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Creative Writing for the Prison Population
Presented by Wendy Kibler and Barb Link
[email protected]/[email protected]
AFACCT Conference, January 5, 2012, Montgomery College-Rockville, MD
Session 3.13 (1:50-3:00 p.m.)
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Using our experience in teaching literature at the College of Southern Maryland as a template, we decided to teach creative writing at the county detention center to fulfill certification requirements for the Adjunct Certification Level III Keynote Project.
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St. Mary’s County Detention Center
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The need was there!
Nothing like this project was being employed.
It enhanced the GED program.It gave the residents a healthy
outlet for their feelings and a means to keep their minds active.
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Expectations
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Instructional approach To start each class, we read a poem and discussed
it. Wendy: “Boys” by Wendy Kibler Barb: “Yet Do I Marvel” by Countee Cullen
Residents shared their poems We usually read for them.
Group poems Index cards White board
Individual poems Assigned homework
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Getting started
I used to be…
but now I am…
I used to think…
but now I know…
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Group poemsIndex cardsWhite board
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Musicby Joshua, Aaron, Joseph, Tyron, Brian, Darryl, Dennis, and Errin
Inspirational way of life for a relaxing state of mindChillin’ passing timeExpressing your feelings to cleanse your soulSoothingExcitingRelating to my problemsKeeping me working hardCertain types of music put me in the zoneSounds of different songs in the background soothes my soul from the top all the way downAll music relaxes the mind, body, and the spiritIt’s good and greatIt’s my GodLove to listen to music
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untitledby Markeith, Joshua, Lance, Terry, and Gregory
We do nothing every dayWe look at the wallsListen to what the guards have to sayWe do nothing every dayDay after day after dayEscorted when we walk the hallsWe do nothing every dayWe look at the walls
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Going deeper…Acrostic Poetry
Write your name vertically – put one letter on each line:
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Now, write a line that describes you that starts with that letter.
Sample:
Busy
Always learning
Really loves grandchildren
But hates housework
William Carlos Williams Poem
Method:
Line 1: This is just to say
Line 2: I have _________________ (verb)
Line 3: the ___________________ (nouns)
Line 4: that were/was in/on/out
Line 5: the _________ (noun)
Line 6: and which
Line 7: you were probably
Line 8: saving
Line 9: for _______________ (name or event, like Christmas, dinner, or a birthday)
Line 10: Forgive me
Line 11: It/they was/were ________________ (adjective)
Line 12: so _______________ (adjective)
Line 13: and so ________________ (adjective)
Sample:
This is just to say I have eaten the plums that were in the icebox and which you were probably saving for breakfast
Forgive me they were delicious so sweet and so cold by William Carlos Williams
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Journaling Dream notebooks Morning pages Used as segue into short stories
Describe settings
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Our brief foray into fiction…
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Predictions Read “Powder” by Tobias Wolff Stopped at intervals Residents predicted future events
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Magnets and Mad LibsMagnets
NounsVerbsAdjectivesAdverbs
Mad Libs
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Guest speaker: Wayne Karlin
Brief bio:• Vietnam War
veteran• CSM professor since
mid-1980s• Author of several
novels, including Wandering Souls and Marble Mountain
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Wayne’s presentation Wandering Souls, Chapter 1 “The Man I Killed” by Tim O’Brien The point was to compare reality and
fiction and how you create fiction from reality.
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Back to poetry!
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Form poetry Haiku Cinquain Diamonte
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Slam PoetryOne of the most vital and energetic movements in poetry during the 1990s, slam has revitalized interest in poetry in performance. . . . [W]hile many poets in academia found fault with the movement, slam was well received among young poets and poets of diverse backgrounds as a democratizing force. This generation of spoken word poetry is often highly politicized, drawing upon racial, economic, and gender injustices as well as current events for subject manner (Poets.org, par. 3).
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Resident Reflections How did we do? Asked residents to write a paragraph
about the class.
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A.by Wendy Kibler
A. is a 21-year-old resident in the detention center. He agreed to be interviewed for the purpose of my writing a poem. The following pantoum is comprised of his words.
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A.
Caught my first charge at 10Started smokin’ weed, drinkin’ and partyingArrested 20 times as a juvenileSeen 13 or 14 therapists since I was 11 Started smokin’ weed, drinkin’ and partyingI’ve seen murders, people killed in front of meSeen 13 or 14 therapists since I was 11After caring so much, losing so much, you just don’t care I’ve seen murders, people killed in front of meA lot of my cousins are gang bangersAfter caring so much, losing so much, you just don’t careI can turn homicidal A lot of my cousins are gang bangersI need to get out of hereI can turn homicidalF*** St. Mary’s County, f*** Maryland I need to get out of hereI don’t know how to help myselfF*** St. Mary’s County, f*** MarylandI’ve had hopes and dreams I don’t know how to help myselfArrested 20 times as a juvenileI’ve had hopes and dreamsCaught my first charge at 10
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Reflections and Q&A
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Now you try it!
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“A Brief Guide to Slam Poetry.” Poets.org. National Academy of American Poets, 2012. Web. 3 Jan. 2012.
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