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    All Essay outlines, Tips, Practice, Notes 2012-13

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    Essay out-line practice

    This thread has been introduced for essay out-line practise. Under this

    thread, we will out-line the various topic include these topics which has been

    asked in CSS past papers and tend to be beneficial.

    I would like to broach this thread by out-lining the following topic :

    Poverty

    Outline

    1.What is poverty

    2.how poors are

    3.Scenario of poverty

    4.Poverty in pakistan

    5.Causes of poverty

    a. Population

    b. Political influence

    c. Inflation

    d. Low saving and investment

    e. adverse occurance (natural disasters)

    f. Unproper distribution of wealthg. Corruption and domination

    h. Lacking of information technology

    6. Conclusion

    Future of Democracy in Pakistan

    01. What is Democracy ?

    02. Importance of democracy

    03. History of Pakistan`s Politics04. Threats of Martial law

    05. Current barriers for democratic government (Army Uniform etc)

    06. World committe advocates Democracy in Pakistan

    07. Political influence (Current Circumstances)

    08. Image of Pakistan`s Political Leaders (Benazir and Nawaz Sharif)09. Future of Pakistan as a Democratic state

    10. Epiloque

    Baluchistan Crisis

    01. Baluchistan as a province of pakistan

    02. Independence of baluchistan (After august 1947)03. Historical movements and Kalat annexed in baluchistan

    04. Baluchistan part in economy growth (Natural resources)

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    05. Autocracy of Tribal lords (Tribal lords breed own army and closing down

    educatioonal institution etc.)

    06. Barriers for Baluchistan development (Gawadar port, Mega Projects so on)

    07. Dera - Bugti Conflict (Attack on Gas Lines)

    08. Persecution on women (Dr. Shazia case)

    09. Attacks on Government bodies and Army soldiers

    10. Mission against Nawab Bhugti and his death11. Arise wave of Bomb blasts

    12. Responsibility of Baluchistan crisis13. Govt. Attention on the province

    14. Development of Baluchistan

    15. Conclusion

    Danger of nuclear war in the years to come

    Out-line :

    1. Nuclear weapons

    2. Effects/causes of nuclear weapons

    3. Expansion of nuclear power

    4. Scenario of U.S - Japan War

    5. Current situation of adverse events (War against terrorism)

    6. Iran as a nuclear power

    7. Danger of world war8. Pakistan opponents

    9. UN and IEIA role

    10. Epilogue

    AN IDEAL STATE

    1. PAKISTAN WAS AN IDEAL STATE FOR MUSLIM FREEDOM FIGHTERS

    2. PROBLEMS FACED BY PAKISTAN

    a. bad politics

    b. govt of tribal lords

    c. illiteracy

    d. poverty

    e. crime

    f. terrorism

    3. STRATEGY FOR MAKING PAKISTAN AS AN IDEAL STATE

    a. spread education

    b. economical growth

    c. good politicians

    d. control crime

    e. arm restriction

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    f. good relation with world

    g. freedom

    h. islamic system

    4. CONCLUSION

    A Nation with no Identity

    1. what is a nation2. building up a nation

    a. major constituents of nation

    b. concept of integration

    c. national interest

    3. Fall of nations

    4. Why pakistanis are still disintegrated5. are we nation or simple a creed mixture

    6. Major steps for integration of creeds

    7. Future of Pakistan's Nationalism

    the trend changes frequently it is not the same for the last decade but score giving subjects

    for past 3 years arepublic admingeography

    psychologyjournalismsociologyArabic

    Punjabipashto

    international law

    Essay 2012

    I have attempted essay in 2012, in this way.

    A CRITICAL ANALYSIS OF EDUCATION SYSTEMS IN PAKISTAN.

    OUTLINE:

    1. Introduction: Education is vital to socio-economic

    development of a country.

    2. Importance of education3. Present state of education in Pakistana) Literacy

    b) Equityc) Qualityd) Access

    e) Relevance

    f) Environment4. Education systems in Pakistan

    5. Causes of week education system in Pakistan

    i) Historical and societalcausesii) Governance related causes

    6. Higher education

    7. Technical education8. Impacts on society and development

    9. Future road map

    a) Primary educationb) Uniform curriculum

    c) Improve Informationtechnology

    d) Qualified and motivatedteachere) Balance b/w Public and

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    Private sectorf) Encourage technical

    education

    g) Positive role of media10. Conclusion: Education needs to be top priorityagenda of political parties' election manifesto and the policy frame

    work of state.

    ESSAY

    "Educate, educate, educate cure the roots tree

    will flourish"

    Education systems are week in Pakistan. Education isvital to socio- economic development of a country. It builds human

    capabilities and enhances socio-economics growth through knowledge,

    skills and creative strength of a society. International research andpolicy experience conforms to these credentials of education but the

    present status of education in Pakistan shows that importance of

    education has not been even recognized here. There are varioushistorical, societal and prevailing governance reasons which have led tothe abysmal state of education in Pakistan. Given the multifaceted and

    role of education in building a stable society. it is imperative to

    urgently uplift the standard and provision of education through a wellthought out policy with political will and determination. In this essay,

    i will discuss the importance of education, Present scenario ofeducation in Pakistan,higher education, technical education, causes of

    week education systems in Pakistan and its remedial measures.

