Adding details to Writing 21/11/12

Alliteration Interesting vocabulary Sibilance Assonance Pathetic Fallacy Adverbs Change the Pace Personification Complex sentences Write a lot about a little

I sat down and ate my breakfast= Calmly, I drew my chair out of under the table and steadily descended onto it. Immediately I felt utterly pleasant as I levitated my hands to pick up the cutlery. I then devoured my food scooping the food into my mouth mouthful by mouthful. When I concluded my meal I felt as full as a fat hog.

Chocolate: I devoured a mouthful of a block of delightful heaven. It melted away in my mouth oozing around my tongue sending happy thoughts to my brain. The delight startled me and I felt very much at home.

A ticking clock: The pendulum swung side to side, hour after hour, never fatiguing, never ending. It had gone through

decades of ticking but it would never end, it would never halt. It would always go on no matter what.

Hair: I came around from that dreaded surgery. Doctors saying I looked fine but then, I looked in a mirror. My hair had been scalded of me. I had nothing. Not anything on my head. I felt heartbroken.