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    6 SAT Essay Examples to Answer Every

    Prompt

    A major secret to excelling on the SAT essay is to pre-plan the

    examples and evidence you want to use. By preparing a collection

    of reliable examples that can answer most prompts, you'll cut down

    on planning time and significantly increase the amount you can

    write.

    In this article, we give you 6 good SAT essay examples to use thatcan answer nearly every prompt the SAT throws at you. By

    memorizing these examples and practicing writing about them,

    you'll be able to walk into every SAT essay confident.

    Before You Continue

    If you haven't already read our list of every single SAT prompt

    ever given, check it out now. This will give you a good idea of therange of prompts you'll have to prepare for. Then come back to this

    article.

    The 5 Major Categories of SAT Essay

    Prompts 

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    Opinions and ValuesThese questions are about weighing the value of things, including

    the opinions of others.

    > Should people weight all opinions equally, or place more weight

    on informed opinions?

    > Should people pay more attention to the opinions of people who

    are older and more experienced?

    > Should people always value new things, ideas, or values over

    older ones?

    > Should people be valued according to their capabilities rather

    than their achievements?

    > Is it better to be idealistic or practical?> Should books portray the world realistically or idealistically?

    > Can working to reach an objective be valuable even if the

    objective is not reached?

     

    MoralityThese questions are about right and wrong.

    > Are teams or groups beneficial for individuals, or does group

    membership prevent individuals from forming their own moral

     judgments?> Is it best to always suspect that others may have ulterior

    motives?

    > Is it better to decide one's own ideas of right and wrong or follow

    the crowd?

    > Can dishonesty be appropriate in some circumstances?

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    > Can deception have good results?

    > Is it necessary to make mistakes even when it harms others?

    > Are people more motivated by conscience or by money, power,

    and fame?

    > Are bad and good choices equally likely to have negative

    consequences?

     

    Success and AchievementThese questions are about paths and obstacles to achieving goals.

    > Is productivity the result of the demands of others?

    > Is accomplishment the result of freedom to do things one's own

    way?

    > Are important discoveries the result of focusing on one subject?

    > Can any obstacle be turned into something beneficial?

    > Is it better to be consistent or to adapt when circumstanceschange?

    > Is it better to use cooperation or competition to achieve success?

    > Can success to be disastrous?

    > Is success the result of being extremely competitive?

    > Is achievement the result of expecting more of oneself than

    others do of themselves?

    > Is greatness the result of identifying and focusing on one's

    greatest strength?> Is success the result of effort or luck?

    > Does progress or improvement usually involve a significant

    drawback or problem?

    > Is it more important to do fulfilling or high-paying work?

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    > Is the process or the outcome of an project more important?

    > Is a successful community the result of individuals sacrificing

    their personal goals?

     

    Society and CultureThese questions are about the state of modern society.

    > Should people look up to heroes instead of celebrities?

    > Should people look up to celebrities?

    > Should people challenge authority?

    > Should people try harder to maintain privacy?

    > Can average people be better role models than famous people?

    > Do people underestimate the value of community due to our

    culture of individualism?> Is the world changing in a positive way?

    > Is the world actually harder to understand due to the abundance

    of information now available?

    > Do people overvalue getting every detail right?

    > Are people defined by their occupations?

    > Are people too materialistic?

    > Do people value convenience too much?

    > Is most of what people buy totally unnecessary?> Should citizens be more responsible for addressing local or

    national issues?

    > Do changes that make our lives easier not necessarily make them

    better?

     

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    Knowledge, Learning, and CreativityThese questions are about the conditions and situations that lead

    to various kinds of learning and inspiration.

    > Is self-knowledge the result of being forced into action?

    > Do people discover more by exploring the unfamiliar or byexamining the familiar?

    > Is it more effective to learn from others or to teach oneself?

    > Is learning the result of experiencing difficulties?

    > Is self-knowledge the result of interacting with others?

    > Is self-knowledge the result of adversity?

    > Is creativity the result of closed doors?

    > Is the world in need of creativity now more than ever?

    > Does planning interfere with creativity?> Can knowledge be a burden?

    > Do people learn from the past?

    > Is it better always to be original rather than imitating?

    > Are people ever truly original?

    > Is it preferable to care deeply about something or to remain

    emotionally detached?

    > Should people be guided by their feelings when making major

    choices?> Is a person's identity established from birth or developed over

    time?

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    Preselecting Your ExamplesAs you can see, the SAT essay prompts cover a lot of common

    ground. This means that you can have a pretty good idea ahead oftime of what you might see when you open the booklet on test day.

    And because of that, you can prepare yourself with SAT essay

    topics that involve more than one of these issues—we've provided

    some ideas below.

    In the SAT writing examples, we've tried to use books, people and

    events that most high school students are already familiar with.

    Remember that personal examples are just as valid as academicones, but since we don't spy on your life, we don't know what

    personal examples are noteworthy in your life.

    We've chosen 2 books, 2 examples from American History, and 2

    current events that you can use as stellar evidence to support your

    thesis. Play to your strengths - if you like English, you might

    develop more examples in literature. If you're a news buff, you

    might use current events that are on your mind.

