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by Florida KelderhouseJane Chyun

Snow

by Florida KelderhouseJane Chyun

Snow

by Florida KelderhouseJane Chyun

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What is this wonder soft and white,That falls from the sky on this wintery night?

Cool and sparkling, light as a feather,It makes its appearance in cold winter weather.

 My hair is covered and it's all gray.From my shoulders I brush the crystals away.

My tongue is out, to taste the flakes. 

Here comes the plow, to push it aside,Children on sleds, down hillside they slide.Sweet little birds, they pop up their heads,

They're awakened by snow,that falls on their beds. 

Tree limbs are covered with shimmering white.That look like maidens, dressed with delight.

Their limbs bending, under thick white snow.As if thanking God, for love He's bestowed.

 I look out my window in wonderment.I know that this magic is heaven sent.

I cannot imagine not seeing it fall.

A winter without it, I want not to recall. I never shall leave this wondrous season.

For loving it so is the only reason,I live in this region where it snows.

As in winter time, my small world glows.

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Now listen..

Now listen.. • SNOW - Floria Kelderhouse

Now listen.. • SNOW - Floria Kelderhouse

What is this wonder soft and white,That falls from the sky on this wintery night?

Now listen.. • SNOW - Floria Kelderhouse

What is this wonder soft and white,That falls from the sky on this wintery night?

Cool and sparkling, light as a feather,It makes its appearance in cold winter weather.

Now listen.. • SNOW - Floria Kelderhouse

What is this wonder soft and white,That falls from the sky on this wintery night?

Cool and sparkling, light as a feather,It makes its appearance in cold winter weather.

Now listen.. • SNOW - Floria Kelderhouse

What is this wonder soft and white,That falls from the sky on this wintery night?

Cool and sparkling, light as a feather,It makes its appearance in cold winter weather.

 My hair is covered and it's all gray.From my shoulders I brush the crystals away.

My tongue is out, to taste the flakes.

Now listen.. • SNOW - Floria Kelderhouse

What is this wonder soft and white,That falls from the sky on this wintery night?

Cool and sparkling, light as a feather,It makes its appearance in cold winter weather.

 My hair is covered and it's all gray.From my shoulders I brush the crystals away.

My tongue is out, to taste the flakes.

 Here comes the plow, to push it aside,Children on sleds, down hillside they slide.Sweet little birds, they pop up their heads,

They're awakened by snow,that falls on their beds.

Now listen.. • SNOW - Floria Kelderhouse

What is this wonder soft and white,That falls from the sky on this wintery night?

Cool and sparkling, light as a feather,It makes its appearance in cold winter weather.

 My hair is covered and it's all gray.From my shoulders I brush the crystals away.

My tongue is out, to taste the flakes.

 Here comes the plow, to push it aside,Children on sleds, down hillside they slide.Sweet little birds, they pop up their heads,

They're awakened by snow,that falls on their beds. 

Now listen.. • SNOW - Floria Kelderhouse

What is this wonder soft and white,That falls from the sky on this wintery night?

Cool and sparkling, light as a feather,It makes its appearance in cold winter weather.

 My hair is covered and it's all gray.From my shoulders I brush the crystals away.

My tongue is out, to taste the flakes.

 Here comes the plow, to push it aside,Children on sleds, down hillside they slide.Sweet little birds, they pop up their heads,

They're awakened by snow,that falls on their beds. 

Tree limbs are covered with shimmering white.

Now listen.. • SNOW - Floria Kelderhouse

What is this wonder soft and white,That falls from the sky on this wintery night?

Cool and sparkling, light as a feather,It makes its appearance in cold winter weather.

 My hair is covered and it's all gray.From my shoulders I brush the crystals away.

My tongue is out, to taste the flakes.

 Here comes the plow, to push it aside,Children on sleds, down hillside they slide.Sweet little birds, they pop up their heads,

They're awakened by snow,that falls on their beds. 

Tree limbs are covered with shimmering white.That look like maidens,

Now listen.. • SNOW - Floria Kelderhouse

What is this wonder soft and white,That falls from the sky on this wintery night?

Cool and sparkling, light as a feather,It makes its appearance in cold winter weather.

 My hair is covered and it's all gray.From my shoulders I brush the crystals away.

My tongue is out, to taste the flakes.

