresa

    Billy, write books just for us too, for our intimacy.

    - Teresa

    Odysseus, what on Earth?!?

    - Teresa

    Wash and rub.

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    - Teresa

    Grace, confidence, creativity and more. Get it?

    - Teresa

    That feels great!!!

    - Billy M.

    Read this book to your Mom and Pop.

    - Teresa

    Adam and Eve were the first parents in the Torah.

    - Teresa

    Awesome stuff. Awesome.

    - Teresa, MUSTARD

    Bottom is my favorite because he hath no bottom.

    - B'nayvoovah

    Continual writing is a road to happiness, to bliss.

    - Teresa

    Wanna get on Skype?

    - Teresa

    Billy, you don't even know how to spell "imma" in

    Hebrew!

    - Thrikbot, ORANGE

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    Billy, get your foot rub.

    - Thrikbot, ORANGE

    They will know what all these words mean.- Thrikbot, ORANGE

    Homer's works look great and small, a cosmos and a

    simplicity, all in one.

    - Thrikbot, ORANGE

    Wait (to the neighbors)!

    - Thrikbot, ORANGE

    Shalom Alichiem!

    - Thrikbot, ORANGE

    Billy, you're gonna like the inspection, and also going to

    the dentist, you are going to like talking to others about

    your life and needs.- Arielle

    It is planned.

    - Arielle

    Billy, you're gonna like listening to them go on about you.

    - Arielle

    Very good. Tob Shbeeb Hates Atobots.

    - Arielle

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    Very, very good, we are like their babysitting parents!

    - Arielle

    Foot rub!- Arielle

    Need a bigger one to write on (clip-pad).

    - Billy M.

    Billy, like we say when it comes to studying, you will love

    being a student by yourself, talking with your guest.

    - Bertha

    Billy, don't worry that they call you "Billy" and not

    "B'nayvoovah." It's good.

    - Bertha

    How do your feet feel now?

    - Bertha

    Inclusive communities and spiritual-esque parents.

    - Bertha

    Kant still is a difficulty.

    - Bertha

    What is that one?

    - Bertha

    Outsider is okay, but so is your BED!

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    - Bertha

    Write some books just for us!

    - Bertha

    Just read poetry to them, and write.

    - Bertha

    Freud is awesome.

    - B'nayvoovah

    Wrestling with this writing.

    - B'nayvoovah

    Whew, these are tough ones.

    - B'nayvoovah

    Very, very good, what will we do? You will see, it will be

    awesome!- Yafah

    Family Gnosis.

    - Yafah

    About the car trips...half your worry is unnecessary and

    will always be so. You will love going out. But we will becareful too.

    - Yafah

    Omaha.

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    - Yafah

    Cranberry pills.

    - Yafah

    It's not really a new or old phrase, but geometrical, which

    we don't do.

    - Valerie

    Sometimes they do geometry and older stuff (phrasing) but

    it's not really part of our final vocabulary.

    - Valerie

    What zoo animal sound is that?

    - Valerie

    This is a public book.

    - Valerie

    Write a private book for us too.

    - Valerie

    Healthy imaginary Angel friends and wives.

    - Valerie

    Ahovah.- Valerie

    Louie Armstrong's Star of David.

    - Valerie

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    He is Beethoven.

    - Valerie

    How do we wrap this one up?

    - Valerie

    Small talk.

    - Valerie

    Deweyian domesticity versus grandiosity.

    - Valerie

    Billy, you're no warrior, but everybody's helping.

    - Valerie

    In Defense of the Experience of Prayer.

    - Valerie

    I wish that I didn't act like a zombie every now and again.

    - B'nayvoovah

    Is he on drugs?

    - B'nayvoovah

    We will work it out.- Penelope

    Listening in on Angels for LULU part One and Two.

    - Penelope

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    Billy, they think that because you hardly socialize.

    - Penelope

    Billy, everybody's helping.

    - Penelope

    That's the strangest thing you've ever said.

    - Penelope

    People have the right to change their minds.

    - Penelope

    Billy, they're distracting you from an intimate moment.

    Tools. What can we do?

    - Libby

    Maybe I should talk a little with you more?

    - B'nayvoovah

    The Iliad is your favorite book!