    The importance of education in Islam need not beoveremphasized; however the state of education in Pakistan is contrary

    to the importance Islam laid to it. Muslims scholars and scientists

    ushered an era of glory of Islamic world, while, the detachment fromeducation brought the decline. the countries of west have achieved

    dominance because they understood the real importance of education.United Nations Organization's declaration of Human Rights declares that,

    "everyone has a right to education". It has been placed as secondobjective in UNO's millennium development goals (UNMDGs) which requires

    education for all (EFA) by year 2015. The World Bank has underscored"the positive outcomes of education " as "reduction in poverty and in

    equality improvement in health status and implementation of

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    Conclusion: It goes without saying that only policy formulation and flowof funds would not improve education in Pakistan unless the leadersrealize its categorical imperative for individual, social and national

    development that enables all citizens to attain and utilize their

    maximum potential. Education needs to be top priority agenda ofpolitical parties' election manifesto and the policy frame work of

    state. Above all the most required thing is to have will and commitment

    to achieve quality education for nation in order to secure its future inthe new competitive knowledge based globalized world.

    sir what about outline , it is important to write outline ? , here is sketch

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    introduction (just heading)

    1-Point1

    2-Point23-Point34-Point4

    5-Point5

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    Conclusion (just headline)

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    --------end of out line---------------

    start essay from here, with no headings

    sir this is a sample sketch in my mind , please guide me where m i on the right path ?

    Preparation of essay

    Now, to know about the preparation of essay writing, in my humble view, the very firstthing from where to begin is to develop your concept of essay writing as very few peoplegrasp it properly.

    Some mix essays with story writing, some with paragraph writing, and some others onlytend to do articulation without appreciating as to what are they doing. Having said so, thequestion arises how and from where to develop the concept of essay writing?

    The very first thing is to read quality essays by English authors besides comparing byputting in juxtaposition Urdu essay writing with the English essay writing. Mere reading will

    serve no purpose, try to trace trends and styles of essayists; examine the quality of

    reasoning and the over all structure of their essays. Once you are done with this task which

    no doubt appears to be gigantic but it is not, as it needs to be done in a systematic manner.

    Finally it is submitted that essay cannot be written without information but it is not all-

    important as the aim is not to show erudition. The aim, as I perceive, is to appreciate anddelineate ideas."

    . Select a topic every day. Topic should be like some important event of the current affairs

    (islam vs west, enlightened moderation, Good governance, devolution of power, reforms ineducation system, rising oil prices etc etc).

    2. Read the daily DAWN, collect information on such current issues. NOte down difficult

    english terms. Look for the meanings of those words in some dictionary. (it will help uimprove ur vocabulary besides collecting some material).

    3. Write in your own words, some essay on any topic, reproducing those difficult words, sothat u may practise those difficult words.

    4. Try to get ur essay checked by someone good at English Language. If u'll only go for

    ESSAY BOOKS, u'll get outdated material.....though it is also helpful but still u should keepur-self updated by reading important topics from newspaper. Essay should be written such

    that :

    1. Ur written material is to the point....don't include any irrelevant things, as the examiner

    do check each and every word (mind it).

    2. No spelling mistake, no english tense mistakes etc.

    3. Try using educated vocabulary

    4. Do not go on for filling pages and pages.....Stick to the topic under discussion and try to

    touch each aspect of that topic.

    (QUALITY MATTERS MORE THAN THE QUANTITY).

    Global Zero: World without Nuclear Weapons

    By Irshad Ali Sodhar (FSP)

    Outline1.Introduction2.Brief history of nuclear weapons3.Perils of nuclear weapons

    4. Need to eliminate nuclear weapons5. Global zero initiative6.Is this goal achievable? Yes:

    a. Historical support

    b.Political willc. Strong public supportd.New leadership

    7. How to achieve it? Procedure/Strategy:a. Ratification of NPT/CTBT

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    b. Reduction by the US and Russiac. Elimination by all nuclear states

    d. Follow up: control mechanism

    8.Creation of International Nuclear Fuel-Bank9.Advantages of nuclear zero10.Conclusion

    This is the moment to begin the work of seeking the peace of world withoutnuclear weapons (Barak Obama)

    Man has achieved tremendous progress in developing scientific technology for the welfareand well-being of humanity, but simultaneously, he has also developed weapons for his own

    destruction. To acquire powerthe most flagrant of all passionshe created weapons

    including explosive, chemical, biological and nuclear. Among them, the nuclear weapons arethe most destructive causing mass destruction. Though, these have been used once inhistory during the World War-II, these have created a perpetual fear of annihilation among

    all humans. Now, with the evolving of a multi-cultural globalised world, there is an increase

    in momentum to develop a consensus for achieving Global Zero- elimination of all nuclearweapons. To succeed in this initiative, the need is to sit together, contemplate, devise a

    strategy and agree to divert this capability from weapons to welfare of humanity. The most

    resounding argument, generating urge to achieve this surpassable task lies in the briefhistory of apocalyptic perils of nuclear weapons.

    The perils of atomic weapons were manifest as the two cities of Japan were wreaked when

    the bombs were dropped on them. In Hiroshima, some 75,000 people were immediatelykilled by blast, fire and radiation. Another 70,000 died by the end of 1945. Three days later

    in Nagasaki, plutonium bomb killed about 40,000 people immediately, another 75,000 diedby the end of 1945. Five days after Nagasakis flattening, Japan surrendered. But the

    impact didnt stop there. Thousands people died in following years due to radiation. Tens of

    thousands became disabled. Not only the people present at the time suffered but theunborn as well. Thousands others were born with deformities and genetic disorders due to

    which successive generations have suffered.

    The Americans and Japanese learned different lessons from these bombings. The

    Americans lesson was; the nuclear weapons win wars, and therefore have value.The Japanese learned that human being and nuclear weapons cannot co-exist.

    (David Krieger, President Nuclear Age Peace Foundation). However, the danger posed bynuclear weapons today is far greater than the destruction they caused in Hiroshima and

    Nagasaki.