    For each example below, we also show you how you can use the

    evidence to support your thesis across a range of prompts. This

    should prove to you how effective pre-planned examples are.

    So, without further ado, onto our list of multipurpose support for

    any SAT Essay prompt.

     

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    Examples from LiteratureBooks are great examples to use since they cover a wide range of

    human experience and social issues. You don't need to have read a

    book to write about it - you just need to understand key points

    about the plot and be able to relate it to the thesis.

     Animal FarmThis short novel written by George Orwell in 1945 is a parable (a

    short story used to illustrate a lesson) about the Russian

    Revolution. It describes a farm's animals banding together to

    overthrow the farmer who exploits their work and products (milk,eggs, etc.) so they can take control of the farm themselves.

    However, the pigs (with specially bred dogs as guards)

    immediately begin scheming to control the farm themselves, and

    ultimately take advantage of the other animals in the same way the

    farmer did.

    This is a literary classic, and for good reason - it touches upon

    many core human struggles. Animal Farm can be used to support

    the following theses, among many others:

    (Opinions and Values) Should people pay more attention to the

    opinions of people who are older and more experienced?

    • Yes; in Animal Farm, the only animal who suspects the pigs'

    deception is Benjamin, the oldest animal on the farm. He tries to

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    warn the other animals that the pigs have sent the loyal horse,

    Boxer, to be killed, but no one listens to him, and the pigs' reign of

    terror continues to go unchecked.

    (Morality) Is it best to always suspect that others may have

    ulterior motives?

    • Yes; the animals in Animal Farm would have been better off if

    they had suspected that the pigs were planning to exploit them.

    (Success and Achievement) Are important discoveries the result of 

     focusing on one subject?

    • No; in Animal Farm, the success of the animals in running the

    farm depends on their ability to teach themselves how to read, do

    math, build structures, and harness electricity, among other skills.

    FrankensteinThis classic novel by Mary Shelley, first published anonymously in

    1818, tells the story of Dr. Victor Frankenstein, who alienates his

    family by following his obsession with animating a man made of

    corpses, creating artificial life for the first time. But he is horrified

    by his creation, and the monster, lonely and miserable, wanders the

    earth, rejected by everyone. He develops anger toward his creator

    and kills Victor's brother, and then Victor's wife, on their wedding

    day. Victor then chases the monster all over the world, trying to

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    kill him, and dies in the process.

    Frankenstein can be used to support the following theses, among

    others:

    (Knowledge, Learning, and Creativity) Is self-knowledge the result 

    of adversity?

    • Yes; Dr. Frankenstein can only understand the horror of artificially

    creating life (or "playing God") after multiple people are killed.

    (Success and Achievement) Can success to be disastrous?

    • Yes; in the first part of the book, Dr. Frankenstein sacrifices

    everything to achieve his goal of bringing his monster to life. But

    as soon as he does, his life becomes more and more miserable until

    he finally dies in the Arctic.

    (Morality) Is it better to decide one's own ideas of right and wrong

    or follow the crowd?

    • Follow the crowd; Dr. Frankenstein ignores everyone's warnings

    that his obsession is dangerous. His creation of the monster is a

    direct result of his deciding for himself what is right and wrong,

    because his obsession clouds his judgment.

     

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    Examples from American HistoryYou've likely learned a lot about American history in school, but afew notable examples stand out as compelling events that you can

    use to support a wide range of prompts.

    The Atomic Bombing of Hiroshima and Nagasaki,

    JapanDuring the last stage of World War II, after Germany surrendered

    to the Allies, Japan refused to surrender. Instead of a military

    invasion of the mainland of Japan, the U.S. decided to end the war

    by dropping two atomic bombs on Japan with no warning: one on

    the city of Hiroshima on August 6, 1945, and the other on the city

    of Nagasaki on August 9. Japan surrendered on August 15, but the

    immediate effects of the explosions killed 90,000–166,000 people

    in Hiroshima and 39,000–80,000 in Nagasaki; about half of the

    deaths in each city occurred on the first day. Over the next few

    months, large numbers of people—mostly civilians—died from

    radiation burns, radiation sickness, and other injuries, exacerbated

    by illness and malnutrition.

    The bombings of Hiroshima and Nagasaki can be used to support

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    the following theses, among others:

    (Knowledge, Learning, and Creativity) Can knowledge be a

    burden?

    • Yes; some of the scientists who worked on the atomic bomb, in

    1945, signed the Szilárd petition, which asked President Truman

    not to bomb Japan without warning. This shows that their

    understanding of the possible effects of the bombs was a burden on

    their respective consciences.

    (Morality) Are bad and good choices equally likely to have

    negative consequences?

    • Yes; the bombings of Hiroshima and Nagasaki caused massive

    civilian casualties, but had the cities not been bombed, many

    Americans and Japanese would have died in further ocean- and

    land-based warfare.

    (Opinions and Values) Should people weight all opinions equally,

    or place more weight on informed opinions?