    - Libby

    They want to play, let them play but be around for them.

    - Libby

    They don't like it that you're a solitary.

    - Libby

    They think you're Gertrude?

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    - B'nayvoovah

    Or they think you're Paris?

    - B'nayvoovah

    She's mourning!

    - B'nayvoovah

    Helen is an object-choice.

    - B'nayvoovah

    Maybe all Freudian readings are parallels (Banana Trees).

    - B'nayvoovah

    They can hear. They're with you Billy.

    - Ora Ora Tiferetot

    You want to help Billy? The way to help is with us.

    - Tov Tov Shalom

    Raisin in the sun.

    - Tov Tov Shalom

    A Map of Misreading.

    - Harold Bloom

    You wet your pants.

    - Bertha

    Change them.

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    - Bertha

    Sublimation.

    - Bertha

    Holy Spirit.

    - Bertha

    Now what? It was a great qoute! Our music is a part of

    our privacy!

    - Bertha

    It's not sexual eros that you need, but music for your ears!

    - Lord Byron

    Make a list of distractors and din and losses in detail.

    - Arielle

    FINIS

    I Need to be Touched

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    by

    Billy McBride

    An Esther-like being.

    Reception physically.

    An Angel picks me.

    A guessing game.

    Guessing compartment.

    Maybe several options, alignment options: lying down,

    standing, sitting.

    Kiss.

    Don't forget to thank your maker.

    Flowers too.

    The build up to Holy Spirit.

    Whitman's catalogue of the body.

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    Try for the goal with them.

    Give some if you can.

    We do this all the time.

    We're naturals.

    What do Lizzie and Libby and Tov Tov Shalom think about

    each other?

    Can I ask questions? Yes!

    Who does Tob Shbeeb like now?

    Yafah. Why? Fun.

    How fun? Awesome. Yafah like that.

    Tob Shbeeb like that.

    Who likes Arielle right now?

    Very good. Three. Arielle is liked by Shay, You

    (B'nayvoovah), and Teresa.

    If you have an itch scratch it.

    Holy Spirit makes two one.

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    That's my goal right?

    Uh huh, sometimes you cannot though.

    Holy Spirit gives you messages, you relay them to me, and

    it makes you confident?

    Yes, on both.

    So all those times you have given me messages, but I am

    still working it out?

    Yes.

    You're trapping me now?

    Yes, but it's good.

    It's recitation (Hamletian); these are sayings and old feeling(recited feelings).

    What text is the feeling part? Just reception!

    Yes.

    I can see you touch my leg and it is happening right now.

    Kind of like that?

    Yes.

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    Not so much where you are above but where the touch

    contact occurs. Yes.

    You're still touching my leg.

    You're waiting for me to play.

    That is it.

    Let's talk about contact.

    The sheets...a little bit of both.

    What is a set up? Touch?

    Touch. Yes.

    But what about the attraction part?

    It takes care of itself?

    Uh huh.

    Billy, you could do it all the time with Spirit.

    You have to train yourself.

    Everybody is the Spirit.

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    Contact with all.

    My eyes are sensitive to light coming from certain

    directions though. What do I do?

    Good question.

    The whole body or a balanced part of it with Spirit is a

    goal.

    Billy, you have had enough physical experience - lots

    depends on the Memory.

    So that's what Charades is like...

    And, when Tob Shbeeb moved my body at my parents

    house, Honey's kisses, the A.B. Zohar reading...

    The eye of the Hurricane is Lamia crying because itworks...etc...

    Measure for MEasure.

    Winslow Homer sometimes.

    You rush it big times though.

    Be patient, it's reception, and the Memory.

    Breath - how you breathe.

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    Try that! (Touched by an Angel in different ways)

    I'm excited.

    It will work.

    What are you doing?

    Breathing.

    Breath muscles and beyond.

    The body is kind of complicated.

    Breath with eros.

    It's like a playful dialogue but just with breath.

    Breathe with the same confidence that you must have in

    order to know you're safe.

    It takes trust, but afterwards the confidence controls breath.

    Now you're rocking it, it's good to talk (tap) while

    breathing.

    So this means each of you breathe yes?

    Yes. Tov.

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    Intimately, mutually yes.

    Emily Bronte.