    Today, the number of nuclear weapons around the world is about 30,000 bombs with fargreater weight and destruction power. Even a fraction of these weapons could put an end to

    human as well as other species on our planet. It is clear that if we dont achieve Global

    Zero, our planet is always at risk, of being converted into a Ground Zero. This couldhappen not only due to a deliberate act but also accidental incident. Therefore, there is astrong reason that these weapons must be abolished before they abolish us.

    The need to eliminate nuclear weapons is not only because these can be used fordestruction in war but also because they pose equal danger in times of peace. There have

    been Close Calls to annihilation in various occasions. [In 1995] President Boris Yeltsin was

    informed that a nuclear missile was speeding towards the heart of Russia. Russian nuclearforces, already on hair-trigger alert, were put in even higher alert. Russian policy called fora launch on warning. The fate of the planet hung in the balance. Yeltsin wisely waited. And

    within those moments, the alarm declared false. An unimaginable nuclear disaster had

    barely been avoided, declared AmericasDefense Monitor, Center for Defence Information,December 26, 1999.

    Another, important incident took place in the US on August 31, 2007. Air Force crew loadedsix live nuclear warheads onto a 8-52 Bomber and flew from Minot Air Force Base in North

    Dakota to Barksdak Air Force Base in cruising over the countrys heartland (Around 15states). Each warhead was 10 times more powerful than the atomic bombs dropped onHiroshima and Nagasaki. In analysis report, Americas Defence science Board (DSB)revealed that six of the planets most powerful weapons were missing and no one noticed

    until they had landed in Louisiana after flight of 3 hours. The report concluded that

    human error was at the heart of the incident.

    This incident underscores the risk of accidental nuclear explosion threat due to human

    error even in the country of its origin and in the peace times. It is important to note thatthis incident occurred in the US, which claims to employ worlds best safety standards fornuclear weapons. While the US itself keeps expressing concern over the safety of Pakistans

    nuclear arsenal.

    It is learnt from these incidents that the humanity is at the risk of just single human error, ifthe nuclear weapons exist in the world. Therefore, wisdom calls for elimination of all nuclear

    weapons in order to make the future of humanityour generation and our futuregenerations safe and secure.

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    In addition, the Cold War which was the pushing force behind nuclear race has ended twodecades ago. Also due to the interdependence of states in the current scenario, there is

    unlikeness of revival of such conflicts.

    Moreover, the presence of nuclear weapons in some states provides reason and pretext forother ambitious nations to acquire the same status. This unwise race has itself caused

    devastating effects on economy and human development, particularly in developingcountries.

    One of the major world powers, the USSR too, collapsed under the heavy burden ofextraordinary defence spending on economy. The developing countries like India, Pakistan,and North Korea also joined the race. They did succeed in acquiring nuclear weapons but

    their poor population is suffering from abject poverty. A country like Pakistan, which is

    merely surviving at the edge of economic insolvency, could gain much economic growth,had the resources been utilised for the welfare of people. Iranians are bearing the sanctionsimposed by western powers through the UN for pursuing nuclear technology, which

    according to them, is aimed at acquiring weapons.

    Besides, the argument to possess nuclear weapons to maintain deterrence capability has

    also lost its ground. More the states acquire nukes, more the risk of their use builds-up.

    Moreover, the presence of nukes always poses risk of slipping into the hands of terrorists.Admiral Noel Gayler, a former commander-in-chief of the Pacific Command of US Navy,asks, Is difference of nuclear weapons still possible? He answers, No. He also questions,

    Does nuclear disarmament imperil our security? He answers, No, it enhances it. As

    human beings are fallible, deterrence is not a perfect system. It can be failed by humanerror, accident, miscalculation or simply miscommunication. Does it make sense to risk the

    future of our cities and even the human species on an unprovable theory?, David Krieger,founder of the Nuclear Age Peace Foundation.

    This is why, fortunately, the initiative of achieving peace of the world without nuclearweapons is gaining support among both the senior military and the political leaders of the

    world. The increasing number of leaders have realised what Abraham Lincoln said,Wemust think anew and act anew. Recently many world leaders have expressed

    willingness to move towards this goal. British Prime Minister Gorden Brown said in March

    2008 that the UK was ready to work for a world that is free from nuclear weapons. OnDecember 5, 2008, Nicholas Sarkozy, the French President, while holding EU Presidency,

    wrote a letter to UN General Secretary, outlining an EU plan to advance global progresstoward nuclear disarmament.

    In order to seize this positive trend, to achieve the commitment of the entire international

    community, and to re-energise effort for complete nuclear disarmament, a new initiativeGlobal Zero was launched onDecember 9, 2008, in Paris. The initiative was endorsed by

    100 international political, military, business and civic leaders across the world. The

    signatories included former US President Jimmy Carter, former Soviet leader MikhailGorbachev, former British Foreign Secretary Margaret Becket, Queen Noor of Jordan,Ehasnul Haq, former Joint Chief of the Staff committee (JCSC) of Pakistan, former Indian

    National Security advisor Brajes Mishra.

    Global Zero envisages eliminating nuclear weapons through phased and verified reduction

    over a period of years. Key steps include:

    Massive reduction in Russian-US arsenal. Complete elimination to zero by all states.

    Establishing verification system to keep check.

    International management of the fuel cycle.

    There are many positive indicators which indicate why this goal is achievable. First; there is

    a strong historical support. Throughout the nuclear age, even at the height of the Cold War,leaders foresaw a day when the world could be free of nukes. In 1986, Soviet Premier

    Mikhail Gorbachev and US President Ronald Reagan agreed that: A nuclear war could neverbe won and must never be fought. In 1999, Chinese President Jiang Zemin stated: Thereis no reason why nuclear weapons should not be comprehensively banned and completelydestroyed.

