TED TalkA public presentation by Harvey Fineberg

Evaluated and critiqued by Tucker Roche

Fineberg begins his speech by saying, “How would you like to be better than you are?”

A broad question, but nonetheless listeners are immediately absorbed into his speech, because it is a goal as a person to constantly improve oneself.

Are we ready for neo-evolution?

Engaging the audience

Fineberg states by changing genes that anyone could gain improvement in memory, fitness, beauty, longevity and talent. The audience are captivated by this notion.

Keeping them awake

In order to keep the audiences attention, Fineberg asks people if they could choose, which attribute would they improve?

Now the audience are a part of the discussion because they have a chance to participate in something more than just listening.

The TED Commandments

• Fineberg dreams big. He opens up his speech with a concept that could beneficially change life for all mankind. He knows that his studies are revolutionary and wants to share the possibilities.

ENERGY

The speakers energy

Fineberg spoke confidently, collectively and calmly throughout his speech. He did not choose to use an extensive amount of vigor, but rather he showed a passion for his subject and displayed great knowledge.

On a scale of 1-5, Fineberg would be given a 2.

Its clear that Fienberg had a calm disposition, despite the lack of energy he still remained captivating throughout his delivery.

Wisdom

What has been learned?

There was no doubt that Fineberg was an expert in his field. • He knew his subject• He was confident• He was informative

It was clear that Fineberg had planned out the order of his delivery, from beginning to end allowing the audience to learn as time went on.

Comparison

• Sir Ken Robinson used comedy to retain attention and lighten the mood.

• Fineberg did not do this. With the exception of a few light laughs he stayed focused and got his point across. He was able to do this because his awe-inspiring subject matter.

• Robinsons subjects pertaining to school may not appeal to all. That’s why his addition of jokes captivated the audience.

Friendly Advice

Fineberg knew his subject mater well In order to have a strong presentation the subject must be something well liked by the presenter. This will show through to the audience.

More Advice

• Stay calm on stage, if your comfortable so is your audience and vice versa.

• Practice your presentation so that its order makes sense and the audience are able to learn as your presentation progresses. Do not give information without explanations leading up to it.

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