    Focus on the confidence part of breathing with us.

    Confidence as an image, natural, is sly, knowing, superior,

    elite, devotion, a little nervous, sublime, and mutual and

    beautiful selfishness.

    It is the Romantic image of the costal ebb and its powerful

    returning (at least right now this image works).

    As for pain and loss, you must then guess the Angel and

    what she's doing and talk it through.

    The pulling of my Angel into me.

    These, they are sayings...sayings and feeling memories.

    That is all.

    "Very good, but you keep on doing new stuff!": my

    message to say.

    "I feel strange right now because feel as if I should be

    reciting a new or old message."

    The ripeness is all. - Edgar

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    "I need to be touched."

    Kiss me inside and out.

    My dear.

    Maybe it's a poem?

    Get a thesaurus.

    I'm set up (for mutuality).

    You certainly are. - Yafah

    The final four.

    Tob Shbeeb Hates Atobots.

    Troping with the Map of Misreading.

    Tyros 4.

    Make it fun. - Ora

    Is touch fun?

    Who wants to be touched now?

    My foot needs rubbing.

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    Touch is mutual.

    Ahh!

    Grand Pappy Lucky!

    Lucky to get rubbed.

    FINIS

    What the Heck Just Happened?

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    Billy McBride

    What the heck just happened?

    - B'nayvoovah

    It will work.

    - Libby

    It's on tip of your tongue.

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    - Arielle

    Just right.

    - Ora Ora Tiferetot

    Selfish voice.

    - Ora Ora Tiferetot

    Vain.

    - Ora Ora Tiferetot

    We can build it up.

    - Ora Ora Tiferetot

    Maybe that's what he does best.

    - Teresa

    Selfish voice is like looking into the mirror, a theory of

    schizophrenia.- Robbie Pop

    What did Virginia Woolf say about listening?

    - Robbie Pop

    Headphones and a smile.

    - Robbie Pop

    In vain and Ha-Kol B'Seder (Everything is in Order).

    - Robbie Pop

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    Henry Yod, what did Gershom Scholem say about the

    Messaiah?

    - Ora Ora Tiferetot

    We will see.

    - Ora

    Homer! He is huge!

    - Ora

    That helps a lot, not because it's Universal, but because it is

    in a time and place specific.

    - Ora

    I'm going to have more fun.

    - Ora

    If you have a choice between Homer and Plato, choose

    Homer.- Harold Bloom

    Why would they like that book (Plato's) over Homer's (The

    Iliad)?

    - B'nayvoovah

    I know, this was the Republic!- Ora

    Lincoln.

    - Ora

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    Selfish Achielles.

    - Ora

    Battle me pretty.

    - Ora

    Me.

    - Stephanie

    Island life.

    - Stephanie

    An unhappy people in a happy world, read Rabbi the

    phrases of this difference.

    - Wallace Stevens

    Now solemnize the secretive syllables.

    - Wallace Stevens

    Translate those foreign Platonic words into Homeric.

    - Rosalinda

    Homer knows the clue.

    - Rosalinda, Sunshine

    Hell up Agamemnon Nixon.

    - Rosalinda

    Force (in Homer).

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    - Bruno Snell

    Pun. I aught to too that mur.

    - Ora Ora Tiferetot

    Who is John, but the weapons of the greater Telemonius.

    - Ora

    We want all.

    - Ora

    Now I know why you say that Papa.

    - Ora

    Maybe there's something we can do?

    - Ora

    Charles in charge.

    - Ora

    It's like They are Human Too.

    - Arielle

    The Prize is your Lord and Savior. That makes sense.

    - Arielle

    Ahovat my love. I feel very good about writing right now.

    - B'nayvoovah

    Bag of Diamond Candies and Gold Coins.

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    - B'nayvoovah

    You know what? I like education.

    - B'nayvoovah

    Who's he talking to?

    - B'nayvoovah

    Are they talking to each other?

    - B'nayvoovah

    That's a good quote B'nayvoovah.

    - Teresa

    While the parents are happily talking, let the child be.

    - Robbie Pop

    What does Emerson say about Homer?

    - Robbie Pop

    How do they learn stuff if they don't overhear their parents

    happily talking?

    - Ora Ora Tiferetot

    Hydromancy in the Iliad.