    Second; as Jiang Zemin had emphasised in his statement, What it takes to reach thisobjective is no more than a strong political will. The world leaders agree with the idea of aworld without nukes and have the means to achieve it. What they only need is the Political

    will. Some analysts argue that even if the major world powers agree to eliminate nuclearweapons, country like Iran might not agree to abandon its ambition. Though Irans nuclearweapon ambitions is a fallacy, there is a strong reason why Iran would follow the course. If

    there is growing support by nuclear powers and public opinion worldwide, I think it becomes

    harder for any government, including Iran, to cross that barrier, said Richard Burt, who

    was Washingtons Chief negotiator in the Strategic Arms Reduction Treaty (START) talks inthe early 1990s. Naturally, no country can afford to be on the one side and whole of the

    world on the other.

    Third; there is a strong support among majority of the people around the world. A poll of 21

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    countries conducted by Program on International Policy Attitudes (PIPA), USA, shows thatglobal public opinion is overwhelmingly in favours of an international agreement for

    eliminating all nuclear weapons. 76 per cent of respondents, across all countries polled,

    favour such an agreement. As the public opinion tends to direct the policies of governments,it is likely that the leaders would come to the table.

    Fourth; at this time particular, there is a new and great opportunity. US President BarakObama and Russian Prime Minister Vladimir Putin have signalled to work on nucleardisarmament. The former declared, This is the moment to begin the works of seeking the

    peace of a world without nuclear weapons. Similarly, Russian Prime Minister Putinexpressed in a speech in September 2008 to Close this Pandoras Box.

    This new and unprecedented political support from the heads of the worlds most important

    governments for zero nuclear weapons has made this goal possible. This moment offersboth the possibilities and dangers. Possibilities; because of new leadership in the US whichappears to support the goal of nuclear abolition. Dangers; because, if this moment passes

    without action, then the nuclear-race could quickly gather pace with many more states

    acquiring weapons and the risk of weapons falling into the hands of terrorists wouldincrease.

    This opportunity must be seized. It is the time for a new beginning to achieve a world freeof nuclear weapons. This moment calls for embracing possibilities and dispelling dangers.The phased and verifiable elimination of nuclear weapons is possible. Here are some of the

    steps needed to achieve this goal:

    Firstly; the ratification of Non Proliferation Treaty (NPT) and Comprehensive Test Ban Treaty

    (CTBT). The NPT, which was sponsored by the US, UK and the USSR, was aimed to preventthe spread of nuclear weapons and weapon technology, to promote cooperation in the

    peaceful use of nuclear energy and to further the goal of achieving nuclear disarmament.

    The treaty was signed by 187 states and was ratified in 1975. However, the US, itssponsors, did not ratify it. Other four countries which have not signed it are: India,

    Pakistan, Israel and Cuba. Similarly, CTBT, introduced in 1995, has not been ratified bymany states, including the US. It is strongly felt that if the US ratifies these treaties, others

    would follow the course. Early the US ratification would do much to encourage the few

    remaining states to follow suit, wrote David Miliband, UKs former Foreign Secretary, in TheWashington Post on December 8, 2008.

    Secondly; negotiations between Washington and Moscow should start to cut back nuclear

    stockpiles to minimum. According to moderate estimates, the US and Russia have about26000 of total 27000 weapons in the world. As both these states possess largest

    stockpiles96 per cent of all the nuclear weapons in the worldthey should reduce theirarsenal in the first step. Process needs to start with American and Russian leaderships,

    argues Richard Burt.

    This is an absolutely insensible approach to accumulate that much big arsenal that fractionof which can destroy the whole world. When a country can be destroyed by a dozen

    weapons, its own possession of thousands of weapons gains no security, says Admiral Noel

    Gayler. The huge possession of nukes itself puts larger responsibility on the US and Russiato initiate the process of disarmaments up to minimum level. The successful conclusion of

    START NEW between both powers strengthens the possibility of reaching an agreement on

    nuclear disarmament.

    Thirdly; following the reductions by the US and Russia, the rest of the countries can be

    brought on board for complete abolition of nukes. It would not be a difficult task. Once the

    powerful countries lead the course, rest will follow them. Perhaps others seem poised towelcome such move. The willingness of China, the UK and France has already been

    mentioned. The two South Asian countries India and Pakistan are also ready to shun the

    nukes. Last June, Indian Prime Minister Manmohan Singh, backed the same goal, sayingthat: The only effective form of nuclear disarmament and elimination of nuclear weapons is

    global disarmament. President Zardari has also talked of nuclear weapon-free South Asia.North Korea is already on-board in six-party talks and has also committed to abolish nuclearweapons for economic incentives. The only country which has stayed silent is Israel which isundeclared nuclear state. But given the leverage, Washington enjoys over it, Israel will have

    to be part of the process.

    Once this process sets in momentum, the weapons could be delivered to a single andcommon remote place in oceans for dismantling under the supervision of skilled scientists.

    The nuclear material could be returned to the donors for use in the energy sector ordisposal.

    Lastly, having achieved the complete and verified elimination of nuclear weapons from the

    world, all the countries will have to conclude a joint treaty at the UN platform banning any

    development of nuclear weapons and technology. As Queen Noor of Jordan told BBC, Wehave to work on de-legitimising the status of nuclear weapons. This is vital for making the

    elimination of nukes irreversible. This would require establishing many mechanisms toconstitute an eventual regime for overseeing the global ban.

