Post on 23-Dec-2015
Caption Writing
Telling Stories With Photography
What Is A Caption?
• A short description or title accompanying an illustration in a printed text
• Also called a “cutline”• Can draw attention to something not
obvious• It provides the context for a picture by
answering the 5W’s • Caption writing involves interviewing,
drafting, rewriting and editing
Types of Captions
• Basic– Describes the moment captured in the
photo– One sentence written in present tense
• Expanded– Answers the 5W’s with background
information and/or a quote– Two or more sentences• First sentence is in present tense• Subsequent sentences are in past tense
We write expanded with 3!
Lead-ins
• Lead-ins are headlines for your caption• Consist of attention-grabbing words or
phrases• Depending on your publication, can be
alliterative or descriptive–We are either one
• Are no more than three words– Sparkling Skyscraper–Warning Web– Academic Achiever
Caption Writing Must-Do’s
• Avoid stating the obvious – Tell the reader something they can’t see by
looking at the photo– Captions that include “looking into the
camera” or “posing for a photo” will earn an F
• Identify all people in the picture who are seen clearly
• Using quotes in a caption adds a personal voice
Let’s Do One
Before you start
•Interview people in the photo as well as those associated with the activity– The director, other
actors, backstage workers, the audience
•Make sure you know when the photo was taken along with who took it
Sentence 1: What are the 5w’s?
•Using first and last names, identify everyone in the photo (up to five)•Accurately describe the action in the photo using the 5Ws•Make sure that verb is present tense!
Sentence 1: What are the 5w’s?
•Who: – Ineke Sproet (11) playing afflicted
teenager Betty Parris, Taylen Bellow (11) playing housekeeper Tituba and Chelsea Haynes (12) playing manipulative neighbor Abigail Williams
•What: – Pretending to be possessed by
witchcraft during the RPHS production of “The Crucible”
•When: – November•Where: – RPHS•Why: – To rebel against their strict
religious society
Heeeeeere’s….Sentence 1!
Betty Parris, portrayed by Ineke Sproet (11),
Tituba, played by Taylen Bellow (11)
and Abigail Williams, portrayed by Chelsea Haynes (12), fall into
fits during the November
presentation of “The Crucible.”
The verb is “fall”
Let’s write Sentence 2!•Write another sentence in past tense that contains additional information•Tell the reader something they cannot see•Get the inside scoop and appeal to the intelligent, curious reader– That means dig up some
good stuff!
Heeeeeere’s….Sentence 2!
The Arthur Miller play dramatized the
Salem witch trials of 1692.
Arthur miller is the playwright
The verb is “dramatized”
Let’s write Sentence 3!•Include any pertinent supplemental information•It can include a quote– Quotes should always be split– Quotes should always use
“said”•Quote attribution depends on the publication– “Attribution” is who said the
quote– We use FIRST LAST on first
reference, and LAST on subsequent references
– This applies to teachers as well
Heeeeeere’s….Sentence 3!
“The Crucible is a difficult
production,” said director Brook
Aurand. “I am so proud of the hard work our students
put in.”
Split quote includes part before the attribution and part after
“said director brook aurand” is the attribution
Let’s write the lead-in!
•Write down some words that are represented in the photo– Theatre– Crucible–Witchcraft– Salem–Manipulation– Puritan
Lead-In ideas
Puritan ParadoxManipulative MaidensWicked WitchcraftInvented IllnessReligious RebellionAfflicted Agitators
Put all three together•Sentence 1– Betty Parris, portrayed by Ineke
Sproet (11), Tituba, played by Taylen Bellow (11) and Abigail Williams, portrayed by Chelsea Haynes (12), fall into fits during the November presentation of “The Crucible.”
•Sentence 2– The Arthur Miller play dramatized
the Salem witch trials of 1692. •Sentence 3– “The Crucible is a difficult
production,” said director Brook Aurand. “I am so proud of the hard work our students put in.”
Final CaptionPURITAN PARADOX Betty
Parris, portrayed by Ineke Sproet (11), Tituba, played by Taylen
Bellow (11) and Abigail Williams, portrayed by Chelsea Haynes
(12), fall into fits during the November presentation of “The Crucible.” The Arthur Miller play
dramatized the Salem witch trials of 1692. “The Crucible is a
difficult production,” said director Brook Aurand. “I am so proud of the hard work our students put
in.”
What’s Wrong With This Caption?
Amanda Guijosa, Allen Barahona and
Amelia Alvarez pause to take a
photo during the yearbook
holi powder shoot. “pause to take a
photo”…tell the reader something they don’t know!
Where are their grades?
Where is the supplemental information? No quote?
Where is the lead-in?
What’s Wrong With This Caption?
Taking photos before prom,
Leanne Hrebenar (12) smoothed out date Justin Farrar’s
hair. “I wanted him to look
perfect for our photo,” she said.Where is his grade?
“smoothed” is past tense. The first sentence should only be present tense.
Where is the lead-in?
What’s Wrong With This Caption?
Varsity cheerleader
Mackenzie Bramlett (11)
acknowledges the crowd as she is
introduced during the Tomball game.
Bramlett also takes gymnastics.
Second sentence should always be in past tense
Where is the lead-in?
Does this sentence help tell the story?
Assignment 1: caption writing
• Using the captions on the next page, identify what is incorrect about each and write a new, correct caption– Don’t forget the captions do’s and don’t’s
and AP style
• Create a Word document titled [last name] captions 1 and save to your H drive. Submit to Mrs. J via Google Drive
• Assignment is due at midnight on Monday, January 12, 2015
“Captions 1” assignment1. A giant Uncle Sam balloon
marched down 6th Avenue during the Macy's Thanksgiving Day Parade. This marks the 87th year for the annual New York event.
2. A woman looks at what is left of her home after it was destroyed during a tornado in Washington, Ill., on Nov. 19. Rescue workers were combing through the wreckage in the wake of a fast-moving storm that killed eight people in two states.
Assignment 2: caption writing
• Select five photos that you took yourself or are from an event that you took place in
• Insert each photo into a Word document• Based on what you know about the 5Ws in
the photo, write an expanded caption– Make sure to include a quote
• Title your document [last name] captions 2 and save to your H drive
• Submit to Mrs. J via Google Drive by midnight Tuesday, January 13, 2015