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ContentsAssignment One - A Critical Comparison of language and its effects in two short passages.....................................................................................................................2
Appendix.....................................................................................................................7
Extract from “Silas Marner” by George Eliot (1861).................................................7
Extract from “The Turn of the Screw” by Henry James (1898)................................8
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Assignment One - A Critical Comparison of language and its effects in two short passages.
This essay will examine the ways in which George Eliot, in an extract from “Silas
Marner” and Henry James, in an extract from “The Turn of the Screw”, use different
narrative styles, literary devices and sentence structure and to create an emotional
response toward the protagonists which leads to the reader determining the reliability
of the characters and the feelings of empathy or otherwise that are evoked as a
result.
The extracts chosen demonstrate episodes within the story of internal dialogue,
revolving around a crisis that the characters experience. In the extract from “Silas
Marner”, the protagonist is shown considering the theft of his gold and the course of
action which he should take. The extract from “The Turn of the Screw” shows the
reader the inner turmoil faced by the character of the governess as she ponders her
desire to confront her charge, Miles, and the perceived consequences of such a
confrontation.
James, by using first person narrative, gives the reader access to the thoughts of the
governess. The inner dialogue of this character from this narrative viewpoint gives
insight into her opinions as well as raising questions about her reliability. Although
the governess begins her interior dialogue with the assertion that ‘it would tax his
invention’ and asks the question ‘how the deuce would he get out of it?’, she quickly
changes from triumphalism to despair as she deduces that ‘he must know ... how he
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“had” me’ and that it was ‘useless to attempt to convey to Mrs. Grose’. This
vacillation indicates the underlying unreliability of the character and forces the reader
to consider her wavering viewpoint with a little less certainty. Her gloating tone as the
governess describes her feeling of ‘a curious thrill of triumph’ over his ‘real
embarrassment’ creates a negative reaction from the reader’s perspective; her
crowing makes it difficult to feel sympathy for her plight, even after her later
revelation that ‘He “had” me indeed, and in a cleft stick’.
Eliot, on the other hand, uses a 3rd person omniscient narrative perspective. Whilst
this does not allow for the direct presentation of the protagonist’s thoughts, Eliot
instead uses the detached viewpoint to describe to the reader the emotions that
Silas Marner is experiencing. The use of poetic language in describing the gold
which had ‘gone from him, and left his soul like a forlorn traveller on an unknown
desert’ and the possibility that it was ‘a cruel power that no hands could reach’
evokes a sympathetic response from the reader, as Silas Marner’s confusion and
loss are described in emotional terms. Silas Marner’s realisation that ‘false hopes
had vanished’ begins the description of his deductive processes and shows him
following logical steps to reach a conclusion After taking the rational decision to ‘fix
his effort on the robber with hands’, Silas Marner then makes, without the benefit of
the narrative viewpoint enjoyed by the reader, a reasonable guess at the identity of
the culprit and decides to follow the sensible course of reporting the crime to the
‘great people in the village’. This element of the plot shows that Silas Marner is
acting in a sensible, if slightly erroneous, way. This further reinforces the empathy
felt by the reader for the character, as they can identify with his plight and his course
of action.
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The reliability of the governess is further undermined by the way in which James
uses repetition to make her exclamations seem manic. The phrases ‘I had wondered
– oh, HOW I had wondered!’, ‘No, no’ and ‘never, never’ all serve to give the
impression of a character who is almost breathless in her desire to reinforce her own
decisions. The nature of these comments may also be read as a type of verbal tic
and impart a manic tone to her statements. Eliot uses repetition for the same
purpose as Marner considers ‘There were no footsteps to be tracked on such a night
– footsteps?’. This gives the reader the impression that Silas Marner has caught up a
thread of thought and is extrapolating a question from the statement. This gives a
stream of consciousness feel to the text, which allows the reader to feel that they are
experiencing his thoughts in a more direct manner than the narrative viewpoint would
normally allow. Because of the insight this gives the reader, it allows the reader to
feel closer to the plight of Silas Marner. In comparison, Eliot’s other use of repetition
in describing the rain as ‘falling more and more heavily’, is merely descriptive and is
not used in association with the character Silas Marner.
Eliot makes use of loose alliteration in the first sentence when Silas Marner
considers the idea of a thief as ‘he entertained it eagerly, because a thief might be
made to restore the gold’. This lends the sentence a poetic feel which serves to
engage the reader and gives what is a relatively long sentence a rhythmic feel. This
makes the sentence more palatable to the reader. James also employs alliteration in
the first sentence of the extract, although in a more direct form as the governess
describes the location where Quint had ‘hungrily hovered’. The use of this alliteration
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by James lends the character of Quint a malevolent air, forcing the reader to view
the apparition, from the perspective of the governess, as a malicious presence.
Sentence structure and length is an area in which the author’s styles differ. The
average sentence length in the extract from “The Turn of the Screw” is 36.5 words
per sentence, while the “Silas Marner” extract has an average sentence length of
25.1 words per sentence. Further, the longest sentence in the “The Turn of the
Screw” is 63 words long compared to 54 for “Silas Marner”. Although this might
appear to indicate that Eliot’s writing is more readable than James’s, the difference in
sentence length is a direct result of the number of adjectives used by James. In the
extract from “The Turn of the Screw” there are 16 adjectives. Eliot, by comparison,
uses a mere 6 adjectives. Thus, the main issue controlling the pace at which the
reader reads the prose can be seen to be the structure of the sentences, rather than
their length.