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    It is also important to realise that advantage of use of nuclear technology for peacefulpurposes is too great to be ignored. The NPT also underscores to promote cooperation in

    the peaceful use of nuclear energy. And, every country has the right to acquire nuclear

    technology for peaceful purposes. But given the element of conflict in international affairsand atmosphere of mistrust, all the countries cant be trusted as reliable for not pursuingthe ambitions of acquiring nuclear weapons again. This situation warrants a new approach,

    which would allow the use of nuclear energy and deny the weapons technology.

    The Global Zero initiative envisages international management of the fuel cycle to prevent

    future development of nuclear weapons. An agreement on a new International AtomicEnergy Agency (IAEA) led system that would help states wishing to develop a civil nuclearenergy industry to do so without increasing the risk of nuclear weapon proliferation says

    David Miliband. Creation of such international fuel bank would also end the conflicts in the

    world like Iran Nuclear Issue. This proposal was also forwarded by IAEAs former headMuhammad Elbradi as early as in 2003, that: all production and processing of nuclearmaterial be under international control. This novel idea has attracted the EU and an

    American billionaire Warren Buffett for financing the project.

    In this way, the world could not only be safe from destruction and the humanity from

    annihilation, but the tremendous energy potential of the nuclear resources could also be

    utilised for the welfare of people. The resources that go into weapons would help keeppeople safe and healthy and to give them opportunities. Not only the world is facing energycrisis due to depletion of fossil fuels, but with their emissions our environment is being

    damaged severely. Nuclear power possesses tremendous energy and simultaneously it is

    clean energy. It is important for health purposes as it is used in the treatment of manydiseases, including cancer. Its use in agriculture enhances crop yield which would help

    mitigate the food crisis.

    Global Zero offers twopronged benefits: achieving safety by eliminating nuclear weapons

    and to achieve prosperity by using nuclear energy. The leaders of world have the greatestmoral responsibility to seize the opportunity for the welfare of the living and the future

    generations of mankind. As Benazir Bhutto said, We owe it to our children to build aworld free of the threat of nuclear annihilation.

    Essay Paper 2000

    Essay Paper (2003)

    TIME ALLOWED: 3 HOURS MAXIMUM MARKS:100

    NOTE: Write a comprehensive and analytical essay on ONE of the following topics:

    1. Good governance and the role of the public servant.

    2. Sweet are the uses of adversity.

    3. Hero-worship is the strongest where there is least regard for human freedom.

    4. Advancement in science and technology is the gateway to the economic prosperity of acountry.

    5. The barbarity of ethnic cleansing.

    6. Education makes a people easy to lead, but difficult to drive, easy to govern, but

    impossible to enslave.

    7. We never know the worth of water till the well is dry:.

    8. Progressive alleviation of poverty in Pakistan - an overview.

    9. Ifyou wish the sympathy of broad manes, then you must tell them the crudest and most

    stupid things.

    10. Moral standards in international relations.

    11. Personal liberty is the paramount essential to human dignity and human happiness.

    12. The purification of politics is an iridescent dream.

    FEDERAL PUBLIC SERVICE COMMISSION

    COMPETITIVE EXAMINATION FOR RECRUITMENT TO POSTS IN B.P.S.-17

    UNDER THE FEDERAL GOVERNMENT,2001

    ESSAY

    Time allowed: 3 hoursMaximum marks: 100

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    4) Pluralistic vision of Islam5) Longing for Love

    6) "A long Dispute means that both parties are wrong"

    7) Modern Banking, finance and employment are part of one single paradigm8) Peer Pressure

    Essay Paper 2005

    1. Strategies for the alleviation of poverty.

    2. Socio-Economic Challenges faced by Pakistan.3. Estrangement from our own culture is driving us on the verge of collapse, not just ouridentity but also morality.4. Reforms in Examination systems

    5. Persecuted poor woman.

    6. The search for truth.7. Islam versus the West.

    Essay 2006

    Write A Comprehensive And Analytical Essay On One Of The Following Topics :

    1. truth In Short Supply

    2. liberalism

    3. humour In Udru Literature4. foreign Direc Investment In Pakistan

    5. personaliszayion Of Pakistani Politics

    6. global Warming7. nuclear Waepons Are 'not Only A Great Peril, But A Great Hope'

    8. 'brain, Like Hearts, Go Where They Are Appreciated'9. 'lots Of Folks Confuse Bad Management With Destiny'

    10.'there Comes A Time To Put Aside Principles And Do What's Right'11.'we Grown Too Old Soon And Too Late Smart'

    12.'every Slution Breeds New Problems'

    13.

    Essay Paper 200714.

    15.Essay Paper 200716.

    1- The more developed a country, the more leathly it is armed.

    2- Higher Education as an agent of change

    3- The future of mankind in a global warming perspective

    4- The image of Islam in the western world and responsibilities of the MuslimUmmah

    5- A country is backward because it's people are backward

    6- Globalization and electronic media

    7- The present system of Education must assume some of responsibilities of our

    failure

    8- Politics is the art of possible

    9- Terrorism as a new threat to the contemporary world

    10- The state of women rights in Pakistan

    FEDERAL PUBLIC SERVICE COMMISSION

    COMPETITIVE EXAMINATION FOR RECRUITMENT TO POSTS

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    IN BPS 17 UNDER THE FEDERAL GOVERNMENT, 2008.

    ESSAY

    TIME ALLOWED: THREE HOURS MAXIMUM MARKS:100

    Note:Write a COMPREHENSIVE ESSAY (2500-3500) on any ONE of the give topics. Makesure you use forms of discourse e.g. description, narration, illustration etc.

    1.

    Moral depravity is the root cause of poverty.2. Peace the essential message of our religion3. Time management is the key note of success.