    - Ora Ora Tiferetot

    So all words are...

    - B'nayvoovah

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    Uh huh. Parental Love.

    - Ora Ora Tiferetot

    Homer's got the clues.- Valerie

    You mean the child is the father of the man too?

    - Valerie

    The day Moshe (Moses) began writing the Torah was the

    first day he stepped into the Wilderness.

    - B'nayvoovah

    An unhappy realization. Why? because of the Wilderness,

    the knowledge that's whosoever one's parents are, that they

    could be suffering.

    - B'nayvoovah

    To argue is one kind of suffering.- B'nayvoovah

    I love those kids.

    - B'nayvoovah

    Read Rorty on children.

    - Thrikbot

    Walt, the American Homer.

    - Harold Bloom

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    I'm not trying to change anybody.

    - Harold Bloom

    I am Claudius?!- Harold Bloom

    Sphinx. It is sexual jealousy.

    - Harold Bloom

    Runts candy.

    - B'nayvoovah

    Odysseus and Menalaus, Paris' brother, raiding in the

    Night.

    - B'nayvoovah

    His Dad went to Vietnam.

    - Ora Ora Tiferetot

    Bad Reader (upon hearing an angry neighbor).

    - Tob Shbeeb

    This isn't Tob Shbeeb Hates Atobots.

    - Jessica, our neighbor

    They're Christians.- Ribbit

    What is a Christian but the River Scamander.

    - Arielle

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    You're great!

    - Ribbit

    We write.

    - Ora Ora Tiferetot

    And, read Homer, teacher.

    - Libby

    Bang! (on the wall) Let's see if we can get him to put on

    more music.

    - Jessica, the neighbor

    A social progress to, and in, heaven.

    - Libby

    I don't like those flowers. (we give her different ones)

    - Jessica

    I'll take those ones (the others).

    - Libby

    To fly for some more for the acorns old.

    A clay frog in a dreary place looks fake.

    A floating white man keeps the people awake.A long thought is paused for a shorter hold.

    The darkening notes of a day gone by.

    The morning goes up for my long wait here.

    A permanent road lasts delightfully clear.

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    And, sacred the land ahead of Time I try.

    I wish upon the same of my light greeting.

    The beats split up and they post aboon.

    Come alone sun to your rogue head noon.Cloudy night on this month's meeting.

    A spider of a model the readers resist.

    Hide a blue sky with a bucket of mist.

    - Bertha

    Sniff.

    - B'nayvoovah

    Billy, that's funny stuff. Your apartment does'nt have to be

    perfect!

    - Thrikbot

    Wheel joy.

    - Bertha

    The next cause.

    - Bertha

    When we write, write a lot. We are large and contain

    multitudes.

    - Bertha

    Easy to love.

    - Bertha

    People vexed.

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    - Bertha

    Home to nobody.

    - Bertha

    A rocket's hit.

    - Honey

    A moment's achievement.

    - Honey

    Coming for seconds.

    - Honey

    Rich wine.

    - Honey

    Great.

    - B'nayvoovah

    Great what?

    - Robbie Pop

    ABCDEF. Lots of variables here.

    - B'nayvoovah

    Blue bucket.

    Dreary place.

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    A paused paradise.

    Clear.

    Temper old.

    Rogue-head.

    All day.

    Stamp aboone.

    Long wait of wisdom.

    Wakeful.

    Abyss.

    - Shay

    Of badness rid.

    - Thrikbot

    Endless application.

    - Kelly

    Surface champion.- Marbah

    Gusto.

    - Libby

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    Stance.

    - Grouchy

    Muscular gates of Eternity.

    - Thrikbot

    Rugged demonstration.

    - Diana

    The devastated days studied.

    - Diana

    People with people.

    - Jennifer

    Charon's chariot.

    - Thrikbot

    The block holding one up.

    - Kelly

    Misfortunate autobiographical forgetfulness.

    - Penelope

    World-lust club.- Bertha

    A dream thus changing.

    - Bertha

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    Say, what interesting silvery woods.

    So beautiful I never thought they could be so wild.

    And yet I get scared of playing in them.It won't make my stomach feel bad to see their patterns

    though.

