What is a run-on?. A run-on is a group of two sentences that do not have any punctuation separating...

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What is a run-on?

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Page 1: What is a run-on?.  A run-on is a group of two sentences that do not have any punctuation separating them. ◦ I like school it is fun. (Incorrect)

What is a run-on?

Page 2: What is a run-on?.  A run-on is a group of two sentences that do not have any punctuation separating them. ◦ I like school it is fun. (Incorrect)

A run-on is a group of two sentences that do not have any punctuation separating them.

◦I like school it is fun. (Incorrect)

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What is a comma splice?

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A comma splice is like a run-on, except the two sentences are joined with a comma.

◦I like school, it is fun. (Incorrect)

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How do I fix comma splice and run-ons?

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Three options:1. Use a period to separate the sentences.2. Use short joining words and a comma to combine the two sentences.3. Use a semi-colon with long joining words to combine the two sentences.

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1. Use a period.

I like school. It is fun.

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2. Use short joining words and a comma to combine the two sentences.

If you do not struggle with comma splice or run on errors, you can use techniques 2 and 3 to create sentence variety in your writing to make your writing more interesting.

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Rule: Two complete related sentences can be joined by a comma and a short joining word.

and, for, but, nor, so, yet, or

I like school, and it is fun.

Short joining words (compound sentence with a conjunction)

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We can think of sentences like a pattern or formula.

I like school, and it is fun. (sentence), short joiner(sentence).

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3. Semi-colon with a long joiner.Rule: Long joining words are preceded by a

semicolon (;) and followed by a comma (,).Long Joiners:

also, anyhow, anyway, besides, consequently, finally, furthermore, however, instead, meanwhile, moreover, nevertheless, next, otherwise, still, then, therefore, thus.

I like school; moreover, it is fun.

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Once again, we can think of this rule as a pattern or formula.

I like school; moreover, it is fun.(sentence); long joiner, (sentence).

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My dad built the biggest sand castle I will probably ever build in my life this thing was about three feet tall and about double that wide, it was one of the greatest beach days I had.

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I also remember my first Fourth of July. It was at one of my dad’s friends house and they were lighting off fireworks and having a fun time, in Florida fireworks are not illegal.

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Well my life before I was five was very fun at times and very boring I guess that all accelerates when you get older and more responsibilities were given to you. I mean for a five year old my life was pretty exciting but it had its ups and downs but isn’t life just like that it just gets more complicated when you get older.

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The sky grew dark eerie silence covered the marsh.

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I want to graduate as soon as possible, I plan to attend both Summer Sessions this year.

 

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I bought ten lottery tickets I do not expect to win anything.

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The shortstop fielded the ball, the shortstop threw to second the game was over.