Adapt Your Wording to Your Readers
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Copyright © 2011 by The McGraw-Hill Companies, Inc. All rights reserved.McGraw-Hill/Irwin
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Adapt Your Wording to Your Readers
• Visualize your readers. Consider . . .– how they think.– what they know.– their education level.– etc.
• Then write for them.
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Chapter Overview
• Use familiar words.• Prefer short words.• Use slang and popular clichés with caution. • Use technical terms and acronyms with caution.• Use concrete language.• Prefer active verbs and avoid camouflaged verbs.• Select words for precise meanings.• Avoid discriminatory wording.
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Prefer Short, Familiar Words
Shorten Do About Find out Begin Much Decide Harmful
AbbreviateAccomplish
ApproximatelyAscertain
CommenceConsiderable
DetermineDetrimental
Long, Unfamiliar Words Short, Familiar Words
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Prefer Short, Familiar Words
Copy Height Equal Build Give Vague Show Useless
DuplicateElevation
EquivalentFabricate
FurnishIndeterminate
IndicateIneffectual
Long, Unfamiliar Words Short, Familiar Words
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Prefer Short, Familiar Words
Hinder Smallest Change Go Replace Last Picture Proof
InterruptMinimal
ModificationProceed
SupersedeUltimateVisualize
Verification
Long, Unfamiliar Words Short, Familiar Words
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Use Slang and Popular ClichésWith Caution• We’ll develop a branding strategy that pushes
the envelope.• This decision is a no-brainer.• We’ve brought in the low-hanging fruit; now
we need to reach out to more difficult prospects.
• Let’s develop a dog-and-pony show that our sales people can take around to different B2B suppliers.
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Use Technical Language with Caution
Has worked long enough (under Social Security) to become insured.Family insurance paymentsA job covered by Social SecurityWorker who has diedTo apply for insurance paymentsWorkers past 65
Has sufficient quarters of coverage to acquire an insured status.Survivors’ benefitsCovered employmentDeceased wage earnerTo file a claimAged workers
Technical Language Improved Version
Social Security’s technical language found to be misunderstood by outsiders:
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Use Initials and Acronyms With Caution
• RFID• FTC• CD• IPO• RV• NATO• IRS
Radio Frequency Identification Federal Trade Commission Certificate of Deposit/Compact Disc Initial Public Offering Recreational Vehicle North Atlantic Treaty Organization Internal Revenue Service
What do these letters mean?
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Prefer the Concrete to the Abstract
Our research shows that 87 percent of those using this technique are successful.Your department may hire three new stock clerks.We will ship the Moss No. 41 desk sets you ordered October 12 by Arrow Freight on October 15.Each of the branch managers will receive a 15 percent pay raise.This process requires a constant temperature of 10 degrees centigrade.
We have found that this technique is successful.
Your department may hire somenew employees.We will ship your order soon.
Each of the branch managers will receive a substantial pay raise.This procedure requires a constant low temperature.
Abstract Concrete
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Prefer the Active to the Passive
I believe they padded the bill.
The president read your report.
The treasurer prepares the profit and loss statement each month.
We suggest that you clean the element in warm, soapy water.Mr. Wong wants you to bring this matter to the attention of the manager.
It is believed that the bill was padded.Your report was read by the president.The profit and loss statement is prepared by the treasurer each month.It is suggested that you clean the element in warm, soapy water.It is desired that every effort be made to have this matter brought to the attention of the manager.
Passive Active
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Prefer Strong Verbs to Verbs Camouflaged as Nouns
. . . classify . . .. . . compute . . .. . . explore . . .. . . inform . . .
. . . negotiate . . .. . . observe . . .
. . . represent . . .
. . . make a classification . . .. . . make a computation . . .
. . . conduct an exploration . . .. . . provide information . . .
. . . engage in negotiation . . .. . . make an observation . . .
. . . provide representation . . .
Camouflaged Verb Strong Verb
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Prefer Strong Verbs to Verbs Camouflaged as Nouns
We canceled the order on the 12th.The change eliminated the deficit.Ms. Brown manages this office.The safety officer distributed the special equipment.
Cancellation of the order was made on the 12th.Elimination of the deficit was brought about by the change.The management of this office is conducted by Ms. Brown.Distribution of the special equipment was accomplished by the safety officer.
Camouflaged Verb Strong Verb
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Choose the Precise Word• The committee (comprises) (constitutes)
representatives from all four sales districts.• This building site cost a large (sum) (amount) of
money.• She was (notorious) (noted) for her concern for
the poor.• We found no evidence that would (cause)
(enable) us to support him.• The management of this store is independent
(of) (from) the main office.
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Choose the Precise Word
• She (claimed) (maintained) (said) that she was ill.• He is angry (about) (with) the loss.• I will try (to) (and) correct the error.• I differ (with) (from) you on this conclusion.• If he is late, I will not wait (for) (on) him longer than
ten minutes.• She has an interest (in) (for) technical writing.
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Avoid Discriminatory Wording
• Use gender-neutral words.• Avoid words that stereotype by
– race.– nationality.– sexual orientation.– age.
• Avoid words that typecast those with disabilities.
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Avoid Words with a Masculine Origin
manufactured, of human originpersonnel, workersrepresentative, member of Congressbusiness executive, businesspersonletter carrier, mail carrierpolice officerfire fightercamera operatorserver
man-mademanpowercongressmanbusinessmanmailmanpolicemanfiremancameramanwaiter/waitress
Sexist Nonsexist
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Masculine-Sounding Words—No Masculine Origin
• manufacture• management• history• manipulate• mannequin• manicure• mandolin• histrionic• histamine
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Avoid Words that Lower Another’s Status
my girllady doctorauthoress
actresspoetess
sculptressmale nurse
male secretary
my secretary doctor author actor poet sculptor nurse secretary
Instead of Use
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Avoid Sexist Use of Pronouns
• Reword to eliminate the offending word.• Make the reference plural.• Substitute a neutral expression (he or she,
he/she, s/he, you, one, person).
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Reword to Eliminate the Offending Word
We will reimburse any employee for travel expenses.
A customer who pays promptly is placed on our preferred list.
A physician should treat patients with respect.
Sexist Nonsexist
We will reimburse any employee who paid his travel expenses.If a customer pays promptly, he is placed on our preferred list.
A physician should treat his patients with respect.
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Make the Reference Plural
If customers pay promptly, they are placed on our preferred list.When unauthorized employees enter the security area, they are subject to dismissal.Supervisors are not responsible for such losses if they are not negligent.
When customers need service, they have the right to ask for it.
If a customer pays promptly, he is placed on our preferred list.When an unauthorized employee enters the security area, he is subject to dismissal.A supervisor is not responsible for such losses if he is not negligent.
When a customer needs service, it is her right to ask for it.
Sexist Nonsexist
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Substitute a Neutral Expression
If a customer pays promptly, he or she is placed on our preferred list.When an unauthorized employee enters the security area, he/she is subject to dismissal.A supervisor is not responsible for such losses if s/he is not negligent.When you need service, you have the right to ask for it.
If a customer pays promptly, he is placed on our preferred list.
When an unauthorized employee enters the security area, he is subject to dismissal.A supervisor is not responsible for such losses if he is not negligent.When a customer needs service, it is her right to ask for it.
Sexist Nonsexist
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Avoid Other Stereotyping WordsAnd Phrases
• Race– a hard-working Mexican– an honest Sicilian
• Sexual Orientation– A lesbian athlete– A gay artist
• Age– golden ager– youngster
• Disability– deaf and dumb– crippled