 Here comes the plow, to push it aside,Children on sleds, down hillside they slide.Sweet little birds, they pop up their heads,

They're awakened by snow,that falls on their beds. 

Tree limbs are covered with shimmering white.That look like maidens, dressed with delight.

Their limbs bending, under thick white snow.As if thanking God, for love He's bestowed.

Now listen.. • SNOW - Floria Kelderhouse

What is this wonder soft and white,That falls from the sky on this wintery night?

Cool and sparkling, light as a feather,It makes its appearance in cold winter weather.

 My hair is covered and it's all gray.From my shoulders I brush the crystals away.

My tongue is out, to taste the flakes.

 Here comes the plow, to push it aside,Children on sleds, down hillside they slide.Sweet little birds, they pop up their heads,

They're awakened by snow,that falls on their beds. 

Tree limbs are covered with shimmering white.That look like maidens, dressed with delight.

Their limbs bending, under thick white snow.As if thanking God, for love He's bestowed.

 

Now listen.. • SNOW - Floria Kelderhouse

What is this wonder soft and white,That falls from the sky on this wintery night?

Cool and sparkling, light as a feather,It makes its appearance in cold winter weather.

 My hair is covered and it's all gray.From my shoulders I brush the crystals away.

My tongue is out, to taste the flakes.

 Here comes the plow, to push it aside,Children on sleds, down hillside they slide.Sweet little birds, they pop up their heads,

They're awakened by snow,that falls on their beds. 

Tree limbs are covered with shimmering white.That look like maidens, dressed with delight.

Their limbs bending, under thick white snow.As if thanking God, for love He's bestowed.

 I look out my window in wonderment.I know that this magic is heaven sent.

I cannot imagine not seeing it fall.

Now listen.. • SNOW - Floria Kelderhouse

What is this wonder soft and white,That falls from the sky on this wintery night?

Cool and sparkling, light as a feather,It makes its appearance in cold winter weather.

 My hair is covered and it's all gray.From my shoulders I brush the crystals away.

My tongue is out, to taste the flakes.

 Here comes the plow, to push it aside,Children on sleds, down hillside they slide.Sweet little birds, they pop up their heads,

They're awakened by snow,that falls on their beds. 

Tree limbs are covered with shimmering white.That look like maidens, dressed with delight.

Their limbs bending, under thick white snow.As if thanking God, for love He's bestowed.

 I look out my window in wonderment.I know that this magic is heaven sent.

I cannot imagine not seeing it fall.

A winter without it, I want not to recall.

Now listen.. • SNOW - Floria Kelderhouse

What is this wonder soft and white,That falls from the sky on this wintery night?

Cool and sparkling, light as a feather,It makes its appearance in cold winter weather.

 My hair is covered and it's all gray.From my shoulders I brush the crystals away.

My tongue is out, to taste the flakes.

 Here comes the plow, to push it aside,Children on sleds, down hillside they slide.Sweet little birds, they pop up their heads,

They're awakened by snow,that falls on their beds. 

Tree limbs are covered with shimmering white.That look like maidens, dressed with delight.

Their limbs bending, under thick white snow.As if thanking God, for love He's bestowed.

 I look out my window in wonderment.I know that this magic is heaven sent.

I cannot imagine not seeing it fall.

A winter without it, I want not to recall. I never shall leave this wondrous season.

For loving it so is the only reason,I live in this region where it snows.

As in winter time, my small world glows.

About Author

Floria Kelderhouse

• My author is not one of the most famous poets but you might feel and guess her poetries, hobbies and personalities when you read her name. “Floria Kelderhouse”, I really liked her name and her soft poetries.

• She wrote the book called “Friendship Garden” and the poetry book called “Purple Petals of Poetry

Floria Kelderhouse

• Also in her poetries, she has her one experiences and feelings. For example she wrote the stories of her son George who died suddenly at the young age of forty.

• She has own popular website that has her paintings, poets and sewings.

Got 3 awards of her site beautified internet

Link : www.floriasheaven.com

Author’s accomplishments 1

• Sewing :

Author’s paintings

Author’s Handmade Porcelain Dolls

• What thing first hit you in the head when you think of snow???

• Snowman, Skiing, snowboarding, sled, winter, cold, hot chocolate, town covered with snow....

you can imagine this images while you read my poem:)

Snow!

