An essay about having a mobile phone.

Having mobile phone.

The issue of whether to agree with having mobile phone or not is a controversial one. Which has sparked a major debate. I will first discuss arguments supporting having mobile phone, after which some views against that will be explained.

There is no doubt, mobile phone has many benefits, the most important of which is that emergency situation. For example, you are driving by the freeway and the vehicle jams you are stuck in a lone place, again call somebody and ask for directions. Another advantage which could be taken into account is concern for children. For instance, parents can be a little less worried about their kids by being in constant touch with them. In addition, entertainment is another benefits. For example, nowadays, cell phones are not just phone calls; they're about messaging, video, songs, games, alarm clock, notes, calendar, reminder, etc. So one equipment, lots' of uses.

Turning to the drawbacks, there are several of them. Most significantly is that using incorrectly. For instance, some people (especially teens) get so much addicted to cell phones for talking, video, messaging, games, etc that they forget the real purpose of the phone and waste large part of their time in unnecessary interaction over their mobile phones. Moreover, bacteria and virus are another disadvantage. For example , the surface of a cell phone has millions of bacteria and virus on it and that can be a strong reason of immediate skin problem on face or can result into other internal infections wherein the microbes creep inside the body through mouth or other openings. The last disadvantage is damage to the environment. For example , the battery parts and other electronic parts of a cell phone can be environmental hazard.

In conclusion, although having mobile phones has many disadvantages such as environmental problems. I strongly believe that its benefits outweigh the drawbacks.

IELTS - Mobile Phone and its benefits

In today's world mobile phone has lot of use, it can be used for work-like situations and also for non-work situations, for instance if you have to call your friend who is thousands of miles away from you, you can reach him in a second and find his situation in minutes.

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Mobile phones are very useful, and they are used by societies all over the world. Some people use them for work, and some use them for everyday things. In an instant, a person can contat a friend who lives thousands of miles away.

It can also be used in emergency situation, when you have no way out cell phone is the best rescuer you have at that time. In this generation it is the need of every person, it can also be utilized for the internet so you have the best package on the go.

Another way you can say this: In case of an emergency, access to a mobile phone is important because a person can call for help. People of all ages need mobile phones. A person can also use their phone to get access to the internet on the go.

Using mobile phone while driving should be banned

Mobile Phone use while driving is common, but widely considered dangerous. Due to the number of accidents that are related to cell phone use while driving, some jurisdictions have made the use of a cell phone while driving illegal. I think use of cell phone while driving should be banned at any time, at any age or any circumstances.

Cell phones are also a major distraction to the driver, because it occupies one's eyes and attention which should be appointed on the road and though this causes an accident. Statistics showed that in 2009, 5,474 people were killed in the U.S. because of accidents that involved, distracted driving and another 448,000 were injured. Cell phones cause distraction and horrible accidents which even led to death.

In addition, phone use has been linked to slower reaction times. A study at the University of Utah that was published in the journal "Psychological Science" found that people who had conversations on any type of cell phone were twice as likely to hit the person in front of them, braked more slowly and accelerated more slowly after braking.

More importantly, it will put other people’s life in danger .The using cell-phone while driving; grabs driver’s attention then can easily lead to an accident and killing a person. Research has proven that in 2011, 28% of accidents–1.6 million crashes each year–on U.S. roadways involve texting and not paying attention to his/her driving. It is a great importance to understand that using cell-phones while driving can be a very risky business.

I know that we should not use our phone while driving but, when an emergency truly exist we should call 911 to report him or else an accident will occur. But this behavior is wrong because maybe they get into an accident. Thus, they should pull over and then make a call.

Cell phones are great devices that are useful is life but the using of cell phones while driving poses threats to the safety of drivers, their passengers and other road user. Over 50 countries have banned the use of cell phones while driving. Therefore to win the fight against the risk associated with cell phones while driving a combination of physician advocacy public education, medical community awareness, and change in legislations required to increase fines and penalties.

Mobile phone merits and defects.

Hey, could you please help check the grammar and add some comments of what you think of my essay. This is first time I write paper. I just practice writing for improve English skill.

The mobile phone has been affecting our life. Some people think that mobile phone is precondition. But others do not agree the idea, they insist that mobile phone should be banned in public places, because using of mobile phone in public places disturb others. In this paper, the advantage and the disadvantage will be discussed.

There is no doubt that mobile phone is the most fast and convenient means of communication. Many people think that mobile phone is much more than a means of communication.