The use of sentence structure is more straightforward in the “Silas Marner” extract
and the sentence ‘or was it a cruel power that no hands could reach, which had
delighted in making him a second time desolate’ is the only sentence which could be
considered convoluted. The effect of this sentence on the reader is to create a poetic
feel to the sentence and reminds the reader that this is not the first misfortune to
have befallen Silas Marner. James, on the other hand uses a more convoluted
sentence structure for example:
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No, no: it was useless to attempt to convey to Mrs. Grose, just as it is scarcely
less so to attempt to suggest here, how, in our short, stiff brush in the dark, he
fairly shook me with admiration
The nature of this sentence, with its multiple parenthetical statements forces the
reader to have to pause to unravel the meaning of the sentence. By using this
technique, James reinforces in the reader the impression that the thoughts of the
protagonist are jumbled and somewhat disorganised.
Although the characters from both extracts share a sense of being wronged: Marner
through the theft of his gold and the governess through the perceived perfidious
nature of Miles, the way in which the characters responses are described obliges the
reader to consider more than just their circumstance. By using narrative viewpoint
and literary device, the authors have revealed aspects of the character’s
personalities and as a result have made the reader make judgements based on the
language used: Marner is shown as a sensible, logical character who is a victim of
circumstance, whereas the governess is shown as headstrong, undecided and
almost hysterical. The characters, as a result, evoke different emotions in the
readers: empathy for Marner and distrust for the governess. These responses are
central to the plot of both stories. Additionally, James demonstrates the use of
sentence structure as a pacing device, to control the reader’s comprehension and
impress an opinion of the protagonist upon them. Eliot uses straightforward sentence
structure to reflect the simpler nature of Silas Marner’s character which positions him
as a figure to be empathised with.
Word count: 1415
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Appendix
Extract from “Silas Marner” by George Eliot (1861)
Part 1, Chapter 5, Page 44-45
Penguin Classics Edition, Penguin Books 1997
And now that all the false hopes had vanished, and the first shock of certainty was past, the idea of a thief began to present itself, and he entertained it eagerly, because a thief might be caught and made to restore the gold. The thought brought some new strength with it, and he started from his loom to the door. As he opened it the rain beat in upon him, for it was falling more and more heavily. There were no footsteps to be tracked on such a night -- footsteps? When had the thief come? During Silas's absence in the daytime the door had been locked, and there had been no marks of any inroad on his return by daylight. And in the evening, too, he said to himself, everything was the same as when he had left it. The sand and bricks looked as if they had not been moved. Was it a thief who had taken the bags? or was it a cruel power that no hands could reach, which had delighted in making him a second time desolate? He shrank from this vaguer dread, and fixed his mind with struggling effort on the robber with hands, who could be reached by hands. His thoughts glanced at all the neighbours who had made any remarks, or asked any questions which he might now regard as a ground of suspicion. There was Jem Rodney, a known poacher, and otherwise disreputable: he had often met Marner in his journeys across the fields, and had said something jestingly about the weaver's money; nay, he had once irritated Marner, by lingering at the fire when he called to light his pipe, instead of going about his business. Jem Rodney was the man -- there was ease in the thought. Jem could be found and made to restore the money: Marner did not want to punish him, but only to get back his gold which had gone from him, and left his soul like a forlorn traveller on an unknown desert. The robber must be laid hold of. Marner's ideas of legal authority were confused, but he felt that he must go and proclaim his loss; and the great people in the village -- the clergyman, the constable, and Squire Cass -- would make Jem Rodney, or somebody else, deliver up the stolen money. He rushed out in the rain, under the stimulus of this hope, forgetting to cover his head, not caring to fasten his door; for he felt as if he had nothing left to lose. He ran swiftly, till want of breath compelled him to slacken his pace as he was entering the village at the turning close to the Rainbow
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Extract from “The Turn of the Screw” by Henry James (1898)
Chapter XI
Project Gutenburg edition
http://www.gutenberg.org/files/209/209-h/209-h.htm#2H_4_0004
As soon as I appeared in the moonlight on the terrace, he had come to me as straight as possible; on which I had taken his hand without a word and led him, through the dark spaces, up the staircase where Quint had so hungrily hovered for him, along the lobby where I had listened and trembled, and so to his forsaken room.
Not a sound, on the way, had passed between us, and I had wondered--oh, HOW I had wondered!--if he were groping about in his little mind for something plausible and not too grotesque. It would tax his invention, certainly, and I felt, this time, over his real embarrassment, a curious thrill of triumph. It was a sharp trap for the inscrutable! He couldn't play any longer at innocence; so how the deuce would he get out of it? There beat in me indeed, with the passionate throb of this question an equal dumb appeal as to how the deuce I should. I was confronted at last, as never yet, with all the risk attached even now to sounding my own horrid note. I remember in fact that as we pushed into his little chamber, where the bed had not been slept in at all and the window, uncovered to the moonlight, made the place so clear that there was no need of striking a match--I remember how I suddenly dropped, sank upon the edge of the bed from the force of the idea that he must know how he really, as they say, "had" me. He could do what he liked, with all his cleverness to help him, so long as I should continue to defer to the old tradition of the criminality of those caretakers of the young who minister to superstitions and fears. He "had" me indeed, and in a cleft stick; for who would ever absolve me, who would consent that I should go unhung, if, by the faintest tremor of an overture, I were the first to introduce into our perfect intercourse an element so dire? No, no: it was useless to attempt to convey to Mrs. Grose, just as it is scarcely less so to attempt to suggest here, how, in our short, stiff brush in the dark, he fairly shook me with admiration. I was of course thoroughly kind and merciful; never, never yet had I placed on his little shoulders hands of such tenderness as those with which, while I rested against the bed, I held him there well under fire. I had no alternative but, in form at least, to put it to him.
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