• What thing first hit you in the head when you think of snow???

• Snowman, Skiing, snowboarding, sled, winter, cold, hot chocolate, town covered with snow....

you can imagine this images while you read my poem:)

Overview

Overview

• This is a poem about the winter. If you read the poem carefully, you might notice the author’s feelings and excitements of snow. Also this poem’s last word rhymes in the pairs of two! ( you might know how hard it is to match the words to rhyme by writting Villanelle in the class.)

Poetic Device

Poetic Device• Methaphor

• Simile

• Imagery

• Figurative Language

• Rhyme

• Hyperbole

• Symbolisim

• Personification

“What is this wonder soft and white,

That falls from the sky on this wintery night”

-Shows the image of the snowing in the winter night.

Imagery

“What is this wonder soft and white,

That falls from the sky on this wintery night”

-Shows the image of the snowing in the winter night.

Poetic Device

Poetic Device

Cool and sparkling, light as a feather- shows the appearance and the texture of the snow

snow. It is very light like a feather.

Poetic Device

Cool and sparkling, light as a feather- shows the appearance and the texture of the snow

snow. It is very light like a feather.

Simile 1

Poetic Device

Poetic Device

Simile 2

On roofs it looks like frosting on cake

- shows the image of the snow on the roof which looks like white cake

Poetic Device

“From my shoulders I brush the crystals away.”

- Crystals are symboled as a snow. It is so fun that you can imagine the image of brushing the white snow off from your shoulders.

Poetic Device

“From my shoulders I brush the crystals away.”

- Crystals are symboled as a snow. It is so fun that you can imagine the image of brushing the white snow off from your shoulders.

Symbolism

Poetic Device

“From my shoulders I brush the crystals away.”

- Crystals are symboled as a snow. It is so fun that you can imagine the image of brushing the white snow off from your shoulders.

Symbolism

I really liked this part where the author symboled snow

as a crystals

All the words at the end rhymes with the sound-What is this wonder soft and white,That falls from the sky on this wintery night?Cool and sparkling, light as a feather,It makes its appearance in cold winter weather. My hair is covered and it's all gray.From my shoulders I brush the crystals away.My tongue is out, to taste the flakes.On roofs it looks like frosting on cakes.

Here comes the plow, to push it aside,Children on sleds, down hillside they slide.Sweet little birds, they pop up their heads,They're awakened by snow,that falls on their beds.Tree limbs are covered with shimmering white.

All the words at the end rhymes with the sound-What is this wonder soft and white,That falls from the sky on this wintery night?Cool and sparkling, light as a feather,It makes its appearance in cold winter weather. My hair is covered and it's all gray.From my shoulders I brush the crystals away.My tongue is out, to taste the flakes.On roofs it looks like frosting on cakes.

Here comes the plow, to push it aside,Children on sleds, down hillside they slide.Sweet little birds, they pop up their heads,They're awakened by snow,that falls on their beds.Tree limbs are covered with shimmering white.

Rhyme

Poetic DeviceImageryChildren on sleds, down hillside they slide. Sweet little birds, they pop up their heads, they’re awakened by snow, that falls on their beds. Tree limbs are covered with shimmering white.

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Poetic DeviceImageryChildren on sleds, down hillside they slide. Sweet little birds, they pop up their heads, they’re awakened by snow, that falls on their beds. Tree limbs are covered with shimmering white.

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Let’s go!

Poetic DeviceImageryChildren on sleds, down hillside they slide. Sweet little birds, they pop up their heads, they’re awakened by snow, that falls on their beds. Tree limbs are covered with shimmering white.

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Poetic DeviceImageryChildren on sleds, down hillside they slide. Sweet little birds, they pop up their heads, they’re awakened by snow, that falls on their beds. Tree limbs are covered with shimmering white.

- - gives the reader image of the winter days.

(Children playing, tree limbs and birds.)

Poetic Device• Simile

That look like maidens, dressed with delight

- Shows the image of the tree is covered by the snow

Personification“Their limbs bending, under thick white snow.As if thanking God, for love He's bestowed.”

- Bended Tree under snow, was treated as a person who is praying and thanking to the god.

Personification“Their limbs bending, under thick white snow.As if thanking God, for love He's bestowed.”

- Bended Tree under snow, was treated as a person who is praying and thanking to the god.