While is has lots of merits, it also bring about lots of problems. Using of mobile phone in public places irritates other people. When they on the phone, they never concern about other's mood. Moreover mobile phone's electron wave leads to machine malfunction that cause big disasters such as air crash.

In conclusion, mobile phone user should learn to more considerate and observe some common rules of etiquette.

here are a few things i think could be different.

The mobile phone has (always affected) our life. Some people think that mobile phone is precondition. But others do not agree(with this) idea, they insist that (the) mobile phone should be banned in public places, because (the use of the) mobile phone in public places disturb(s) others. In this paper, the advantage(s) and the disadvantage(s) (of the mobile phone) will be discussed.

There is no doubt that (the) mobile phone is the (fastest) and (most) convenient means of communication. Many people (also) think that (the) mobile phone is much more than a means of communication.

While is has (a) lot of merits, it also bring(s) about lots of problems. Using (the) mobile phone in public places irritates other people. When they on the phone, they never (worry) about other(s') mood. Moreover mobile phone's electron wave(s) leads to machine malfunction(s) that cause big disasters such as air (plane) crash(es).

In conclusion, (the) mobile phone user should learn to (be) more considerate and observe some common rules of etiquette.

-those are mose of the grammar issues which i found.

-also, you could try replacing mobile phone with cell phone or just leave it out in some places because it gets really repetitive

Pros or cons of mobile phone

Mobile phone is a powful communication tool that almost everyone in this world is utilizing.Discussion now centres on whether this significant invention has exerted more positive or negative influence on people's life.While there are both benefits and drawbacks to a multicultural society, it is safe to say that the pros outweigh the cons.

Mobile phones build bridges across five continents which promote and facilitate people's communication. For business and commerce, people can stay in touch with their clients, employers with employees and so on. Now people can work outside their office and never be out of the information loops.

Further more, mobile phones can distribute informations as far as possible which is benefit for someone who has an emergency to report or is in danger. Mobiles can literally be a lifesaver.

The flip side though is that with an increasing popularity of mobile phones, people's obsession with convenience has meanwhile caused enormous disturbance. That's why the use of mobiles has been prohibited in some public places such as libraries and airplanes. What's more, there is a negative effect on users' health. For instance, long-time heavy phone users seem to be prone to certain types of eye disorders.

All in all, the contribution of mobile phone to society cannot be underestimated and people's dependence on it for communication is an inevitable trend, although it has a number of problems that should be well handled. I believe we will find a way to let the mobile phones be shaped by our lives and not vice versa.

IELTS--mobile phone and youngsters, a necessity or evil

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With the booming of communication technology, the mobile phone has becoming a common equipment for daily use, even among youngsters. Thus raises the question of whether it is a necessity to equip children and young students with mobile phones. In my opinion it depends on what kinds of mobile phones are used and what the young students intend to use them for.

There are basicly two kinds of mobile phone. One is with the basic functions such as making phone calls and sending text messages, while as the technology grows, more youngsters intend to use "smartphones" instead due to its capabilities to install various kinds of softwares and its advanced functionality such as surfing the internet and playing online video games.

Some believe that using mobile phones has a negative effect on children, since kids tend to be easily distracted by incoming message, especially in class. Some would even becoming addicted to texting messages. For those who have smartphones, it is even harder to concentrate in class knowing they can do other business on their cellphones, which is apparently more interesting than the class itself. What's more, kids who have less self-deciplines, using smartphones to chat online or play video games can easily occupy their spare time and even do harm to their physical and mental health. That's why mobile phones are forbidden in some campus due to its negative effect on students' academic studies.

However, we cannot ignore those advantages to equip children with mobile phones. For one thing, parents can easily communicate with their kids instantly to feel safe, also kids can call for help whenever they need or in the case of an emergency, especially in high-crime-rate areas where kids are frequently reported missing. For another, smartphones have so many great softwares that can assist children to look up infomation as well as to organize their time well. What's more, they can easily access the school network to watch videos of lectures and catch up the section they might be missing in class. Such a useful tool is easy to carry and use, therefore it can certainly boost up their efficiency and effectiveness in academic study.

So the question is how to use the mobile phone in a healthy way while avoiding it becoming a "gameboy". Anyway, the main objective for youngsters are still academic study. Certain rules for mobile phone use are suggested in campus and at home, for example, all phones are obliged to be switched off during class and smartphones are only experimental to those whose academic grades are less affected or even improved.