    • Place more weight on informed opinions; After Pearl Harbor,

    many Americans hated the Japanese and wanted their whole

    country eradicated. But the scientists who understood the awful

    power of the atom bomb had a different view; they were wary of

    dropping it on Japan with no warning. Many fewer civilians would

    have had to die if the concerned scientists had been heeded and the

    Japanese had been warned about the bombings ahead of time.

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    The Life of Frederick DouglassFrederick Douglass (1818-1895) was an African-American social

    reformer, public speaker, writer, and politician. Born a slave in

    Maryland, he taught himself to read and write (despite literacy

    being forbidden to slaves) and eventually escaped to the North. He

    became an important leader of the abolitionist movement through

    his persuasive writing in antislavery publications and the talks he

    gave during his frequent speaking tours. He made it clear thatslaveholders' arguments about slaves' inferior intelligence were

    fabricated and helped see the country through the Civil War and

    out of the era of slavery.

    The life of Frederick Douglass can be used to support the

    following theses, among others:

    (Opinions and Values) Should people be valued according to their

    capabilities rather than their achievements?

    • Yes; Douglass, like many others even today, faced nearlyinsurmountable difficulties in achieving even literacy. For these

    people, opportunities for achievement are rare, and capabilities are

    the only accurate measure of their value.

    (Morality) Can dishonesty be appropriate in some circumstances?

    • Yes; Douglass had to be dishonest with the slaveholders who

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    'owned' him in order to learn how to read and write, because slaves

    were not allowed that privilege. He later had a large influence on

    the abolishment of slavery, so his dishonesty was well worth the

    cost.

    (Success and Achievement) Is productivity the result of the

    demands of others?

    • No; Douglass achieved and an unimaginable amount and published

    a number of books despite the fact that he was a slave and nothing

    at all was expected of him.

     

    Examples of Current Events

    Notable events happen constantly in the news. Many students willpull on these to support their topics, but the key is to understand

    the topics thoroughly and be able to speak beyond a superficial

    level. This will impress the grader since you rise above other

    testtakers.

    The Shooting of Michael Brown in Ferguson, MOThe shooting of 18-year-old Michael Brown occurred on August 9,

    2014, in Ferguson, Missouri, a suburb of St. Louis. Darren Wilson,

    28, a white Ferguson police officer, shot the unarmed teenagerfrom a distance, but it was unclear whether Brown was

    surrendering or threatening Wilson. The unclear circumstances of

    Brown's death, the resulting nationwide protests, and police forces'

    perceived overreaction to the protests all led to a serious national

    debate about law enforcement's treatment of African-Americans in

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    the United States.

    The events surrounding the shooting death of Michael Brown can

    be used to support the following theses, among others:

    (Knowledge, Learning, and Creativity)  Do people learn from the

     past?

    • Yes; despite widespread anger, the protests in Ferguson were

    mostly nonviolent, reflecting the practices of earlier civil rights

    protesters in the U.S. These nonviolent protests successfully led to

    widespread awareness of the growing nationwide law enforcement

    problems of racial profiling and use of excessive force.

    (Success and Achievement)  Is it better to use cooperation or

    competition to achieve success?

    • Cooperation; in the wake of the shooting, conflicts between

    protesters and police in Missouri led President Obama to call for

    funding to support initiatives to support cooperation between

    communities and law enforcement.

    (Morality) Are people more motivated by conscience or by money,

     power, and fame?

    • Conscience; The shooting of Michael Brown brought thousands of

    protesters all over the country onto the streets to make a statement

    against racial profiling and police brutality. Monitored by the

    police themselves, these protests have potential for conflict, but

    people attended them anyway, motivated by their conscience.

     

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    The American Wealth Gap and the 1%In 2014, the Washington Times reported that the top wealthiest 1%

    of Americans hold 40% of the nation’s wealth; the bottom 80%, by

    contrast, hold 7%. Another way to put it is that the "richest 1% in

    the United States now own more wealth than the bottom 90%."

    The top 10% of Americans has 1,000% of (or ten times) the wealth

    of the middle class; that increases another 1000% for the top 1% of 

    Americans. This means that the average employee needs to work

    more than a month to earn what the average CEO earns in one

    hour.

    The wealth gap in the U.S. can be used to support the following

    theses, among others:

    (Success and Achievement)  Is success the result of effort or luck?

    • Luck; most of the wealthiest people in the U.S. were born into

    wealth, and have been lucky enough to have their investments not

    fail. Effort clearly does not factor into the wealth differences

    between a CEO and a minimum-wage worker.

    (Society and Culture) Should people look up to celebrities?

    • No; celebrities, like other super-rich people, have all of their needs

    handled by other people and lead lives that are totally different

    from average people's. To look up to people who are rich because

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    of modeling or acting careers is to compare ourselves to people

    who live in a different world from average people because they

    happen to be beautiful or good at acting.

    (Morality)  Are people more motivated by conscience or by money,

     power, and fame?

    • Power, money, and fame; The wealth gap implies that power and

    money (which are strongly connected, of course) are such powerful

    motivators that, once people become rich, much of their energy

    goes into becoming more rich. This is the only way to build the

    kind of wealth that creates the American income gap: to focus

    completely on what will bring in more money, regardless of the

    consequences.