* Personification- a poetic device which the object’s action used as a people.

Personification“Their limbs bending, under thick white snow.As if thanking God, for love He's bestowed.”

- Bended Tree under snow, was treated as a person who is praying and thanking to the god.

Poetic Device

Poetic DeviceRhyme 2

Poetic DeviceRhyme 2

Poetic DeviceRhyme 2

Poetic Device

look out my window in wonderment.I know that this magic is heaven sent.

I cannot imagine not seeing it fall.A winter without it, I want not to recall.

Rhyme 2

Poetic Device

look out my window in wonderment.I know that this magic is heaven sent.

I cannot imagine not seeing it fall.A winter without it, I want not to recall. I never shall leave this wondrous season.

For loving it so is the only reason,I live in this region where it snows.

As in winter time, my small world glows.

Rhyme 2

Poetic Device

look out my window in wonderment.I know that this magic is heaven sent.

I cannot imagine not seeing it fall.A winter without it, I want not to recall. I never shall leave this wondrous season.

For loving it so is the only reason,I live in this region where it snows.

As in winter time, my small world glows.

Rhyme 2

Poetic Device

• Symbolic Device

“I know that this magic is heaven sent”

- The author symbols the snow by magic and it’s importance by describing as heaven sent.

• “I know that this magic is heaven sent”

- shows snow by exaggerating as a magic and ‘heaven sent’.

Hyperbole

• “I know that this magic is heaven sent”

- shows snow by exaggerating as a magic and ‘heaven sent’.

Hyperbole

• “I know that this magic is heaven sent”

- shows snow by exaggerating as a magic and ‘heaven sent’.

• The tone of this poem is both exhilaration and shadowy tones. If you read the poem, you might get the scenes of quiet, warm winter night. On the other hand the last few stanzas has the fun and high tones. For example, the author describes the snow as a magic and uses the scenes of children sliding and sweet little birds.

Tone

• The tone of this poem is both exhilaration and shadowy tones. If you read the poem, you might get the scenes of quiet, warm winter night. On the other hand the last few stanzas has the fun and high tones. For example, the author describes the snow as a magic and uses the scenes of children sliding and sweet little birds.

Why this??• While I was choosing the poem, I wanted

to have a poem that is easy to present visually. The theme “snow” and the author’s word choices made me to choose this poem. Also I found many sympathies and similarities with the author. We both love snow and winter!

That look like maidens, dressed with delight.

Their limbs bending, under thick white snow.As if thanking God, for love He's bestowed. I look out my window in wonderment.I know that this magic is heaven sent.

I cannot imagine not seeing it fall.A winter without it, I want not to recall. I never shall leave this wondrous season.

For loving it so is the only reason,I live in this region where it snows.

As in winter time, my small world glows.

What is this wonder soft and white,

That falls from the sky on this wintery night?

Cool and sparkling, light as a feather,It makes its appearance in cold winter

weather. My hair is covered and it's all gray.

From my shoulders I brush the crystals away.My tongue is out, to taste the flakes.

On roofs it looks like frosting on cakes. Here comes the plow, to push it aside,

Children on sleds, down hillside they slide.Sweet little birds, they pop up their heads,

They're awakened by snow,that falls on their beds.

 Tree limbs are covered with shimmering white.

Another poem about Snow

Another poem about Snow

Dust of Snow

Robert Frost

The way a crow shook down on meThe dust of snowFrom a hemlock tree

Has given my heartA change of moodAnd saved some partOf a day I had rued.

Another poem about Snow

Dust of Snow

Robert Frost

The way a crow shook down on meThe dust of snowFrom a hemlock tree

Has given my heartA change of moodAnd saved some partOf a day I had rued.

I think this poem symbolled snow as a hope which

changes a mood and gives hope from the faults.

Visual Representation

Explanation of video

• While I was thinking the way to present snow, on Saturday, magically, it was snowing outside! I flimed this video on the first floor of my apartment. My younger brother acted with me and mom recorded it. It was so cold (esp. the part where I put snows on my shoulders and head) but it was fun and I also felt ashamed when people passing me was watching us weirdly. Also because my camera wasn’t able to upload the sound, I had to re rerecorded. ( There will be some parts that doesn’t match with my pronounce) I tried to show the words one by one and used objects to present it.

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