    4. Lack of discipline - a national disaster.5. Materialism in the death of spirituality.6. Poetry is teh highest form of expression - the greatest proof is the Holy Quran.

    7. Dreams for future rely on the work of today.8. Can be prevent the Third World War?9. Global Warming, fact or fiction?

    __________________

    FEDERAL PUBLIC SERVICE COMMISSIONCOMPETITIVE EXAMINATION FOR RECRUITMENT TO POSTSIN BPS 17 UNDER THE FEDERAL GOVERNMENT, 2009.

    ESSAY

    TIME ALLOWED: THREE HOURS MAXIMUM MARKS:100

    1. The Future of Democracy in Pakistan.

    2. Health is not a condition of matter, but of mind.

    3. co.education , Merits and Demerits

    4. The food crisis: problems , challenges and opportunitities for Pakistan.

    5. English as the Medium of Education in Pakistan.

    6. The future of UNO, Hopes and Hurdles

    7. There is no great genious without a mixture of madness.

    8. Status of Women in Islam

    9. Pakistan's War on terror and its impact on our psyche and politic.socio.economic fronts.

    10. Power of Media in the Modern World.__________________

    Essay Paper 2010

    01. Literature is the best criticism of life.

    02. Dialogue is the best course to combat terrorism.

    03. Pakistan is rich in natural resources but very poor in their management.

    04. The U.N.O has failed to measure up to the demands of its charter.

    05. All humans are born equal in dignity and rights but htey are in shackles everywhere.

    06. Why is there no status of the third gender in Pakistan?

    07. Can women be equal to men in Pakistan?

    08. Without independent truth-finding commission , accountability is unachievable.

    09. Religion has done more harm than help to human relations in the world.

    10. The world politics stands more derisive than it was ever before due to the specificimperialist designs.

    Essay paper 2011

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    Essay paper 2011

    1. Truth is a rare commodity despite the freedom by the print and electronic media

    2.Without good communication skills, life becomes impossible in the modern world.

    3.The time we live in is the winter of the world.

    4. In this country reason does not apply to anything,

    5.Does Pakistan society regard woman as the angel in the house or source of all evils?

    6. Disaster management and government preparedness

    7.Fair play and life, as it is lived,in the land of the pure.

    8.The pleasures of reading.

    9.What are the hurdles in our way to becoming a truly independent state?

    10.Insanity in individuals is something rare but in groups,parties and nations it is the rule._________________

    FEDERAL PUBLIC SERVICE COMMISSION

    COMPETITIVE EXAMINATION FORRECRUITMENT TO POST IN BS-17

    UNDER THE FEDERAL GOVERNMENT, 2012

    Note: Make an outline and write a Comprehensive Essay (2500-3500) words on

    any ONE of the given topics. Make sure you use different forms of discourse e.g.exposition, argumentation, description and narration. Credit will be given for

    organization, relevance and clarity.

    1. Energy Crisis in Pakistan: Causes and Consequences

    2. Obesity is the root cause of all disease

    3. Beggars cannot be choosers4. The United Nations in the 21st Century: Obligations and Limitations

    5. Brains like hearts go where they are appreciated6. The Emerging Power of Public Opinion

    7. The suffering Soul in the Scientific Age

    8. A Critical Analysis of Education Systems in Pakistan9. Democracy is a culture rather than a process

    10.Social and Economic Securities for Women in Islam

    10.11. Essay on Education Systems iN pakistan

    11.12.

    12.13. I have attempted essay in 2012, in this way.

    A CRITICAL ANALYSIS OF EDUCATION SYSTEMS IN PAKISTAN.

    OUTLINE:

    1. Introduction: Education is vital to socio-economic

    development of a country.2. Importance of education

    3. Present state of education in Pakistan

    a) Literacy

    b) Equityc) Quality

    d) Accesse) Relevancef) Environment

    4. Education systems in Pakistan

    5. Causes of week education system in Pakistani) Historical and societal causesii) Governance related causes

    6. Higher education7. Technical education8. Impacts on society and development9. Future road map

    a) Primary educationb) Uniform curriculumc) Improve Information technology

    d) Qualified and motivated teacher

    e) Balance b/w Public and Private sector

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    f) Encourage technical educationg) Positive role of media

    10. Conclusion: Education needs to be top priority

    agenda of political parties' election manifesto and the policy framework of state.

    ESSAY

    "Educate, educate, educate cure the roots tree will flourish"Sir Syed Ahmed Khan.

    Education systems are week in Pakistan. Education isvital to socio- economic development of a country. It builds humancapabilities and enhances socio-economics growth through knowledge,

    skills and creative strength of a society. International research and

    policy experience conforms to these credentials of education but thepresent status of education in Pakistan shows that importance of

    education has not been even recognized here. There are various

    historical, societal and prevailing governance reasons which have led tothe abysmal state of education in Pakistan. Given the multifaceted androle of education in building a stable society. it is imperative to

    urgently uplift the standard and provision of education through a well

    thought out policy with political will and determination. In this essay,i will discuss the importance of education, Present scenario of

    education in Pakistan,higher education, technical education, causes ofweek education systems in Pakistan and its remedial measures.

    The importance of education in Islam need not be

    overemphasized; however the state of education in Pakistan is contraryto the importance Islam laid to it. Muslims scholars and scientists

    ushered an era of glory of Islamic world, while, the detachment from

    education brought the decline. the countries of west have achieveddominance because they understood the real importance of education.

