Writing a ParagraphInstructor: Tahani

Al-Hammami

Steps of Writing 1) Choosing a topic

2) Brainstorming

3) Topic Sentence

4) Outline

5) Draft

6) Second Draft

7) Final Writing

Topic SentenceIntroduction

Supporting Sentences +

ExamplesBody Concluding

SentenceConclusion

1) Choosing a topic

Beaches

2) Brainstorming

Beaches

Summer

-Swimming -Water sports

-Beach games-Relax on sand

Winter

-Less crowded-Walking alone

Sitting with friends around

a fire

3) Topic Sentence

Beaches are fun in summer and in winter.

4) Outline

• TS: Beaches are fun in summer and in winter

• SS1: (Summer) you can swim and do many other water sports

• E.G.1: you can play beach games or relax on the warm sand

• SS2: (Winter) beaches are less crowded, so they are good

places for walking alone

• E.G.2: sitting with a group of friends around a fire

• CS: a beach is a place to have fun.

BeachesBeaches are fun in summer and in winter.[TS] In

summer, you can swim and do many other water sports.

[SS1] If you don't like water sports, you can play beach games

or relax on the warm sand. [E.G. 1] In winter, beaches are

less crowded, so they are good places for walking alone.

[SS2] Also, on a clear winter night, nothing is more fun than

sitting with a group of friends around a fire, talking, laughing,

and singing. [E.G.2] All year round, a beach is a place to have

fun. [CS]

BeachesBeaches are fun in summer and in winter. In summer,

you can swim and do many other water sports. If you don't

like water sports, you can play beach games or relax on the

warm sand. In winter, beaches are less crowded, so they are

good places for walking alone. Also, on a clear winter night,

nothing is more fun than sitting with a group of friends

around a fire, talking, laughing, and singing. All year round, a

beach is a place to have fun.