JAMES AND THE GIANT PEACH

SUMMARYAbdullah porter

SUMMARYAn old man gives James magic seeds. He

accidently drops them into the soil by a peach tree. A peach starts growing and growing till it becomes really big. James crawls inside it and finds some oversized bugs. This is when his adventure begins. When his adventure began the peach started rolling and landed in the sea. In the sea the peach gets attacked by some sharks. Then loads of birds carry him into the sky he lands in America were he becomes famous and lives happily ever after.

THINGS THAT COULD MAKE THE STORY INTERESTING If the peach were a pumpkin because

pumpkins are bigger than peaches so the pumpkin would grow bigger.

If the characters were animals instead of bugs it would have been better cause I don’t like bugs.

If they landed in the desert instead of America because if they landed in the desert the could have landed in quicksand which would've made the story more active and longer