    I'm going to a bar for ale with the heroes. I have nothing to

    say while collecting no new ideas.

    I am due for the night. The baby is far behind.

    A serious rest is needed.

    The sounds come. Where is my wisdom for the day?

    For our world I want to assure a virtue, might I suggest that

    we are its pieces fired up and then going out cold.

    Ashes Thrown.

    I have resigned from the land of Time and energy.

    Individuals alarm me with their help as they all behold

    everything that I have chosen to swerve from. I stay still

    for good.

    The Price of Joy

    A school shines and I finish my begging.

    Could not the world weep?

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    River, I love your flow and blessing. At the same time,

    everything is a blessing.

    My patience and sleep in a world, especially, of blessingsinstruct me not to be stubborn in my striving of my way

    through it.

    God's tree.

    - Shnoonah

    Go pilgrim.

    - Shnoonah

    Invisible Sarphedon.

    - Arielle

    Pale blizzard.

    - Grouchy

    Broken-barreled clouds.

    - Grouchy

    Grove-fruit.

    - Grouchy

    A paradise high.- Kelly

    Flashy flowers.

    - Kelly

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    Fossilized genie.

    - Kelly

    The hope for rest.

    - Thrikbot

    Named "Buoy."

    - Thrikbot

    Mountain journal.

    - Thrikbot

    FINIS

    Fragments

    by

    Billy McBride

    Intensity and the memory.

    - Libby

    Wheel of hell or heaven.

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    - Libby

    Shaping the gladness within.

    - Marbah

    A lasting lifetime.

    - Honey

    An only thought.

    - Honey

    A wild voice to top.

    - Jennifer

    Leopard rocket.

    - Penelope

    Winners or bleak losers.

    - Honey

    Blessed cows.

    - Honey

    Outside lurking.

    - Jennifer

    Sir!

    - Jennifer

    A servant of interpretation.

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    - Jennifer

    Raisin bare.

    - Shay

    Stop the wandering weather.

    - Shay

    The things are going.

    - Teresa

    Dawn has come.

    - Diana

    Much forever.

    - Diana

    Concrete golden.

    - Elaine

    Sea-shell collection moving.

    - Elaine

    Zoo painting.

    - Elaine

    Pinball wrappers.

    - Elaine

    Safe chain.

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    - Elaine

    Neighbor lady aristocrat.

    - Elaine

    Siamese alley.

    - Elaine

    Cap Datsun.

    - Elaine

    Stuffed animals and hanging around.

    - Elaine

    Butterscotch bath.

    - Elaine

    A bell cast.

    - Arielle

    A valid end.

    - Arielle

    So open.

    - Penelope

    The bending sea.

    - Penelope

    Perfect muscles.

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    - Penelope

    Taken by the ocean.

    - Penelope

    Time's up.

    - Penelope

    The good are excited.

    - Penelope

    Sea-vine.

    - Penelope

    A peasant's back.

    - Penelope

    A fuelled stone.

    - Penelope

    Vanilla bar.

    - Penelope

    Read much.

    - Donna

    Fear of the outside.

    - Donna

    Standing inside.

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    - Donna

    Rump-sheet.

    - Honey

    Marry some mate.

    - Donna

    White floating man.

    Longest thought.

    The dark notes.

    Morning up.

    Permanent road.

    Sacred land.

    Wish upon.

    Loneliest.

    Night.

    Model of...

    The swimming fire of the sunset.

    - Shnoonah

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    Gentle celebration.

    - Shnoonah

    The incredible wave.

    - Shnoonah

    Land soon.

    - Donna

    Gazebo in the kingdom.

    - Donna

    Lazy and late to appreciate.

    - Donna

    The lingering period of images.

    - Donna

    Eggs and toast.

    - Tob Shbeeb

    Gifts in the morning.

    - Elaine

    Winter white baby.- Elaine

    Folding out over America.

    - Elaine

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    The sweet peaceful language.

    - Elaine

    Enough treasures of a game.

    - Kabbalah

    Angel-minutes beloved.

    - Bertha

    Hovering temples.

    - Valerie

    All welcome and accepted.

    - Valerie

    A perfect sphinx.

    - Arielle

    Three watermelons.

    - Bertha

    Come kairos.