    United Nations Organization's declaration of Human Rights declares that,"every one has a right to education". It has been placed as second

    objective in UNO's millennium development goals (UNMDGs) which requireseducation for all (EFA) by year 2015. The World Bank has underscored

    "the positive outcomes of education " as "reduction in poverty and inequality improvement in health status and implementation of

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    Conclusion: It goes without saying that only policy formulation and flow

    of funds would not improve education in Pakistan unless the leadersrealize its categorical imperative for individual, social and nationaldevelopment that enables all citizens to attain and utilize their

    maximum potential. Education needs to be top priority agenda of

    political parties' election manifesto and the policy frame work ofstate. Above all the most required thing is to have will and commitment

    to achieve quality education for nation in order to secure its future in

    the new competitive knowledge based globalized world.13.14.

    essay on critical analysis of education system

    14.15.

    15.16.

    A Critical Analysis of Education System Of

    PakistanCurrently the education system of Pakistan is flaw full. Today education of goodquality is only accessible to the elite class. It is because of the private sector has

    overwhelmingly dominated.Public sector education is of low quality due to lack of

    accountability, small buget and less number of educational institutions. peripheralareas are totally ignored in education. Lack of qualified and trained staff is also areason for poor education system.A little qualified people who come out of this

    system are never encouraged. That is why people always look abroad for propereducation and good life.Most important problem with our educational system is lack of a single, uniform and

    proper educational system. We do not have a workable education system. There aremainly two types of education system in our country, one for common people andone for elite class.the education system for common people is divided into primarylevel, middle, secondary ,higher secondary and university level.then there is second

    education system specially designed for an elite class. That is A-level and O-level

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    education system and then there are many resources available for elite class to goabroad for higher education. There is a vast difference between the quality of these

    two different forms of educational system. The elite class education system is better

    then the other one. Obviously elite is the minor proportion of population, thus overallsystem is poor for education.Similarly as the government has failed to improve public sector education that is why

    the private sector has over dominated the education system of Pakistan. Today allparents want to send there children to a private school, for example beacon houseschool system is so much successful in Pakistan for maintaining quality of education.

    The only problem with this education system is their fee and curriculum. High feemakes this education out of reach of common people and only elite can afford sucheducation.Private educational is system is much popular in Pakistan that private

    school enroll about 31 % of students at basic level.In urban areas the ratio is a bait

    more high where 51% are enrolled in private institutions and 49% enroll in publicsector education intstitutions.Most of countries do not rely on private sector for theireducation but Netherlands and Libya get 60% of their education from private sector.

    The reason is their strong hold on the fee and curriculum of private sector that is

    why the private sector s workable in these countries.Another problem with our education system is the allocation of low funds for

    education in our country. In the fiscal budget of 2012 which was 2.6 billion, the

    budget for Public Sector Development Project (PSDP) was only Rs 870 million.Education department comes in PSDP so this budget is not sufficient. Government ofPakistan allocates 1.5-2 % of education which is not enough for education to work

    properly. The total GDP for education department in any country should be 7% of

    total to grow smoothly. It is not the only problem with funds there is anotherproblem which is bad management of these low funds given for education. It is a

    dilemma that most of the fund is wasted in this way by spending most of the fund onrepairing the buildings and forming useless buildings. It is education which needs to

    be improved not the infrastructure.

    One more problem with the finance for education is lack of accountability. There isno check and balance and no gatekeepers for the whole management of the funds

    for education. The old traditional system of distribution of funds for differentuniversities still exists as it was sixty years ago. According to the director of Teaching

    Development Centre (TDC), it is not the low budget which is the main problem,the

    real problem is the lack of accountability. If only the 25% of the allocated budget isused properly the progress will be clearly visible. Corruption has engulfed this

    department of government as it has others. A proper system for distribution of fundsand monitoring of that distribution is the need of time.

    Moreover the lack of trained staff for teaching and research is also hurdle for a goodeducation system. Teachers are not trained and qualified properly in Pakistan.

    Government has taken no serious steps ever to arrange proper and regular teachingprograms and workshops for teachers. Teaching is considered as the least respectful

    profession in Pakistan. Those who do not get a job any where or have no other

    option they adopt teaching as a profession. There is no charm in this profession inPakistan primarily due to low salaries and less respect. Teaching has got 6.5%vacancy rate, which is the highest vacancy rate. Most of the qualified teachers teach

    in private institutions due to high salaries as government does not provide them

    attractive salaries. According to a survey there is only one teacher for fifty onestudents.

    Not only the teachers are discouraged in education department but also the

    students. In fact the education field is least encouraged in Pakistan. Talent is on sucha peak that one of a Pakistani student recently got record score in A-levelexamination all over the world. All we need is a little polishing of these diamonds.

    There is lack of appreciation for educational achievements. In western countries

    intellectuals, teachers and students are most encouraged and appreciated that iswhy they are so developed. In 2nd world war Churchill and Hitler passed a resolution

    that both armies would not attack the universities of other countries. The importance

    of education in west can be judged from this example. Lack of appreciation inPakistan is the reason why the qualified cream of Pakistan settles in western

    countries. They are encouraged there and provided with high salaries.In addition to that there are also not enough universities, colleges, schools andresearch centers for education in Pakistan. Currently there are 128 universities inPakistan. Only 70 out of these 128 universities are state or public sector universities.

    Most of private universities are not recognized by Pakistan Higher Education

    Commission (HEC).Then out of all these private and public sector universities rarelytwo or three matches the International standards for example GIK and Aga Khanuniversity are according to the international standards. In peripheries and backward

    areas there are no universities at all for instance in Balochistan only quetta hasuniversity all the remaining districts have no university same is true for KPK andSindh. Only some schools are available in peripheries but these schools are either

    not functional or they only exist in papers. feudal lords have made these schools as

    their private property and are using these schools for personal comfort. On the other

    hand USA has 40000 universities almost all matching international standards.Similarly UK produces 5000 PhDs annually because of large number of institutions.

