1st draft script

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1 st Draft Script

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1st Draft Script

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• Scene 1: Soundtrack starts     *No speaking, he can put on some music as he goes round bare, empty house, glass with alcohol in & sat on sofa. Picks up pile of post which is on the floor by the letter box, house looks un-lived in* 

Scene 2:     *Gets in car and drives down a long driveway, shows off an isolated location and that the house isn't surrounded by life. As he is leaving, reckless driving, to show he is careless and a bit fearless*

Scene 3:      *Walking down Amersham high street (location), walks past Nicole who is on the phone talking(meeting with boyfriend). They maintain eye contact as they brush past each other. There is recognition there but they don't chat, just hold each others gaze. Slo-motion editing. Shots of other people just walking and doing normal things*

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• Scene 4:     *Flashes and cuts of Nicole in the boot of the car struggling out of being tied and blindfolded, low key lighting and lots of close ups*

Nicole: 'HEEELLPPPP!!!'*Adam turns on soundtrack music*

Scene 5:     *Car along gravel, close up of tires, view from window of driver, going fast along a straight road, flicks to the mirror can see the drivers red eyes in the drivers seat, quickly looks at camera, making the audience jump*

Scene 6:    *Fade to black, spinning room as the boots open from Nicoles perspective, dazed by the light. Cuts to Nicole looking weak and helpless on the floor of 'prison'* 

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• Scene 7:    *Adam in a suit walking with a briefcase, carrying on with life, Nicole dressed and made up like a life-size doll in the prison. Frequent shots for cuts between the two scenes.'

Scene 8:   *Newspaper cuttings flashing up on screen as well as social media sights stating a 'Missing persons'*

Scene 9:    *Nicoles boyfriend goes to where Nicole is captivated to save her, creepy things happen, the place is scary and Adam wears a mask*