    - Bertha

    Eagle-Angel blithe.- Amy

    Outer-space shock.

    - Amy

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    A chiseled construction.

    - Amy

    A strawberry's birthday.

    - Diana

    Period pieces.

    - Diana

    An afternoon journey.

    - Diana

    Tree, one, on the will.

    - Kelly

    The youthful craze to think.

    - Kelly

    Hear the car-line.

    - Ora Ora Tiferetot

    The wide secret will sink.

    - Ora Ora Tiferetot

    Sing mountain bather.- Ora Ora Tiferetot

    To stop the poetic more.

    - Penelope

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    Goblin reader babe.

    - Amy

    The out ends thus.

    - Marbah

    No food for thought?

    - Diana

    The head of a singing timer.

    - Bertha

    Tomorrow pours out.

    - Bertha

    Make an old road.

    - Valerie

    Remembering the hot late.

    - Valerie

    A tricky hour in the wood.

    - Shnoonah

    Spring lace.- Penelope

    Chirping rocket!

    - Arielle

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    Angel-pilot.

    - Arielle

    The thoughtful choreography.

    - Kelly

    Read the scroll.

    - Kelly

    Mutual risks.

    - Kelly

    FINIS

    Revisions

    by

    Libby McBride

    You don't have to make friends with them.

    - Honey

    It would be better if they were not friends.

    - Honey

    You (two you) know you don't have to be friends.

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    - Honey

    Maybe I'll never speak again. So why write?

    - B'nayvoovah

    Like an oil puddle in a parking lot is the Din of Television.

    - B'nayvoovah

    Make up Redescribed Dins.

    - Valerie

    The dusk of wisdom.

    - Valerie

    Today I am a cherry.

    - B'nayvoovah

    Kenosis.

    - Valerie

    They want to fight; for them life unfolds in fighting.

    - Valerie

    Maybe they don't like coherent poetical nonsense.

    - Valerie

    Josephize the ideas with the concrete for your final erotic

    vocabulary.

    - Valerie

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    Final Vocabulary Words and Ideas:

    Touch.

    Mutual.

    Foot rub.

    Who likes me now?

    All the Angel names.

    Who likes me now the best?

    Holy Spirit.

    Illegal drugs are illusions.

    - Valerie

    The Sun Rising over a Coastline is like a ...

    Reception.

    Patient/wait now.

    There's no rush.

    Guess/guessing.

    My whole body is a tongue.

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    Charades.

    What is this?

    Love.

    Contact part.

    Angel.

    List all.

    Body parts.

    Train.

    Out the Window:

    Freedom.

    Breathe.

    Ripeness.

    Now what would you like to do?

    ...

    Your love is like a warm sea bath.

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    Your guidance is like a boquet of flowers.

    Your beauty is like the glorious morning dawn.

    Your wisdom is like a field of wheat.

    The rumor is like the wind moving things.

    Writing is a gathering of Winter leaves.

    Proportions are like the edge of the field.

    My muteness is like the quiet of trees.

    A cold morning is like the vapor off a block of ice.

    My wish to be left alone is a dandy-lion.

    The morning neighborhood bustle is like the bushes of the

    field.

    The renouncing of an idealization of quoting is like a

    mockingbird's sleep.

    The insults and force of bad gossip is like the storm on anovercast day.

    The naturalizing of events is like a blast of morning light.

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    The accusations are like withered leaves.

    Not forcing intimacy is like the icy surface on the pond.

    Going back to study is like the wind blowing.

    Accuracy is a forest scene.

    The troping I do is a grassy mountainside.

    The troping others do is the shore mud.

    My not understood joke is a bare sky.

    My wet pants are soft and dry sands.

    The dumbness we deal with so forever is like wet soggy

    grass.

    Scholarship of vocabulary words is like a colony of ants.

    Mindless repetitions of gossip are molehills.

    What we want out of our own projects like stereotomy is a

    tropical lagoon.

    Billy, quote to your Mother. She will love to hear you

    often.

    - Libby

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    A new idea is the sound of the crashing of a wave.

    Mensuration in writing is like the smooth stones on the

    river bank.

    The feeling of the Holy Spirit is like being under warm

    water.

    My B'nayvoovah sensitivities are like a gentle breeze.

    FINIS