    While Pakistan is capable of producing only less than 50 PhDs annually jus becauseof low number of education institutionsAlong with less number of institutions curriculum is also the major problem. After 60

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    years of independence we still do not have a basic frame work for educationcurriculum. All the real facts are amended and quoted wrongly according to the way

    we want. Historical facts are changed entirely to prove the whatever we did and

    whenever we did was best. Its tired extensively to convince the students to makethem believe that we are great nation on the cost of wrong history education.Students are never told about the real history. In addition to that private institutions

    have their own curriculum which has noting to do with government rules andregulations for making of curriculum. After 18th amendment education is now thebusiness of provincial government but the fact is that we still do not have clear

    guideline or plan for our education. It is still not cleared the whether the curriculumshould be completely Islamic or completely westernized or it should or the blend ofboth.

    In addition to curriculum language is also one of the hurdle in the progress of our

    educational system. We use a blend of urdu and English language in our curriculum.A single medium is required for communication in education. When students go toEnglish medium or university level from urdu medium the face a lot of trouble in

    getting themselves compatible to the new medium for education. All the great

    nations which are developed use their native language as medium for education forexample Japan, Italy, Germany and China. They have reserved their culture in this

    ways in addition to making education easier for understanding. We are so much

    impressed by English language that nobody is considered qualified unless he or sheis really good at it. It is true English language is important on 21st century but urdushould be the medium in education. It has been proved psychologically that a child

    learn more easily in his native language as compared to any other language. Our

    curriculum in 90% in English with some subjects in urdu that makes a lot ofconfusion and really affects the efficiency of students.

    One more problem with our education system is the decreasing strength of studentsin higher education. The number of students decreases as one surveys from school

    level to university level. Most of people can not get higher education to increasing

    fee. Others have to support their families or might have other family and financialproblems which do not allow them to continue their education further more. A

    combined report of National Education Census (NEC) and National EducationManagement Information System (NEMIS) shows that 36 million students were

    enrolled in education system in 2005/2006. In these students 56% studied at

    primary level, 20.9% studied in preprimary level, 15.5% in middle elementary level,6.9% studied at in secondary level, 2.5% studied in higher secondary and 4.9%

    studied at post secondary level.Low strength is not only attribute to financial and family problems but also to the

    gender discrimination Girls are not always encouraged in education as compared toboys. It is due to low literacy rate and unawareness that girls are not appreciated.

    We have seen that girls always make extra ordinary performance in studies and theyare more hard working as compared to boys. In 2006 14 million females were

    enrolled in education as compared to 18.3 million males. This discrimination of

    gender is more intense in backward and peripheral areas of Pakistan. In FATAliteracy rate is 29%in males and only 3% in females. similarly there are 40% ofprimary aged children are out of schools, among these more then 70% are female

    children.

    As unawareness discourages femal education it is also the reason for less efficientmadrassah system. These institutions can contribute a lot and they can be made

    more efficient as they are in every part of country, but the problem is same.

    Madrassaahs are not provided with proper curriculum and qualified teachers. In pastwhen Muslims were highly developed among all the nations of the world theseinstitutions were responsible for the academic and scientific progress of muslims.

    Currently there are eight thousand madrassahs in Pakistan, if these are equipped

    with qualified staff proper religious and scientific education frame work they canreally make difference in education system of Pakistan. Japan is living example,

    Japanese people take education as their religious obligation that is why they are so

    much forward in science and technology. Similarly we can also use religion for thegrowth of education as Islam gives equal importance to education or even more than

    any other religion in the world.The government has failed to equip institutions with proper facilities on the otherhand it has make education worse by political influence in education. Merit is ignoreddue to political interference.teachers are allocated on political approach similarly

    undeserving students get high marks due to same political approach, in short merit

    is totally violated due to political influence. Some of the examination centers becomecentrifugal point of cheating due to political influence. In addition to that politicianinstead of taking any positive steps the use education for political gains for example

    currently the laptop distribution scheme was purely used for political gain and wedaily listen about this scheme in talk shows. Our education minister even do notbelieve in our education system and send his children abroad for education. Same is

    the case with all ministers and government high officials. Instead of changing this

    system they just think about their own children only.

    This the reason that Pakistan is least developed country in education. Bangladeshwhich separated from Pakistan in 1971 has even high literacy rate of 80% as

    compared to 49.9% literacy rate of Pakistan. In Pakistan two out of three adults areilliterate; four out of ten children are missing primary education. About 45% onlyhave access to primary education. Pakistan was last of 14 Asian Pacific countries in

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    School Report Program investigating developing countries committed to basiceducation. Srilanka which is small country has even high literacy rate then Pakistan.

    Srilanka got a tie in a survey with Malaysia in education. This is the position of

    Pakistan in education only compared to the neighboring countries.Pakistan has weak education system since 1947 but it is still not late. We can have aproper education system if government gets serious for progress of education.

    Proper teacher training programs and workshops should be arranged for teachers.There should be importance of merit and no political influence should have any kindof impact on our education system. In addition to that more funds should be

    allocated for education and there should be a proper system of accountability. Thereshould be uniform system of education form every one with no discrimination.Pakistan is now faced with lot of problems but education is one of the major problem

    and also the rout cause of many other issues in Pakistan. There are not enough

    funds and no accountability of these funds. Students are not encouragedand there isalso lack of qualified staff. Government is also not serious in properplanning and any concrete steps for education progress.

    COMMENTS ON THE ESSAY:

    Disjointed, lAck flow not at all man.. what are you talking about...

    kind of disjointed, lack flow, which has made the essay bit trivial. But at least u tried. Keep

    practicing mate best of luck.